~Kurbaan Huin~MG(PART7-PG19)

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hey buddies.. its me isha..as u knw that i am having my exam thats why i am not able to update my strysand new news for u is after my exam i am going on a holiday. so i wil not be able to upload my any story till mid-july,but dont worry once i wil be back i wil update it.but i wil be updating my new story til then.through my mobil. so 2nd new stry as follows


~Kurbaan Huin~

she loved me crazily.she loved me unconditional and i...


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INDEX-
INTRO-Pg1
PART1-PG2
PART2-PG3
PART3-PG7
PART4-PG11
PART5-PG12
PART6-PG14
PART7-PG19

plz plz do comment and tel me.. 😃
(buddies tel me what are your view about this one) 😊




Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago
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INDEX

intro-soon

(plz tel me how is this one)
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INTRODUCTION

i was walking i my house which is situated between the forest,i hated emotion,for me everything is my work and profit.i alway do that thing which give me profit.i was walking when i looked of my window.i saw her shivering i cold and sitting near tree.i told her to go away but she never listen i told her this wil give nothing but stil.she was badly shivering.i walked towards door to give something warm but i stopped and throw it and told my self "it hardly matter" and walked away
do u like?
Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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loved the intro...

waiting for update

do cont.soon

TFPM



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Loved the part a lot...
geet s madly in love with maan...
and maan s ignoring her..
poor geet..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its sound interesting. update soon
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Superb start I hope maan profit k liye kisi aur se shaadi na karle plz update soon and pm me
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PART-1

next day

me and my team walked out of the house...meera said "maan udhar dekho"...i saw that geet has a smile on her face and walking towards us..i walked and didnt care and said "udhar dekhne ke liya kuch nahi hain"..as i moved geet came in front of me and said while having tears "maan i love you...mein humshe apke saath huin...apke entazaar kar rahi huin"..i closed my eye and said "cut the crap out geet..i know you are here to take revenge..but i will not happen..go away from here"..i heard geet saying "maan ap jo chaiya kariya par apne se durr jaane ki saza mat dejiya..mein yahin sahi huin.."..i said "whatever" and moved as i moved i heard sound of something falling..i turned back and saw geet fallen..i said "nautanki..chalo"..i heard meera "maan ye tum kya kaha rahe ho..usne 2din se kuch bhi nahi khaya hain..voh behoosh ho gayi hain.." i angrily said "tho kya karun uske aga peecha ghumun.." i heard meera saying "esko endar le chalo"..i said "nahi ye mera ghar mein nahi gaye gi"..i heard meera"tho thiek hain..esa peecha vala room me le gao..aur kuch khane ke le kar ayo"..i said "what ever"..and moved inside m y house

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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PART-2

i bashed my hand into the wall...and blood started ozzing out...i felt feel the pain...i remember how it all started...i remember the day when i first met her...because IT WAS PLANED AND IT WAS START OF MY GAME...

geet entered the cafe.. i know that geet will sit on 2nd table..because it was her permanent place...i already came 20 min before...and sat on same table...she came in dressed simple but heavenly...she came towards the table..and looked towards me angrily...and said "hey you!!you are sitting on my place..can't you see its reserved"..i smriked as i was knowing it was reserved..but it was easy to tackle that..i just gave some money to waiter..i picked the reserved board up and throw it away and said "i didnt see any boards miss"..she stared me with big eyes and said "hey hello..u just thrown it"..i gain said
"whats the proof miss"..i saw her irritated and i heard her "hey mr dont act smart and just move"..i shouted "manager"..the manager came..i thought "how innocent she didnt know that i have made upto manager also"..he came running and said "yes sir any problem??"..i said "ask her to leave rite now"...the manager asked geet "what is the problem maam"..

i heard geet saying "look..this seat is reserved for me mr..and i want to sit here"..i heard manager say "maam why are you making fuss out a seat...there are so many seat..you can sit any where"...i heard geet saying "you..just ask him to go to any other seat..not me"...my first step is sucesseding

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MY 1ST NEW STRY PART UPDATED DO CHECK-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3011604/my-strange-love-story-mg-part-7-pg9

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