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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fantastically updated. Now you have

created an eagerness to know what's

next please update soon as you

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting.. how maan can be so cold towards Geet.. Poor angel in pain😭
pls update the next part soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome upd...
i m wondering y maan behaving lik dat
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part-6

As I moved forwards..my heart beat started increasing like something is wrong…I reached near the edge..as I was going to give my myself to lap of river… I felt someone encircling me in his embrace..i looked to the source who saved me..i cried and said "vikram"…he put me in his warm embrace and said "shh..geet..nothing happened..shh.."..suddenly I felt my eyes closing and my duppata touched the dust of hill edge..last thing I heard is scream of vikram "geet"..and he picked her up…

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We reached the the river stream..meera ran somewhere..i also ran behind her…she picked something and started crying. I saw geet dupatta..i heard meera say while crying "are you happy now maan ??..the person who loved you the most has left you today..are you happy?? Finally she left.." and she cried …I feel down on my knees and snatched the dupatta and embraced it..tears escaped from my eyes..and I cried..i heard meera say "why are you crying maan…this is what you always wanted..and you hated her right..now you should be happy.lets celebrate..but how will I face yash now maan ?? tell me..you killed and innocent angle"…I cried and said "I loved her meera I always loved her, KURBAAN HUIN uski mohabaat mein..ye zindagi usiki tho hain meera..ussi kit ho hain …"..i heard meera " you are lieing..you are a killer" I said "no meera I am not..i loved her..this cold behaviour was for her own good…how can I let her be closer to me..i am a devil..i kill people..thousand are behind me to kill me…if they have come to know about geet..they would have harm her..how can I see her harmed..i wanted her to leave me like a bad past and start a new and fresh life..and about me..i will just cherish her sweet memory ..i wanted to see her happy.."..i heard meera " maan you are wrong..she can only be happy with you..with you do you understand that…but now this stupid talk have no meaning..she is gone..now you will in guilt"

I said "meera mein kya karta…tumhe tho ye bhi nahi pata ki mein usse bahut phele se pyaar karta huin..sirf yash jaanta tha..meri mohabaatt ke depth ke bare mein"

And I continued " kaise mein choori choori sko dekhta tha..ek baar usse ankho mein notice ana chahata tha..lekin agar voh sab nah huin hota tho yash humare pass hota..hum ye paln ne banate..geet meri zindagi mein tab ati..aur mein aj geet ko nah kota..aj se meri zindagi kahatam hogayi..maan khatam hogaya..bacha tho bas maan singh khurana"

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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
geet loves hum so much...

but y did maan do this to her...

continue soon..

thnx for PM..

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so maan also loves her...but he wanted to be away from her to protect her...

but now vikram has her...

continue soon,..
Edited by jyoti_l - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
SO MAAN ALSO LOVED AND JUST WANTED TO SAVE HER
BUT NOW VIKRAM HAS HER
HOW WILL THEY MEET AGAIN
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Posted: 13 years ago
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maan too loved her.. nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the update...
this vikram 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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okay dont be silly geet trying to kill yourself
good she survived but maan dont know that oops
sorry for not commenting earlier just caught up with it
cheers for pm

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