MG FF: fight for love and more pt 4/5 pg 88 19/7 - Page 12

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waiting for the update 😍
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Jyothi and Mona 🤗...awesome charater sketch...loved the pics u used...plz keep Geet safe...waiting for the update ...thank u for the PM 😊

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PART-1

Maan is confused now rather say his doubt is taking life now..."love u too jaan"..geet quickly disconnected the call n sobbed...she then looked up n realised that men left the room n she is alone there..she briskly typed the message as 911391441147518

And sent it to maan ..she deleted it n acted normal when she saw that man entering the room again...







He rudely snatched the mobile from her n tied ropes again..she just kept mum while tears continuosly flowed down her cheeks but there is some ray of hope in her eyes as she suceeded in messaging her maan..






Geet(st):maan plz come soon...iam really very scared..plz save me...plz maan'....geet thought as she is expecting him to come n rescue her...





Here maan is surprised to receive a message from geet...he just now spoke with her n her immediate message brought life for his doubt..he briskly opened the message just to find some number typed in it and i.e, 911391441147518





Maan:what's this??why geet sent me a number..it is not even a mobile number as it contains more than ten digits...what's this actually???he is trying to figure out the meaning n then suddenly he remembered something...

------flashback---------


Maan is sitting along with vikas, geet n his family...they are chatting n having fun...geet who sat besideroshni(geet's mom) is signalling maan with her eyes but maan nodded in no..she again signalled him n he did the same...she picked her mobile n sent him the message as...

3 15 13 15 20 15 13 25 18 15 15 13





Maan read it n understood...he again nodded..geet glared at him n went inside showing him fake anger...maan nodded his head in disbelief smiling at her..he is about to get up but vikas stopped him asking where he is going..he also saw the message but didn't understand anything..maan said he wants to call someone n excused himself..





As soon as he entered her room she closed the door n stood glaring at him n pouting her lips with crossed arms...maan smiled n took her in his embrace for which she protested first but later gave in...




Maan:hmm bolo wat u want to say this urgently...



Geet:go..i wont tell u...why didn't u come immediately...she freed her self from his embrace n turned her face pouting her lips..



Maan:sorry jaan...everyone is there na then how can I come like that?now leave it ...I know my jaan wont be angry with me tell me wat u want to say...he said kissing her cheek...




She smiled n turned to him.."maan u know I got admission in mumbai university'iam so happy maan'u know that too in best college she said while hugging him by waist...



Maan is shocked n made sad face as he don't want his jaan to go away from him..geet understood it n smiled'"maan plz just for sometime na...u know na I want to become a fashion designer n that is my dream...wont u support me..she said making faces'





Maan smiled n took her in his embrace kissing her forehead'..."no jaan ur maan is always with u...u know na I cant stay away from u..it's ok u r here na(he placed her palm on his heart) it's ok...tumhare liye itna toh kar saktha hoon na'geet smiled n hugged him tight'




Maan:accha ye batao y u send me message always in ur code language cant u send directly in english...tumhare liye muje saare alphabets ke numbers memorise karna pada...




Geet:hmm very good..dekha geet kapoor teached u a new language'...she giggles...maan I use code language becoz I don't want others to know anything between us..u know me n my friend use this language in class so that no one can understand wat we are discussing'



"hmmm miss.geet kapoor,the genius"said maan for which she giggled n hugged him'

-----end of flashback------

Maan quickly had a look at numbers and is shocked to see wat she sent...she sent "IAM IN DANGER" using her code language...maan is shocked..he felt that earth slipped down from his feet..he sat on bed in shock...his jaan,his geet is in danger n he don't know it...how come he didn't know it??he sensed something wrong when he spoke to her but why he didn't ask her immediately..tears rolled down his cheeks but he quickly wiped them..





"no this is not the time to think how it happened n how I failed to know...I should save her..ha I have to found her..if she is in danger then why she spoke like that??thousands of questions roamed in his mind but he failed to find answer for even a single question...




"no it's waste to sit here n make my own estimations..i have to go there..jaan don't worry iam coming..ur maan is coming there to save his life'said maan n picked his mobile to call vikas..




"vikas i have to go to mumbai now (maan is in delhi guys) ..u plz take care of that case..i cant explain u the reason now..but don't worry nothing is serious..will inform u after my return"maan said in one go n disconnected the call'




Vikas didn't say anything as he knows that maan frequently goes like this n he always have the perfect reason which he explains after wards..so he didn't suspect anything wrong'



Maan(st):sorry vikas..i cant say u anything about geet now becoz I don't know where she is n in which condition she is..if I tell you now u wont be calm..i know ur anger...if the one who brought her in trouble may hurt her..no no I cant take any risk..plz forgive me vikas...



Maan informed daadi about his visit but didn't say correct reason..he said that he is going on some official work n left the place..he even assured that no one could know about this becoz everyone gets alert when the most strict cop maan singh khurana moves even an inch..he disguised himself in another avatar which is very simple...very different from maan singh khurana..so no one payed attention to him at airport otherwise he would have surrounded with media asking lakhs of question where he is going??who is his next target n what is the case bla bla bla...he already made estimations about the intensity of danger from geet's voice n her messaging to him..so he decided to not to take any risk'


On the otherside'

Man1:how many days you want to do that simple thing???dont u want her alive??


Man2:no!!dont u dare to touch her...I said na I'll do it'I need time..cant u understand it's not that easy'.he is most wanted criminal n here he is the cop who is taking care of this case..u don't know how risky it is'u all will be killed if I spit out a single word..



Man1:oh so u r warning us now'chalo Iam releasing u from ur duty n i promise to send her body in million pieces'


Man2:no plz..plz understand me..i need a little time..plz iam requesting u..



Man1:ok'jo bhi karna hai jaldi karo..this is the last chance iam giving u'rememeber if u even try to act smart then'



Man2:no no I wont plz don't harm her'



With that he disconnected the call..the man2 is sweating badly and there were tears in his eyes..he sobbed silently rather say helplessly'he washed his face n came out from the washroom'


@airport:

Maan already requested airport people to keep everything in secret..as his friend is working there it was easy for him to do that'he never asked for recommendations..watever he did was on his own'he never took anyone's help but today he needed it not for him but to rescue his jaan'.maan stepped inside the flight with a hope to find her soon n bring back safe..



He sat in his place remembering her call,her chocked voice the way she said "I love u maan" her message which states she is in danger killed him inside'


---falshback----

"jaan what's this??cant u take care of ur self??see how ur hand is bleeding"said maan worriedly looking at her cut..


Geet:ofo maan..it's just a small cut..why u r over reacting???


Maan:just shut up!!u very well know that I cant even tolerate a small scratch on u..see wat u did to my life..(indicating her)said maan while geet noticed his filled eyes'


She hugged him encircling her hands around his neck.."maan why u love me so much'I know u are very protective for me but I don't want to be ur weakness..i want to be ur strength..what if anything happens to me n i...




Before she could complete maan broke the hug and covered her mouth with his palm nodding in no.."no jaan don't say like that'I wont let anything happen to u'every problem should face ur maan before it comes to u'and ha u r my weakness at the same time my strength too'don't u dare to say like this again..samji'"


Geet nodded in tears n hugged him tight'.

---ends-----

A tear escaped from his eyes when he remembered his promise to her that he'll face the trouble before it could reach her but today she is in danger n he failed to be there with her,his jaan..



Maan(st):iam sorry jaan..ur maan failed to keep up his promise but I also promise u that I'll find u n get back safely'kuch bhi karoonga par tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga'ha jaan I promise'



The mere thought that his geet is in danger angered him and his eyes became red in anger.. and his hand turned into a fist. He is thinking where might geet be. And at the same time he is thinking of those people who hurted his geet. But suddenly an idea popped in his mind and smirked.

so friends how is the part1..hope we reached ur expectations..😕

if not we are sorry😭

Precap:


maan in mumbai'😉😉

does he came to know where geet is?

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
loved it
going to love dis ff for sure
wht a starting
geet intellignece
ufff


maza aa gya
finally maan come to know abt geet life is in danger




awsome



update next soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg...its awesum...
so dat was a code language...so here is d benefit of reading all alphabets wid dere numbers...
maan hadn't told about dis to anybody...hope he will able to find her...
who r does men...well i m sure dey want deir criminal friend to b free...
bt who was dat guy who was crying n pleading not to do anything to geet...
hmmm...i luv'd it's suspence...
oh so maan went to mumbai to search geet bt how cum he will abl to find her in dat crowded city...

d start is awesum n full dhamakedar...
waiting for nxt one...

Edited by khushi1022 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update...
Loved their code word...
Maan's life starts with geet and ends with her...
Who s that man in washroom?
Waiting for maan's plan...
Gud work jo and mona...
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWSOME UPDATE. WHAT A STORY LOVED IT

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