MG FF: fight for love and more pt 4/5 pg 88 19/7

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Hiii friends... we are again here with a new FF on our MANEET... 😃
r u all confused with WE??? 😕 dont worry its again ME(JYOTHI) AND MONA...
Do u all remember the SS: THE JOURNEY... with all ur support we r again here with a thrilling yet love story... 😃
So r u guys r ready for this story??














PROLOGUE:




A young man in his 25's is pacing in his room..his face is completelt filled with tension'he is trying to call someone but not getting response from other person..

"jaan plz pick up the phone..plz jaan" he said while hearing her caller tune'but he got no response this time too..he dialed the no again.."pick up pick up pick up the phone damit" he shouted in frustation'.he brushed his hair in tension n his face is showing worried expressions clearly'

A woman in her 80's entered his room smiling.."ofooo MAAN bete kya baat hai..why u are tensed now??"she asked him while placing his coffee mug on the table..


maan: daadi maa dekhiya na..she is not attending my call..iam tensed daadi..she used to call me 20 times atleast in a day but she didn't called me since 2 days..

daadi: don't worry bete..she must be busy with her new friends n her college..nayi jagah hai na..it takes some time to adjust'she'll be finen bete don't worry'.she said in concerned tone..

maan: I hope so..

daadi caressed his hair, wished him good night n left the room'

a girl in her 22's is sleeping like a baby pouting her lips..she's hugging her big pinky teddy'.there is a slight smile on her face'

"ofooo..kya karu mein is ladki ka..she slept again with empty stomach" said rano who entered the room'"geet beta ut jaa'.chalo khana kha kar so jao..one should not sleep with empty stomach " rano said while patting her shoulder to wake her up'

But there is no response from her'she struggled for a while n finally fed up.."ofooo mein bhool gayi thi ki ye khumbkaran ki bhadi behen hai..kitna soothi hai ye ladki..geet beta ut jaa..ur papa is waiting for u there" rano made final attempt n she suceeded this time but not fully..

"mama sone dona..."geet mumbled'

"beta plz wake up now..just have little and then sleep again"her papa pleaded now'she finally got up yawning'she hugged her teddy n yawned again.."papa I don't feel hungry now"she mumbled pouting her lips..

"today there is something special in dinner and that is golgappe..dont u feel hungry still now??" her bro vikas said who just entered the room..

Geet eyes widened in excite ment'"ummm'golgappe"she said in excitement'

Vikas came to her n kissed her forehead while sitting beside her'"I know my princess will never get bored with golgappe n u love it" vikas said caressing her hair'

"awww'love u bhai..u r the best" she said hugging him tight'

"now chalo chalo iam hungry'"he said n pulled her to step down from bed holding her arm..she lazily stepped down but yawned again.."chalo jaldi fresh hokar bahar aaja..we are waiting" vikas said'geet nodded like an obedient student..then they all left the room..

After few minutes of their waiting also geet didn't come out'finally vikas entered the room n is shocked to see geet sleeping again on her stomach'he one hand is below her head n other is hugging her teddy..

"hawww geet ki bacchi..kese so rahi hai kumbkaran ki tarah'ruk abhi dikhata hoon"he said while placing his hand on his waist..

He went inside the washroom,brought bucket full of water n threw on her without any second thought'

Geet jerked with this n got up suddenly with her mouth open'she opened her eyes which were clsoed tight till now n is shocked to see four men standing in front of her'

She looked around in that dark room just to realise that she is dreaming about her family,she then looked at herself..her legs were tied with a rope,and her hands were also tied but at her back'she is leaning towards a wall..her face is covered with sweat totally..

One of the men started approaching her n geet got scared..she tried to move back but her tied legs were not helping her ..she wanted to shout"stay away plz don't come to me" but her mouth is also tied with a cloth'fear is clearly visible in her eyes n tears were rolling down her cheeks continously'he came to her n opened her cloth which was tied to her mouth..

As soon as he opened it..geet started coughing'she is panting very badly n her voice is not supporting her to speak'he handed her a phone while other realesed her hands which were tied..

She first didn't take it n looked at him terrified.."aise kya goor rahi ho..lo"he shouted..geet quickly did what he said.."u have 20 missed calls from maan..now call him n speak to him..and ha use kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye samji..speak to him casually as if nothing has happened..zyada zaban chalane ki ya chalaki dikane ki koshish bhi ki na maar dalunga'not only u I'll kill him also'samji"

Geet nodded with terrified expressions.."no I wont tell him anything plz u don't do anything to him"she pleaded..she then dailed maan's number'

Here maan who was craving to hear his jaan's voice felt like jumping when he saw his caller id "jaan"..he immediately received it.."hello jaan..how are u???are u ok??why didn't u call me since two days??dont u understand how others will be worried when u don't inform about ur arrival?tum itna irresponsible kab se bangayi'jaan u don't know I almost died not heraing u since 2 days" maan said with out any full stop'here geet who heard maan's voice after 2 days started sobbing closing her mouth so that he could not hear her'here the men warned her again with his expressions..geet nodded n wiped her tears'"jaan what happened???why u r silent now??is everything ok??"maan asked worriedly..

"ha ha maan..iam ok..tum chance dogi tab mein baat karungi na..iam absolutely fine n don't worry everything is ok here..i was busy with college n friend here..so didn't call u..sorry galti hogay"geet said in low tone which is not at all her nature..maan sensed something wrong.."geet sach bolo kya huwa??is everything ok??"maan asked'

Geet is shocked to hear this..she looked at the man who stood little far away from her..reamaining three mwn left the room.."ha maan mein teek hoon..sach mein"she replied..

Maan: accha teek hai..u have to call me daily ok'I don't want this irresponsible behaviour now samji'

Geet: hmm'

Maan smiled n said "ok now bye then..take care ha"'he is about to disconnect the call but geet called maan..maan'

Maan:ha jaan bolo..

Geet: I love u maan'said n sobbed but supressing the sound of her sob..

Maan is confused now rather say his doubt is taking life now'"love u too jaan"..geet quickly disconnected the call n sobbed'she then looked up n realised that men left the room n she is alone there..she briskly typed the message as 911391441147518

And sent it to maan ..she deleted it n acted normal when she saw that man entering the room again'

So guys what did that message mean??Who are they??where is geet??

so guys this is the prologue.. how did u find it? Plz tell us whether to continue this or not'


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love

-jyothi, mona


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_Jyothi_ thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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MY WORKS ON MANEET:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2767145/jyothis-maneet-world-updated-pg2-03-03


MONA'S WORKS ON MANEET:



MONA'S MAANEET WORLD
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
meena.. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new ff
awesome concept
continue soon
dolly10 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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intersting concept
loved it
please continue soon
sdlife19 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just awesome yaar..
where is geet who are they
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratulation for new FF dear
awesome and brilliant start
maan is so worried for his geet
here geet dreaming about her family
for once I thought such a cute thing
later got it that she kidnapped by some men
but y and who kidnapped her
they allow her to call maan but just to say lie
but later geet send a msg to maan
few no's there but what is this
interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow cngrts 4 new ff
its awsmm
kya baat hai frst part mai hi geet kidnap.. haww...😲😲
intrstng...
cont soonnn
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start
who are those men and what do they want?
what is the message geet typed to maan?
hope maan rescues her
please update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting prologue dear...

loved it...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt update...

n thank u very much fr d lovely ff...

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