**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #4 IMP NOTE on page 151 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
ur ff has sweet sexy romantic flavour puts smile on my face read in one go geetfinding maan hoty in shower maneet in shower lol dadi asking maan not be naughty lol date was really hot maan feeding geet eating from her lip aaaw so sweet keep up the good work
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Haye Babaji! Meri Geet ko rula diya... Dusht daanav kahin ka... Aur usse bhi badi devil achi khaasi inki romantic date ko adventurous bana diya... Bechara Maan nw he have to manofy his Jaan which i knw he'll do perfectly wid his love... Hai na! Jaldi se update de do pls... Me waiting

p.s. I'll mish u... Pleashe come back shoon...

ab maan ne rulaya hai toh manayega bhi toh wahi na...dont worry i will make maan bend on his knees for geet...n first toh adventurous hi hoga na jab woh maneet ka ho...
will miss u too...love u😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetie25

ur ff has sweet sexy romantic flavour puts smile on my face read in one go geetfinding maan hoty in shower maneet in shower lol dadi asking maan not be naughty lol date was really hot maan feeding geet eating from her lip aaaw so sweet keep up the good work

thanks dear...glad u liked it...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
waitinggg for update...when will u give
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi dear enjoy ur holidays ndafter give us nice updates😉about the update lov it ,u r such a devil dev ki talvar hati to geets father aa gaya he wil find a boy 4 geet she wil say yes 4 it iknow it am i rite? me is talking about FOL. nd FOD IS AWSOME ,WAITING eagerly😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi dear enjoy ur holidays ndafter give us nice updates😉about the update lov it ,u r such a devil dev ki talvar hati to geets father aa gaya he wil find a boy 4 geet she wil say yes 4 it iknow it am i rite? me is talking about FOL. nd FOD IS AWSOME ,WAITING eagerly😃

i know u talking abt fol...glad u liking it...n ha pehale dev n ab geet ke papaji...kya kare i am such a devil i know😆...will enjoy my holidays bt wont leave u waiting for my updates...
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Waiting...😍
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thank u sweeties for all the likes and comments...love ya

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FLAMES OF DESIRE

PART-22

"i am sorr..." he looked her way about to say sorry...but finding her seat empty...he came out hurriedly, then saw her running towards her main gate...his heart pierced looking at her running away...he banged his fist on the car bonnete...then finding her safely entering her house...he droved off towards mansion...

He reached KM and directly went to his gym...removed his shirt and violently threw it away...he brushed his hair back...and grabbed his phone from his pocket...dialed her number...bell rang on the other side...it kept ringing but she did not picked it...he dialed again and again...then smashed it on the ground getting irritated...

he was shocked with his behaviour...how could he behave so roughly with her...she was way to sensitive and nave to do anything deliberately...it was a minor accident and she too was hell scared after that...still he behaved so rudely with her...he was guilty and anyhow wanted to talk to her...wanted to hear her sweet voice, even her galiyas would do this time...he wont utter a single word and would hear her cribbing and comnplaining...but irony she was not picking his call...finally after thinking a lot he reluctantly called on papaji's mobile...papaji got worried looking at maan calling at this hour...he picked the cell at once and answered...

"kya hua maan...sab thik toh hai na"

"ha papaji...sab thik hai...woh...mujhe" he was finding words...

"kuch toh bolo beta" papaji now was conerened finding maan fumbling...as this was extreme behaviour shown by maan...as till now he never heard him so nervous...

"woh papaji...i want to talk to geet" he said in one go...then waited closing his eyes...

"ek min beta" mohinder laughed nudging rano to woke up...keeping his hand on the reciever...

rano sat on the bed lazily...when mohinder whispered in her ear...about their kids late night romance...ofcourse according to them if maan is calling geet at this hour and that to after their date, then this was a good sign for them...as they thought their jhalli geet has impressed maan...

"maan...maan...maan are you there???????" mohinder repeated his words sensing no response from other side...

"ha papaji boliye" maan came out of his reveries...

"beta rano is taking this mobile to geet's room...and then you can talk to her" he said with a teasing tone, which maan didn't get...as poor soul was busy thinking how he will manofy geet...

finally rano took the mobile in geet's room...geet was sleeping on her fluffy bed cuddled up with her sweetu...when rano slowly jerked her...

"bhoot bhoot...bachao bachao" geet woked up shivering, not able to get into her surrounding...when rano hugged her calming her down...

"bache bura sapna dekha aapne" she asked caressing geet's hair...

geet nodded with teary eyes...as rano hugged her dearly...saying...

"aise sapno se bhi koi rota hai kya" rano wiped her tears...

then she remebered maan's is on the call on other side...she whispered to maan that she is giving phone to geet...and now they can talk...

geet was again taking her chota wala baby nape, seating on the bed cuddling the whole blanket around her...

rano spoke in her ear...about maan's call...and to talk to him, while she will be going to sleep...geet's anger flared hearing this...she pouted looking at her mom...while rano thought she wanted privacy...so she moved out from their not before giving her teasing smile...

geet took the phone near her ear, hearing his normal breathing...then moved away the mobile thinking...

"ab kyu phone kiya hai...ha shayd unka aur gussa karna baki reh gaya hoga"

then again she moved that mobile to her ear...trying to hear...

maan sensed that she is on the line...and knowing rano mom...she would have given her complete privacy...

"I am sorry jaan" he huskily whispered...making her shiver with its intensity...

"I know mai gussase mai jada bol gaya...and i am really sorry...woh bhi kaan pakad ke"

she was melting in his honey coated words...

"I am ready to take any punishment for making you cry"

geet was loosing her self in his sweet talks...

"please jaan atleast talk to me...you give your galiyas to me...like you always give...i wont mind at all"

geet smiled girlishly...giving up on her gussa

"I want to hear your sweet voice jaan...or else I would die"

geet abruptly jerked hearing the word die...then whimpered on the other side...scared to loose him...he was her life...she could never survive without him...

"jaan what happen...are you crying" maan got concerned hearing her hicupps and readily went out pulling a shirt from his wardrobe with his pants on...he drived crazily towards her home...and within no time he reached her place...

her tears was something he could never digest...he climbed over the pipeline...then climbing over her balcony...he saw her sleeping holding the mobile close to her ears and crying silently...his heart pricked seeing this...he somehow manage to open the door without making the noise...and then entered her room marching towards her...and with in no time he joined her on bed...hugging her from back...

"I am sorry jaan...please aisa mat karo na"

geet was startled suddenly feeling him in real...

"aap" was all she could utter as he turned her over...making her lay on her back...smacking his lips on her...

she voilently trembled below him...banging him on his chest with her small fist...she was hurt badly this time...and eventually did not wanted to give up on her anger so easily...he everytime cant manofy her like this...she harshly pushed him away as she felt him probbing his tounge in her mouth...

maan again grabbed her pulling her below him...putting his weight on her petite form...geet gasped as she felt his entire body pressing her down...finding this chance maan probbed his tounge in her hot mouth...taking full advantage of this chance...

geet giving up laid on the bed silently...letting him do anything...maan in his trance still kept making his hold harder on her...making her hands turn red with his assault...she arched her head back, as she felt him rubbing on her breast with his taut chest...she bit her lips harshly...subsiding the moan, oozing blood out of it...maan moved his lips on her neck...getting intoxicated with her aroma...he kept feasting on her flesh...eating her up...while geet laid there shedding silent tears...

after a while maan realised geet is not protesting...he smiled at his victory that finally she gave up in his passion...mentaly making a note that this thing always works in seeeking her forgive ness...he lusciously bit her cleavage expecting her to moan...but instead he heard her whimpering...and he looked at her face...which was tears stricken...

"maan you pervert...every time your seducing or kisses wont work" he smacked himself mentally...and then moved off her laying on the other side...geet closed her eyes...shedding the pool of tears...

he sat on the bed...holding his ears...making a baby face he looked at her...while geet looked other way avoiding his nautanki...

"jaan please maan jao na...next time you break as many tent as you want and I wont utter a single word promise"

maan said folding his legs seating on bed...

"aap please jao yaha se...mujhe kuch nahi sunana" she managed to say this much...

"aur agar nahi gaya toh" he liked her complaining...so tried to rub on that to make her speak atleast...

she twisted her lips and moved away to the far corner of the bed...sleeping facing her back to him...

he crawled on his knees on the bed towards her and finally hugged her...cocooning her in his strong grip...

she instantly pushed him away...turning giving her warning glare to him...pointing a finger...ohh maan thoughts went wild seeing her jhoota gussa...he took her pointing finger in his mouth and sucked on it...she suddenly pulled it away...and turned around cribbing to her babaji...maan smiled and hugged her gain from back...keeping his face in the crook of her neck...

she was feeling ticklish with his closeness so again pushed him...keeping pillows between them...then pulled a spread over her...hiding behind it...maan teasingly smirked and pulled her spread away towards him...pretending to sleep...geet made a big 0 face...then nudged his arm...

"yeh mera blanket hai"

"umm" he said lazily...

"mujhe do...I am feeling cold" she kept her face straight...

"ummm...me too feeling cold and this blanky is very comfy...why don't you join me...i promise I would make it hot in here" he whispered huskily as geet made a big shocking face...

then getting irritated with his audacity she pulled the blanket towards her...making its ball and hugging it tightly to her chest...maan laughed looking at cute antics and pulled the pillows away...throwing it on floor...geet looked at him in shock...

"woh pillows mere hai" she cribbed making a baby face...

"I know...but I dnt like anything coming between us" he said possessively coming towards her...

"aap ko sona nahi hai" she fumbled looking at his passionate eyes, as he grabbed her again pulling the blanket away...

"sona hai...tumhare saath" he said shamelessly...while geet just kept gapping at his words...feeling embarressed...and looking down...

maan made her lay on bed with him on her side...then pulling the spread on them...he slept hugging her side ways...geet kept looking at his closed eyes...getting confused with his changing behaviour...

"kabhi gussa karte hai toh kabhi pyar...babaji inka mujhe kuch samjh nahi aata"

"ummm...now sleep aur bacha hua cribbing kal kar lena babaji ko"

she still continued staring at him...while maan pulled her turning her on her side...so that now he was hugging her...keeping her glued to his chest...

finally it was morning as geet opened her lazy eyes meeting maan's intoxicating ones...he was laying beside her on his elbow...looking at her sleeping form intently...geet tried getting up...but maan pulled her back...coming on top of her...she twisted her lips looking away...as maan hovered over her, brushing his lips on her...whispering...

"good morning jaan"

geet instantly looked at him...melting away...then looking at his smirking face, she pouted thinking why his words make her so weak...

"I am hungry"

"ummm...toh jayiye apne ghar mujhe kyu bol rahe ho"

"ummm...you are such a devil na"

shelooked at him with her cute anger flaring red nose...

"you cant even offer me a breakfast" he said making a baby face...

"ummm...mujhe breakfast banana nahi aata" she said timidly feeling guilty for her rudeness...

"thank god for that" he gave a quick response...irrritating her further...

she pushed him away, hurriedly getting up from bed...pressing her dress down...she glared at him one last time before heading towards washroom...

"yeh kabhi nahi sudharenge babaji"

"geet please come out quick as me to wana take shower...he screamed from outside...then walking towards washroom he leaned on the door...

"or else I have a better plan to join in with you...it will be less time consuming you know" he laughed as he heard her throwing things inside...

after a while geet peeped through washroom door...looking for his presence...then she came out with her dripping wet locks...she looked more sexy and tempting...she looked here and there looking for him...as he came from behind and hugged her tight, digging his face in her curls...

"you are so mean" he complained...

she looked at him with "now what I did look"...

"you always tempt me with your sexy looks and then when I want to love you...you do some crazy stuff...making me angry"

she pushed him away snorting her nose..."dekha babaji har baar saari ki saari galati meri...aur yeh toh kuch karte hi nahi na" she stood infront of mirror combing her hair...while maan came and hugged her from back...squeezing her waist carnally...

"you know jab tum aise gussa karti ho toh aur bhi yaummy lagati ho...he kissed her cheek, biting it...ummm too delicious"

geet pushed his hands back...breaking away from his hold...pointing her finger towards him...

"dekhiye mai bohat gussa hu...aur iss baar bilkul nahi manane wali"

"achaa" he said playfully holdng her finger pulling her towards him...

"dekhiye aap yeh sab kisi aur ke saath kijiye...mai bohat gussa hu"

"kiske saath" he again took her in his arms...

"ummm...mujhe nahi pata" she looked away...

"tum koi apni friend suggest karo na"

geet looked at him in shock, while he gave his toothy grin to her...she took hold of his collar...loosing her self control...

"dare you touch anyone except me" she was raged with his attitude...

maan got concerned as he felt he went way to ahead...he cupped her face..."i was joking"...tried claming her...

"aap apne aap ko samjhate kya ho...jab chaha daat diya aur jab chaha pyar kiya"

"geet i said i am sorry"

"your sorry wont work this time...mai nahi manane wali"

"toh tum batao mai kya karu...i cant stay away from you...you want me to beg infront of you...i am ready to do that also"

he looked deep into her eyes...meaning every word he said...

before geet could say anything...they heard a loud knock on the door...geet got scared as she knew it must be her mom...she clutched his shoulder...whispering...

"mom"

"geet puttar darwaza khol...papaji wants his mobile urgently"

both looked at eachother shocked as they heard rano spoke...

"yeh sab aapke wajah se...ab aap hi sought out karo...mom and dad ko bhi toh pata chale unke maan kaise hai...aur iss wakt mere kamre mai kya kar rahe hai" and she left to open her door...leaving a shocked maan behind...

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Precap:- maan cooking for geet😆...just maska lagaaoing😉

hello sweeties...me back just for u guys...as i didnt wanted to leave you waiting for my update till i come back...but still i hope u wait n long for my next update and miss me till i come back...
i am giving a long update just for u guys...as i know how much u love my work...but still i am a bit disappointed with the number of likes and comments...many people are reading my updates and not even have that much courtesy to atleast like it...anyways i dont want to be sad before leaving...
this update is dedicated to all who keep encouraging me to write better...love u guys...
now please hit the LIKE button and give me long long comments...and pls comment smthing other then "awesome"...as i am really bored reading it...i wud be happy to see some few words more after an awesome😆...
now enjoy this update and sorry i think i wont be able to update flavour of love...as its already midnight and i have to get up by 5 in morning...sorry for no flavour of love😭
love u lots and do miss me...and pls comment as i will be reading it thru my mobile...
yours,
varsha😃
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thank god u updated ...i was just w8ting for it ...thnks a ton
i am gonna read it now ...
have a mind blasting vacations ..👍🏼

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