Broken Hearts FF: Reg Updates Mon-Fri pg19 MAHAUPD

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

part 9
nice part...
hope Maan gets to know about that Vikram having Sia...
cont soon dear...

PS - update the title...

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mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Awsome prt...hope maan find out soon abt vikram...

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sumaiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

will do a mahaupdate for mising mondays n wednesdays update tommorow and friday also a long update..

precap@ oh haaseno zulfe wali jane jaha dhoonte khatil aakhin jiska jaha!

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

ossum dear
wiw so finally geet came backwaiting fr next

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Ambibamby

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Love it yaar! Waiting for next update

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Ambibamby

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

hope everything is ok with you. take care

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sumaiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Part..10. MAHA UPDATE 1..

Geet stood there watching them watching her. She was hurt broken and in pieces inside but she knew for her daughter's sake for Sia's sake and for Maan's sake she had to keep quiet. Moreover, Vikram was mad, there wasn't anything he was not capable off. She sat down after enquiring about the next flight. . Maan was looking at her intently. He was remembering all their moments. There fights, there love, the first time they met. Coincedently, the weather outside was the same, it was raining. Water, the thing that always joined them together. Vikrant and Meera walked to Geet and said

'hum tumhe lene aayi hai'

'mujhe lene?' Geet asked confused. 'dekhiye Mr, main sirf aapke dost ko hospital lekar gayi to bus. aab aap log zabarzasti hai' Geet said acting annoyed.

'maine kaha ta na Maan, Geet se zyada koi dramabaaz ho hi nahi sakta' said Adi knowing Geet very well.

'kya kaha tumhe Dramabaaz aur ha ek aur baat Mr, main Reet hu Reet'

'maine kasam kahi ti kay main Geet ko kabhie dukh nahi pochaonga.. lekin maine ause bohot dukh pochaya..' Maan said hurt. Geet turned to look at him.

'kya tumhe sach main kuch yaad nahi?' asked Pinky

'na main tumhari dost hu, na kisi ki behen na kisi ki mangetar' Geet finally said walking off. Maan said

'agar tum meri Geet ho tum palto gi' At that moment Geet turned around walking towards Maan. Everyone smiled happily as she walked back. Geet looked at Maan not breaking an eyelock then looked down. Maan followed her gaze and picked up the suitcase there and turned and walked way when Maan grabbed her hand. Geet felt goosebumps as Maan held her hand. The same feeling ehsaas.

'kuch to yaad karo hamari pyar ke liye.. yaad karo.. hum pehle baar hosyapur main mile teh, main tumhe bachaya ta.. aur phir office main humari pehli project kitna disagreements teh hamari'

'yaad karo Geet, jab tum delhi aayi, papa, Adi hum sab,' Pinky said.

'tumhe yaad hai.. jab tum mere outhouse ayi ti..aur hum kitni larai ki ti 'continued Maan.

'woh tumhara har nakra, tumhara pyar hamara sapna, woh sari wade hum done ne kiye teh, Geet main tumhe do baar pehle kochuka ho. Kismat hai ke tum waapas mili ho. Main tumhe aap kona nahi chata..please Geet waapas aajao'

Geet felt nostalgic but kept herself together and turned and said

'bus tum log apni mari hue dost, aur mangetar kahi aur door aur mujhe jane do' Geet said shouting angrily at them and left.

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Everyone was sitting dejected in Khurana Mansion whlist one person was optimistic that Geet will return. At that point the door bell rang and Maan opened the door and everyone was shocked.

'tum yaha' asked Vikrant, as Maan and Geet stared at eachother. Everyone smiled.

'mujhe pata ta tum aaogi' Maan smiled at her.

'dekho, aap log koi sapne mat dekhna..mujhe laga maine kuch zyada boldiya aur tum log ne yeh kaha ke meri shakal koi Geet se milti hai. Main koi Geet nahi hu, shayad mere chehra Geet se milta hai aur aapke Dadima teekh hojaye Main yaha sirf apke dadima ke liye ayi hu.. Main manti hu shayad mera chehra apke mangetar se milti hai' Geet explained herself.

'matlab tum yaha Dadima ke liye aayi ho' asked Maan

'ha aur aap hai kaun mujse saawal poche wale.. aur ha mere bi koi life hai Mr.. jo apse jori hue nahi hai' Geet turned to him. She had placed a stone on her heart.

'aur yeh tum kaise saabit karsakti ho?' asked Maan questioning her stance. Geet looked at him shocked. Geet took out her ID and showed them

'Reet Sharma, my ID passport, driving lisence,'

'Driving lisence koi bi banwasakta hai' Maan not forgetting his stance.

'yeh baat choro, Reet tum yeh dekho' Pinky showed her pictures of Geet. Geet with Maan, with Meera, with her own family and with Adi and Pinky and with Meera. Geet looked at them and shocked.

'I can't belive it.. Someone who looked like me.. stayed with you..' Geet said pretending to be astonished.

'Geet' Geet looked up and saw Dadima walking into the lounge. Geet was shocked. Dadima looked so frail and tired. But there was a new spark in her eyes seeing Geet. Maan and Vikrant ran to her to hold her. Geet looked at Dadima with tears remembering all her past with her. The fun they had together. She walked up to her.

'Geet beta aap aagayi..'

'jii Dadima main..' Dadima hugged her before anything or anyone could do anything. Dadima proclaimed that there be a party tonight for Geet returning. Maan smirked as he knew this party might make Geet remember who she is or stop her pretense.

Dadima left.

Geet went into her room and called Vikram

mujhe yaha kuch din rehna hoga.. main kisi ko kuch nahi batongi.. Dadima ka tik hone ke badh main ajongi.. ha main wada karti hu.. Main tumhe chorkar kahi nahi jaongi.. ha.. main bi ..dekho meri kamzor kari tumhari pass hai.. please.. Vikram kuch din aur bas' Geet said. She turned to pray and asked for strength from Babaji.

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'agar yeh Geet hai, phir uska bacha kaha hai?' asked Pinky.

'baat to tum sahi kehrahi ho Pinky. ' said Adi.

'records ka saat chalkar, yeh maloom hai ke Geet ka bacha zinda hai..lekin shayad kahi aur hai..humhe pata lagana chahiye..' said Vikrant. But Maan was not lsitening at the discussion. He was happy that his Geet was back with him.

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The party had started. Everyone was happy. Geet was standing next to Dadima when the lights turned off and there stood Vikrant and Meera.

'yeh party, ham isliye de rahe hai, kyunki hamari Geet waapas aagayi hai' Vikrant said

'let the party begin'

The spot light turned on and Meera and Vikrant were on the dancefloor in the middle with the light on them.

Maan looked at Geet whlist Geet's eyes were on him. Vikrant started to sing and went towards Meera and sang.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UP7fBsOuBPY

O haseena zulfon wali, jaane jahan
Dhoondti hain kafir aankhen kiska nishaan

Then Vikrant went towards Geet and sang as he saw her eyes were on Maan. As he took her attention off him and Maan dissapeared from her eyes.

O haseena zulfon wali, jaane jahan
Dhoondti hain kafir aankhen kiska nishaan

Mehfil mehfil, aye shamaa, firti hon kaha?
Mehfil mehfil, aye shamaa, firti hon kaha?

Meera than sang towards Geet.

Woh anjaana dhoondti hoon
Woh deewana dhoondti hoon
Jalaakar jo chup gaya hain
Woh parwaana dhoondti hoon

Meera danced around Geet who was looking for Maan and sang

Garm hain, tej hain, yeh nigahe meri

Vikrant grabbed Meera and danced near Geet

Kaam aajayengi sard aahen meri

Meera walked away from Vikrant and danced singing pointing at him

Tum kisi raah mein to milo ge kahin

Vikrant sang going towards Meera watching Geet's reactions as was Maan from the side

Arrey, ishq hoon, mein kaheen theharta hi nahni

Meera sang walking and bringing Maan into the spotlight. Geet heart started feeling restless again. Vikrant watched Geet's face and her bechaini.

Mein bhi hoon galiyon ki parchaai
Kabhi yaha, kabhi waha
Shaam hi se kuch ho jataa hain
Meri bhi jaadoo jawaan

Vikrant nudged Geet and sang next to her

O haseena zulfon wali, jaane jahan
Dhoondti hain kafir aankhen kiska nishaan
Mehfil mehfil, aye shamaa, firti hon kaha?
Mehfil mehfil, aye shamaa, firti hon kaha?

Meera went to the other side of Geet and grabbed her and took her towards Maan and sang

Woh anjaana dhoondti hoon
Woh deewana dhoondti hoon
Jalaakar jo chup gaya hain
Woh parwaana dhoondti hoon

Meera sang sang as Maan and Geet store at eacother

Chup rahen, hain yeh kya dhang hain aapka

Vikrant sang pointing at both of them

Aaj to kuch naya rang hain aapka

Meera danced around them and sang

Vikrant sang

Aaj ki raat mein kya se kya ho gayi

Meera sang as Maan and Geet looked at eachother

Aapki saadgi to balaa ho gayiMein bhi hoon galiyon ki parchaai
Kabhi yaha, kabhi waha
Shaam hi se kuch ho jataa hain
Meri bhi jaadoo jawaan

Maan grabbed Geet and danced with her as Vikrant sang . Geet remembered the kurbaan hua dance with Maan.

O haseena zulfon wali, jaane jahan
Dhoondti hain kafir aankhen kiska nishaan
Mehfil mehfil, aye shamaa, firti hon kaha?
Mehfil mehfil, aye shamaa, firti hon kaha?

Meera sang as Geet eyes were on Maan as he danced with her.

Woh anjaana dhoondti hoon
Woh deewana dhoondti hoon
Jalaakar jo chup gaya hain
Woh parwaana dhoondti hoon

Meera sang

Thairiye to sahi, kahiye kya naam hain

Vikrant sang

Meri badnamiyon ka wafaa naam hain

Meera sang

Katal karke chalein, yeh wafaa khoob hain

Vikrant sang

Hain naadan teri, yeh adaa khoob hain

Meera sang dancing with Vikrant watching Maaneet dance. Geet's eyes did not miss them. Everyone clapped at the dance.

Mein bhi hoon galiyon ki parchaai
Kabhi yaha, kabhi waha
Shaam hi se kuch ho jataa hain
Meri bhi jaadoo jawaan

Adi joined in and sang with Vikrant dancing around Maaneet

O haseena zulfon wali, jaane jahan
Dhoondti hain kafir aankhen kiska nishaan
Mehfil mehfil, aye shamaa, firti hon kaha?
Mehfil mehfil, aye shamaa, firti hon kaha?

Meera and Pinky sang around Maaneet

Woh anjaana dhoondti hoon
Woh deewana dhoondti hoon
Jalaakar jo chup gaya hain
Woh parwaana dhoondti hoon

The song ended and Maaneet were staring at eachother when Geet's phone rang and she was shocked and ran away.PRECAP: Candlelight dinner... and Gurvinder finds Rajji..

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

geet is trying so hard not to melt...

continue soon..

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

part 10
awesome...
poor Geet...
hope Maan gets to know about Sia and save her...
cont soon...

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sumaiya

@RishbalaAsyaMG

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Part 11 MAHAUPDATE 2Geet went to her room and cried but not after locking the door. The closeness was affecting her. She knew she had to be here for dadima's sake but for her own sake and her daughters sake she had to be quiet. She cannot let them know who she is. She cannot let them know that she is there long lost Geet.Meanwhile Maan smirked because he saw a lot of flicker of emotions within Geet. He knew it was her. And maybe just maybe, her feelings will come to light soon and everything will be fine. 6 months he had lived in guilt but not anymore. But then her remembered the conversation the other's were having earlier. What had happen to Geet's child? There was an accident, The witnesses present were sure of that. So did Geet lose her child? Has the loss of her child made her forget everything including her memory. But then the mind can't forget what the heart holds right?The following morning, Vikrant walked into Geet's room. Geet turned to him.'Geet ji, Dadima yeh chahti hai ke aap pehle ke tara, Maan ke office main secretary ka kaam karo..' 'pehle ki tara.. main yaha pehle baar ayi hu samje. Aur yeh mat bolna aur us insaan se kheh de na main Reet hu, Reet Sharma' Geet replied.---Later that morning, Meera took Geet to Khurana Consturctions. Geet was looking everywhere and Meera noticed Geet lost. Geet was lost in her memories and saw everyone staring at her in shock. Tasha Sasha were shocked to the extreme. Adi smiled at seeing Geet. Meera led Geet to her cabin and said she will be back later. Geet looked to the left and saw Maan staring at her through the windows. There eyes met. Geet saw unproclaimed love in his eyes and Maan saw a flicker of Geet in her eyes. Geet looked away quickly when her phone rang.'Hello...''mere cabin main aajao'Geet entered his cabin and looked down. She remembered all the times she had barged into his cabin without asking and ran in half the time. The time she split coffee, fell into his arms.

'jee sir kahiye' She said avoiding Maan's gaze.

'dictation likho.. hum middle class ke liye ghar bana rahe hai' Maan said. Geet looked at him and remembered the project as it all came running back in both of there minds. The project, the conference, Maan saying sorry, the day locked in conferece.Geet was shocked.

'is main 2 bedroom, ek lounge, bathroom, kitchen aur ek driving space aur...

'aur ek garden hona chahiye sir, bacho ke liye aur chota sa park..' Geet said and shut her mouth before she realised what she had said.

'tumhe yeh baatein kaise maloom hai? Yeh baatein to sirf Geet ko pata ta..' Maan asked getting up walking towards her. Geet looked away as Maan looked forward.

'sir woh maine aise kehdiya aur waise bi, jaise sach hai woh hai aur ha ek to apni Geet se mujhe compare karna bandh karo'

'tik hai.. tum abhi andar jao aur is presentation ko tayyar karo.. abhi teen gante main clients ani waley hai.aur phir hum dono ko saath main project karna hai.'

'teen gante.. itna saara kaam.. dusht kahe ke.. aap kabhie sudronge nahi na...' Geet said shocked and then looked at him. Adi had walked in breaking the stare.

'tumhe kaise maloom ke maine pehle bi yehi kiya ta.. aur dusht yeh to sirf Geet mujhe boltati ti' MAan said.

'woh.. jo dhust hai woh dhusht hi hai'. As per Adi's plan Sasha walked in tripping Geet. (Sasha became good because she was a woman and felt sympathy after what happened to Geet). Adi did a thumbs up to her as Maan grabbed Geet as she fell into his arm.

'Sasha tumhe yaad hai, pehli baar jab Geet office ayi ti, jaan buj kar Maan sir ke bahon main giri ti' Adi said. Maan looked at Adi who told him throgh his eyes to hold on. Maan made Geet stand up right. Geet was shocked and angrily replied

'main jaan buj kar nahi giri ti.. main toh takragayi ti aur waise bi..' When Geet realised her slip of tonge.

'Tumhe kaise maloom jab Geet pehli baar office ayi ti kya hua ta.. tum to Geet nahi ho' Sasha said determined.

'agar tum Geet nahi ho phir tumhe kaise pata? jawaab do' Adi asked whlist Maan and Geet store at eachother.

'woh main abhi jo hua uski baat kar rahi ti..' Geet quickly said and ran out.

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Meanwhile Gurvinder had finally tracked down The Handa's in Chandigarth.

'Gurvinder ji aap?' Mohinder said opening the door.

'jee uncle ji,, mujhe aapse aur Rano aunty se zazorri baat karni hai.. actually aap sab se' Gurvinder said. Mohinder led Gurvinder in.

'Gurvinder, jo Brij ne kiya i'm sorry' Brij dad said.

'nahi uncle aap sorry mat kehna.. main yaha kisi aur maqsat se aaya hu' Gurvinder stated confusing the Handas.

'Geet ka bare ma' He said ending there confusion but adding a new mystery.

'Geet ke bare me.. lekin Geet to hame chor kar chali gayi hai.. yeh sab meri galti hai. Phool jaise bachi ti.. kash humne use kabhi samaj ne ki koshish ki.. kash main rutwa aur izzat ke nahi, mere bacho ke bare main soch ta.. to shayad aaj Geet zinda hoti' Daarji said who was very ashamed of his deeds.

'shayad Daarji, Geet zinda hai...' Gurvinder stated. everyone turned to him in shock.

'kya aap log kisi Vikram ko jantey teh?' asked Gurvinder as Gurvinder filled in the blanks.

After the information was shared. Rano could not stop crying at the possibility of her daughter being alive.

'Maan ji ne kaha ta, ke hame Rajji aur Titto, Geet ke kamzoriya hai lejana hoga.. yeh pata hai. Jab hum is saari mystery khatam hojayga.. Hum waapas ayenge' Gurvinder explained as Vikrant explained to him to say. The Handa's agreed to Rajju and Tito going with him the following day.

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'woh file kaha hai..woh to waha ti.. Maan sir ke pass' Geet thought whlist doing the presentation. She knocked the door and saw the file on his table. Geet went to get it when Maan grabbed it. Adi and Pinky followed in silently as they watched the show.

'Sir mujhe file chahiye'

'mujhe bi chahiye'

'Sir.. presentation banana hai'

'toh mujhe kaam hai'

'uff sir kya aap koi aur kaam nahi karsaktey.. itna bara business hai'

Geet and Maan kept pulling the file together when it ripped in half arguing.

'dekho, yeh aap ki waja se hua hai.. agar aapne file di hoti toh yeh nahi hota'

'meri waja se.. tumhe file ke liye wait nahi karsakti' Maan argued back.

'aap se baat karna hi bekar hai' Geet replied

'toh karti kyun ho'

'galti hogaye..' Geet yelled. Then a light bulb hit Geet.

'ek minute ek minute, main yeh project presentation kyun karu? Nahi yeh meri company hai na mere kaam aur waise bi main yaha sirf Dadima ke liye aayi ti'

'tik hai Geet, waise bi Geet ko presentation se problem hoti hai haina' Maan smirked.

'kya kaha?mujhe presentation se problem hai..?' Geet said

'tum confuse horahi ho.. maine tumhe nahi apni Geet ke bare main kaha'

'apne aap ko samaj teh kya ho.. khud yaha bet kar koi kaam nahi kartey jaise ke aap koi superstar ho'

'superstar to nahi lekin kaam karne se mana nahi karta ta.aur maine kaha ta saath main project karna hai... ab project mana kardiya aur presentations bi'

'ha nahi karna to nahi karna.. mujse sabke samne apna tamasha nahi karna..'

'maalo na.. himmat nahi hai'

'HIMMAT? aur MUJHE, main kisi ke samne presentation karsakti ho' Geet said.

'phir bi tum nahi karsakti' Maan smirked at her.

'ab to clients hi bateyenge Mr MAAN SINGH KHURANA ke kaise main aap ki presntation karti hu'

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Geet worked on the presentation till late evening. Adi and Maan watched her.

'kya lagta hai Maan?'

'mere Geet ke tara mujse larti hai.. kitni saari baatein Geet se milti hai hai na' Maan said smiling looking at her.

'waise bi kafi deir hochuke hai..ghar jao.. tum sab Khurana Mansion pocho'

Adi nodded. Maan walked into Geet's cabin and said

'dadima bolarahi hai challo' Geet nodded and left.

Adi and the others had set a candlelight dinner. Geet came in and was shocked. She turned and Maan wasn't behind her.

'Maan aap kaha ho?'

Geet walked up to the table and saw the candles and flowers and then saw Maan. She looked at him and turned to walk away when Maan held her hand.

Geet turned to look at him.

'choro mujhe jane do' Geet said half whispering in emotion. Maan denied and held her hand

'kyun? daar lag raha hai' asked Maan.

'breaking news, Reet ko kabhi kisi cheeze se daar nahi lagda' Maan smirked as he opened her hair and put a hand on her cheek. Geet felt goosebumps as he walked around her combing his fingers through her hair. She closed her eyes as Maan held her from the back holding her shoulders breathing down the left side of her neck and her ear. She clenched her hands. He touched her face with the back of her hand.

'ab? tumhe daar lag raha hai' Maan spoke huskily. He let go of her as Geet was left staring as he took the candles and lit the other candles as Maan spoke lovingly.

'jab pyar karne wali ko milna hai.. toh kahi bi milta hai.. woh koi bi pal ho ya sama..koi bi perfect date setting ko. kisi bi cheeze bi zarrorat nahi hoti' Geet remembered the date, the time they confess.

'sirf pyar.. jab hum pehle pyar hua ta, toh aisa hi hua ta.. phir aaj sab kuch waise hi hua.. jabse tum waapas aagayi ho, sab kuch waise hora ha hai.. Geet please challo ek nayi shurvat kartey hai.. I Love You Geet' Maan said walking up to her holding her face. Geet store at him. This was the first time he acknowledged his feelings. When her phone rang and she was shocked seeing the caller ID. She walked out and Maan was left standing.

'Hello Vikram..' Geet said scared.

'Geet kaha ho tum? Dadima ji tik nahi hai.. kab aarahi ho? Main tumara interzar kar raha hu aur Sia bi, dekho apni mama ke bina kitni akeli hai' Vikram said.

'Vikram main jaldi aajongi .. please.. Sia..ko'

'tik hai tik hai.. main ek kaam karta hu main hi aajata hu'

'nahi Vikram.. please..Main aaj hi yaha se jaane ki koshish karti hu..'

'tik hai Geet I Love you'

Geet was scared holding the phone to her heart when Maan touched her shoulder.

'Geet kaun ta?'

'GEET GEET GEET, kitni baar kaha ke main Geet nahi hu, phir kyun zabarzasti mere saath rishta jorne ki koshish kare ho?'

PRECAP: Maan drops Geet off.. and meets Vikram...Vikrant and Adi talk to Geet.

MAHAUPDATE-TUESDAY for Monday and Tuesday..

to be completed

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 13 years ago