If It Had Been Like This(MG ff)#2 Thread 3 opened

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Hi guys i have read many ff's of india forums so thought of writing one i am not sure if u all will like it or not but there is no harm in trying right guys...my ff will start from the seen of maan and geet engagement where our gc got ill and the script got change so i have imagine if it had not happened so what the story would be so its my thought of the part of the story would have been turn in to ...here it is guys plz comment and like and do tell me what do u feel about it even if it is negative ...so happy for all the support i got till now from all my lovely readers thanks to all of them for their support and love that i have reached here and opening thread 2 off my ff thanks so much guys luv u all 🤗



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Posted: 13 years ago
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IN THIS FF WE HAVE OUR OLD TEAM...
character sketch :

DADIMA
Anju Mahendroo
same as show sweet and lovely.
MAAN
Angry young man loves his dadima and younger brother dev a lot but hate naintara dev 's wife dew to her evil mind and he hate woman's expect his dadima bcz of his past he thinks them to be money minded and weak but at the same time he also respect them as thought by his dadima has his on rules and regulation strict from out side soft from inside . But one day his life change when he fall in love with a girl geet who work as his secretary whom he saved from her own brother respects her more after knowing her past love her a lot and takes care of her and her child as his own child for him its geet's child her past does not matters to him but wanna punish the guys who did this to his geet but cant voice it as geet said she has moved on with him and does not want to remember her past and maan can not she her sad remembering her past so he let it go as per her wish...for him geet wish is his commend .unknown to the fact that dev his brother is the person who had ruined his love geet life will he be able to punish his own brother for his sin will he be able to digest the truth...lets see...


GEET
same as show simple and bubbly love maan a lot .her family had abounded her dew to her past. Has only maan and his dadima who loves her like her own daughter and she to loves and respects her a lot .Her best friend is adi sir and pinky from her office but she knows pinky from her childhood as their father r friends .


ADI SIR
Praneet Bhatt
same as in ghsp.
PINKY
Aditti Chopra
same as in ghsp
SHASHA
Kanica Maheshwari
same as in show .

TASHA
Aakanksha Nimonkar
same as in show.

dev
Abhinav Shukla
love his dadima and brother is married to nt love marriage but had done a great sin by spoiling a girl (geet) life and is guilty .He is a poppet of his wife.But is good from heart want to repaint for his sin by asking for forgiveness and is ready to go to jail if it is what it takes for geet's forgiveness.will he be able to forgive him self after knowning about maan-geet relation.

naintara
Karishma Randeva
dev's wife selfish and money minded married dev bcz of his money .Hates dev flirty nature and can not trust him bcz of it.
merra
Perneet Chauhan
dev's collage friend secretly loved him in collage days still did has left him bcz of it after college. But hate him after knowning what he did to geet .Is helping him to come out of his guilt and get forgiveness from geet by finding her .she is doing this as a friend not bcz of love as she cant leave her friend in his bad times.

AND YAA OUR DEAR MR.MANCHANDA I REALLY LIKED HIS ROLE AND THE WAY HE TRUSTED GEET...

SORRY FOR MISTAKE...PLZ LIKE AND COMMENT

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congratz for new thread
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congrats on the new thread...
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part 15



dadima : opps sorry lagta hai hum galat waqt per agayi ...


(opp sorry i think i came at the wrong time ! )


said dadima turning her back towards them and giggling at the same time and say in a teasing tone...



dadima : sorry beta humi agta hia hum galat waqt per agayi hum chalti hai app dune se badme melange ...



(sorry children i think i came at the wrong time ...i should go will c u guys after wards )



and was about to move from them when she heard a loud thud and bang voice confused she turned around and laughed a loud seeing the sight infront of her...



what happen was when maaneet heards dadima's voice both at first got freeze but as soon as dadima's next words reach their ears they both come to their senses and maan 's hold losses on geet and garbing the opportunity geet just pushed maan and run in the bathroom closing the bathroom door banging the door shut in her way loud as she was not in her senses to think about all that and clutched her heart near her cheat breathing heavily inside the bathroom leaning on the door ...



while as maan who with the sudden push of geet landed straight on the bed with a thud facing his back towards the bed and the whole bed got vibrated with its force it was the voice which dadima heard and turned immediately not giving maan a chance to come out of his shock with the sudden push and react accordingly ...



dadima laughed out loud seeing maan face who was looking at the bathroom door which geet had banged few seconds back not at all reacting and she once again burst into fits of laughter seeing his shocked and confused expression...



it was dadima's laugh which brought maan back from his shock and made him look at her which was enough to make him realize that what had just happen hear and he turned red with embarrassment while dadima was just laughing all the more seeing her grandson facial expressions which were enough to tell her what he was thinking as his face expression change from shocked to realization to embarrassment making her laugh not at all able to control her laughter ...she continued to laugh at her grandson making his embarrassment turn into anger to free himself from her teasing ...



maan embarrassed expression change into angry expression and dadima knew well whats coming next so she just spared her grand son for a while and leaves from their before maan could say anything and winking at him before leaving and as she was leaving she couldn't control and started singing ...



dadima : Baby I can see the sun rising in ur eyes
Baby everytime i think of you , you make me smile
Baby I'll be your every dream you should know
Baby I never ever wana let you go


Baby..


Zindagi ki neeendon ki Subah Ishq hai Baby..
Badi khoobsurat si Subah Ishq hai


Humko Pyaar hua Puri Hui dua
Humko Pyaar hua Puri Hui dua
Baby..


Zindagi ki neeendon ki Subah Ishq hai Baby..
Badi khoobsurat si Subah Ishq hai
Humko Pyaar hua Puri Hui dua
Humko Pyaar hua Puri Hui dua

[video link for those who haven't heard sorry not able to post the video ]



dadima sang it all the way downstairs her voice was loud enough for maan to hear it till upstairs even if dadima was in leaving room making her way out of the out house but not before teasing her grandson and her would be daughter in law as she knew geet wont come out of the bathroom if she will stay their and she doesn't wanted to embarrass her any more bcz she knew geet was way too embarrassed for today seeing her reaction and leaves singing to herslef less but teasing both not able to control herself and leaves from their leaving the love birds alone...



while maan on the other hand just passes his hands through his hair in frustration and embarrassment knowing dadima wont leave them easily and hearing her singing the song was enough for maan to just explode but he was not in a state to say anything and just glare at the door from which dadima left...and then he looks at the door of the bathroom which was still close and mutter to himself ...



maan : yeh ladki mujhe such - much pagal ker degi gosh main yahaan kyu ayatha aur kya ker rahatha



maan says shaking his head in disbelieve and makes his way towards the bathroom door and tell geet that dadima is not here any more so she can come out ... bcz knowing geet she wont come out from the bathroom until she knows that dadima is not here anymore ...so knocking on the door maan says ...in his usual cold and angry tone ...



maan : geet come out dadima is gone ...



while geet on the other hand was still standing leaning on the door clutching her heart with her eyes closed was in for one more shock listening to his usual voice she wonders if all the happened a min ago was a dream or reality and makes a confuse baby face and looks at the ceiling once again and says ...



geet : babaji bachalena haan...



confused not knowing to say or think any more she makes her way out and as soon as she opens the door she shut it loud again banging it on maan face making him all the more angry and frustrated if he was any less...



here geet close the door again on maan's face bcz as soon as she open the door it strike her mind that she was still in the bathroom only and the bang again was its reaction that come out all of a sudden ...



Here maan just can't take it any more and shout at geet from outside the bathroom ...



maan : geeet



shouted maan through his greeted teeth...as his whole body was now vibrating with anger and frustration ...while poor geet just gulps her saliva in fear as her mouth goes dry hearing him scream her name ...not able to say anything as she just lost her voice bcz of fear and looks up at the ceiling again as if saying ...



geet : babaji



while making a cute baby face...



when she heard maan's was again and jumps up...with the sudden sound...of his shout ...



maan : geet just come out now ...




while she just looks here and their not knowing what to do or say ...




while maan on the other side just couldn't take it any more and shouts or u can say threatens her saying ...



maan : geet if u didn't came out right away then i'll just brake this dam door !




maan threatens har and poor geet just gulps her saliva getting hell scared now and looks up saying...



geet : babaji yeh kya khe rahi hai babaji abb main kya karu ?




precap : Wonder what poor Geet will do now??? Wonder if our angry young Maan will break the door????😉



Hope u all enjoy this update and give me u r love and support with u r likes and comments guys it really means a lot to me silent readers plz do let me know u r views about my ff ...will be waiting for u r omments and likes ...😍sorry for mistake guys 😊

guys do add to get pms for my ff

next : PART 16





Edited by kkiddoo - 12 years ago
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congrats
for new thread
now coming to update
it was superb
loved it
awesome
waiting for more
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for new thread and awsem update
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awesome update
congrats for new thread
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congs 4 new thread n nice update

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