MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 4 - Page 12

Awesome update loved it how maan starting to recognise what geet does and expressions loving their closeness ;)

beautiful update like always...

part 27
awesome part...
loved it...
cont soon dear...

ohh it was such a beautiful update diii
and geet really knows him well...she is such a matured person
and she knows wht to do and speak at the right time!!!

and the scene whr maan asks her to put on that pen..it felt a bliss
but again at the end...even i felt geet's pain!!!
the whole update was a roller coaster...1st ek dum masti...phir ek sweetie cutie scene and den the reality befalling...
and i almost cried seeing geet's reaction..
its like she is too much bottled up
she is hiding her pain so well di
but ek din to ye sabr toot jayega...phir...???
am a bit scared for tht day..
i dunno if u had thot on these lines di
but sehne ki bhi to ek seema hoti h
how much can she hold back????

eagerly waiting for next after the precap but still sad sad...

superb update di... loved it.. loved gifts from geet and loved Maan's way of liking them... loved Geet's understanding level and her humble attitude and Maan's realization of her pain lovely di... do continue soon and congrats for the new thread...

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

That was truly a wonderful story...

I just got to read all the parts in one go... The story is just brilliant... completely logical... I loved the way you have portrayed the emotions.. There was so much depth in each character...

I loved this Geet who is so optimistic, who doesn't give up hope, who tries to fight to win her love.. She puts a mask to all the sorrows and fills happiness in people around her...

And MSK... he is just not the usual arrogant one... He understands, accepts his faults, tries to give the relation a chance, very genuine and truthful ...

Just loved the way you have grooved up the story.. so many emotions... so much of ups and downs in their relation... happiness and sorrow... but yet there is always positivism...

Thanks to Aishu for suggesting me this FF..

Awesome updates and i would be eagerly waiting for your future updates...

hehe see i told u..it'll be worth reading...😳
uff i can comment on this n no of times!! and still not get bored of commenting and reading it all over again!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

hehe see i told u..it'll be worth reading...😳
uff i can comment on this n no of times!! and still not get bored of commenting and reading it all over again!!!!!😃

Awesome ...Awesome update...!!
Loved it so much..
Superb precap...
Eagerly waiting for next
continue soon
thankx for pm