Maneet SS- Kaafilaa. PART 10/ Pg 88/ JUN 13 PM L8R

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Amina

@aminaluvmaan

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#391

awesome update ruchs...such cute maaneet scenes!!!

loved the spa surprise...cant wait for next part!!!

me sad that this ss is ending!!

thanx for pm...update soon!!!

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#392

Hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum fab update! Loved the surprise! wonderfully written! update soon

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#393

amazing update...

loved how geet was taking class of the servants...

loved maan surprise for geet...

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#394

awesome update dear...

Geet ne naukron ki watt laga di hai but Maan knows how to calm his sherni and has planned a super super surprise for her...loved it completely dear...she deserves all the pampering after what she has endured...

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#395

Ruchs, that was so damn awesome
Do cont soon & do PM me

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#396

Just read all the parts. Very nice.
Loved the line Maan's car selected dis place to stop in 2nd part.
Geet's punishment was so nice. Very different too.
But y our sweet dadi savitri devi name used for villain.
Waiting for next part to know d villains.
add me to ur pmlist pls.

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#397

😆 Voldomort love the name for Maan

OMG I just loved it when he acted so innocently after saying to word strip

amazing update enjoyed every part sooo cute

tooo goood angel

loved it

again such a amazing part sachi

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#398

Hi Friends!!!😳

Me very sorry for delaying the updates so much, but am helpless!! My sessional tests have already begun… Two down and three to go, and me has my end of semester papers in like a week or so… Need to gear up and on top of that have to submit so many assignments!!! Sigh!!!😭

Me knows that by now you all must be fed up with my excuses and sob stories!! Me shollly!!! So, me got a teaser for you… Its written by ME, and me really wants to know how well it turned out so please do leave your opinions dear!!!😳

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TEASER

Aaj chali main ek iss raah par…

Na koi manzil, na koi hai dar…

Bas sochoon aaj main yeh…

Kaafila ka yeh rukh mohey kahaan le jaave???

Zindagi ki yeh dor kab kahaan tham jaaye???

O saiyaara tere dil ki kya dua hai???

O saiyaara tohey kya abb hua hai??

Bas yeh soch hui main yahaan shamil…

Ki khuda hai Kaafiley ki manzil!!!

Par kya pata tha yeh mujhe…

Ki bas khatam aaj samaa hai…

O saiyaara tere dil ki kya dua hai???

O saiyaara tohey kya abb hua hai???

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Me hoping you liked the Teaser, my sher-shayari song type composition… Me hoping you like it!!!😳

A HINT- It's from someone's POV!!!😉

Me doesn't know when will me be able to update!!! Me will defo try to find time on between and give you some short updates though currently for me it seems a hard fetched possibility!!😭

Me hasn't yet checked your comments dears for the last part , will check them soon!! Thank you in advance dears!!😳

Me hasn't been commenting on all my lovely writer's lovely FFs and SS's, me very sorry but me hardly has time!! Sholllyyy!!!😭

Twisty Deewnagi, Kaafilaa and Aaiynaa, all will be having regular updates from January when me would be having my winter holidays!! Till then please bear with me!! Will try to end Kaafilaa before that if possible!!😳

Love you all!!

Ruchi..😳