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</font><font size="6">Would begin <font color="#ff0000" size="7">typing</font><font size="6"> in an hour or two!!</font></font><font size="6" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">
</font><font size="6" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">So an update coming up late night!!! Anyone waiting????</font><font size="6" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">
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Hi friends!!! Feeling so good to read all the lovely comments and see so many likes dears!! Thank you sooo much!!!😳
A few days back, I had written something on the massive tragedy that happened in Delhi, I posted it on the blog… Here's the link for it dears…
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This update is exclusively dedicated to RITZY09…. Ritzy Di…. Thank yu for the wonderful idea!! Though me hoping I have done justice to you lovely idea… Sorry!!! If I haven't!!!
Me in advance sorry dears, if this update is not up to the mark!!! And yup no killing at the end!!!😉
PART - 9
While having the 'Shaahi Bath' Maan arranged for her, Geet truly felt super happy… She had seen such arrangements in only films and secretly had always dreamt of it, seems her dream man was hell bent on making all her dreams true!!! Just the thought of Maan made her cheeks warm, slowly she just relaxed and let the feeling of warm water and soothing fragrance take over her senses!!!
After a few minutes, slow music started playing in the background making Geet startled… She looked around trying to locate the source of the music, she was about to step out of the bathtub when two warm hands held her shoulders from behind… A shocked Geet was about to shout but when those slender hands started massaging her back, she recognized the touch instantly!!! She turned her head to look at him questioningly but Maan didn't let her turn…
"Shhh… Just relax Jaan let me pamper you…" Maan purred in her ears, making her squirm all the more!!!
Geet was about to protest but then the sinful hands started their work, she involuntary sighed and her body just relaxed!!!
Maan's expert hands just pressed all the points on her neck and spine at just the right places, while the sensuous scent of the oil just added to the effect!!! Geet just felt as of she was in heaven…
"Enjoying sweetheart???" Maan questioned her lovingly already knowing the answer, as all her reactions were clearly exhibiting how much she was enjoying!!!
"Hmmm…" Geet could just let out a moan as the magical hands slowly travelled up the spine releasing all her tired knots on the way!!!
Maan removed his hands for a while making Geet whimper…
"Ummm????"
"Just a second Jaan…" Maan cooed his impatient Jaan while dabbing the next set of oils in his palm and applying it gently on her soft sensitive scalp…
Geet couldn't help but shudder as the cool oil slowly spread throughout her hair!!! Maan slowly massaged her scalp in soft circles making Geet relax completely!!! Geet slowly felt herself slipping into a relaxed semi consciousness state while Maan continued his work…
Geet mind was completely relaxed and all this pampering made her drift to the painful memories of the last few days, when her savior, her Maan was not with her…
It has been two days since she was kept captive in this god-forsaken place… Though her hands and legs were tied while she was blindfolded as well, but she could still make out she was in some sort of an isolated place that maybe had burnt recently as the she could smell burnt rubber….
The sounds she heard around her were almost minimal, barring occasional shuffling of feet when one of those kidnappers came to check on her. She could once in a while feel soft brushing up of mice scurrying around against her feet making her shudder… The smell of burnt scarp made her feel like puking, in fact she would have puked at least 10 times till now but it was impossible on an empty stomach… Yes! She not even a single morsel of food had gone in her stomach since last 3 days, since she was kidnapped!!!
Occasionally one of the kidnappers used to come and pierce an injection on her hand to make her unconscious or to make her drink some water before injecting that drug but that was it!!! Geet was not the one to wallow in self-pity, she was a strong girl and had her senses on alert when she gained consciousness, and she had tried tugging the ropes on her wrist to loosen them or anything that might let her escape… But three days had went by and she was growing weak… Slowly she was loosing the spirit… She couldn't help but think about her Maan-
Aaj chali main ek iss raah par…
Na koi manzil, na koi hai dar…
Bas sochoon aaj main yeh…
Kaafila ka yeh rukh mohey kahaan le jaave???
Zindagi ki yeh dor kab kahaan tham jaaye???
O saiyaara tere dil ki kya dua hai???
O saiyaara tohey kya abb hua hai??
Bas yeh soch hui main yahaan shamil…
Ki khuda hai Kaafiley ki manzil!!!
Par kya pata tha yeh mujhe…
Ki bas khatam aaj samaa hai…
O saiyaara tere dil ki kya dua hai???
O saiyaara tohey kya abb hua hai???
She came out of her thoughts when she heard the door creaking, as one of the kidnappers entered… The shuffling of feet got closer to her…. From the sound of footsteps she could make out that there were at least more than two people here… To be on safe side, she pretended to be still unconscious…
"Lagtaa hai ladki abhi bhi behosh hai…" the first person checked on her and concluded….
"Achchhaa hai… Waise zyada overdose mat dena… Marni nahi chaiyeh ye…" The second person warned…
Oh god!! Geet was actually able to make out who this person was, though she had her fingers crossed hoping that she was wrong!!!
"Marr bhi jaaye toh kya farak padta hai…" The third person spat…
No! No! No!! It can't be… Geet's mind screamed!!!
"Nahi abhi ye marni nahi chaiyeh…Abhi hamara kaam pura nahi hua hai… Kaam pura hine ke baad tum khud jaise chaaho waise issey maar sakti ho…"Person 2 consoled person 3…
"Ha ha ha haha!! Bilkul… issey toh main tadpa tadpa kar maaroongi…"Person 3 started laughing maniacally!!!
"Sahib waise iss ladki ke khaane ka kuchh bandobast karna padega,… nahi toh yeh zyada din tak nahi tik paayegi…" Person 1 told the other persons!!!
"Theek hai yeh lo kuchh paise… abb hum chaltey hain… Kuchh bhi baat ho toh mujhe call kar dena…" Person 2 handed out a few 100-rupee notes to person 1…
"Chaliye Mohinder Ji…" Person 3 exclaimed!!!
PRECAP
Arrey!!! Maan's surprise is still incomplete!!!😉
And
Smart Maan to find out something!!!😲
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Okies!! Now me feeling great after days after writing the TWISHHHT!! Hope you liked it too dears!! he eh eh!!! 😆
Awww those who aren't very happy, trust me dears, you are gonna love the twist!!!😳
Hope the spa portion was good!! 😳
Hope you all felt Geet's pain dears!! Me actually was clueless how to write Geet's situation!! hope me did justice!!!
Pweez pay me a visit on my Blog too dears- Ruchi's DEN!!!!
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