New York Times Part 31 Updated in Thread 2 - Page 5

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

You think this Maan is different?

This I said because basically we got to know about Maan No.1(if I can put it that way) too less i.e.he was was too silent with very constricted emotions, dialogues and PDA before marriage and even after marriage sometimes. He was like how Geet knew him, how do I put it?😕

It was like when she said "Aap mere liye complicated ho". I really din't know what he thought or about his next move.
I just switched up his monologue and brought it before their Lagi moment.

Thats really a very good thing , now we get to know a hint of what he thought when he saw her for the first time.

Last time around, he had the same preoccupation and attitude about Daadima's obsession to get him married and towards women in general.

Sure he was surly too, questioning why they always tripped and fell in-front of him to get his attention,

I knew only one thing what he thought about women, when he thought of Geet that "she does'nt see him like others who walk past him see."

but I had twisted it a bit around and said the same thing that he only sought them out until they kept their distance and wasn't throwing themselves at him.
And then I was new to reading stories, may be I din't grasp what you wanted to convey.
Surely everything is more explicit, given that the ellipses have been filled with a burst of words...😆

That is what hooked me through , I was like is Maan thinking soo much , that too about women?

And of course, would like to hear that NY times 2 was better than the first one...I'm only asking to be approved of not having spoiled it for all of you :)

Spoiled , are you kidding , I like... , no no correction, love your writing style👏, I even endup reading, rereading all the comments you give on this thread, you will surely rock lady.

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