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Posted: 12 years ago
Maitlee the original NYT is totally different to the new version therefore comparing the new version with the old will make it confusing

Yes it does take two people to make marriage work, but in this case when a husband like Dev has no time or more importantly a woman wants to feel wanted by her husband why should a woman be blamed for it? Dev has his dreams Geet had her dreams to follow many couples follow their dream but the end result does not end with divorce.

In today's society most Asian marriages are failing & I love how H has covered this issue.

Maan did make Geet feel something which she's never felt before, the only way I can describe in simple words is she felt alive. From a reader's view I have question for Dev why did she not feel this way with him?

U spoke about rebound, Geet having feelings for Maan, interesting thought.

Close your eyes could have many meanings, time to think, ignore whats taking place & hope when woken up the nightmare was a nightmare.

As a woman I feel for Geet, she's in a new city on her own to face a huge turn to life all one her own while Dev has already washed his hands & is flying out of his city for his joy.

H 😆 I was only being nice if only Dev was in front of me I would have allowed him to tell all what I did to him
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Hasini 3 Updates in a row.
Looks like Eid day has come a bit early this year for me.
Feels soo good to reread NYT once again. Reliving the memories.
Hats off to you Hasini for being such a fabulous writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
words really fail to comply what I wish to tell about her plight.
Your writing is brilliant.
hope she listens to her insides and close her eyes!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Whispers of the wind - As much as she was expecting Dev to be around on this day, when she sat by herself on the pool chair, it was Maan's words that were bothering her. She wanted to know why he excluded himself from her world (metaphorically).

Also, Maan's actions perplex me a little bit too... for instance, I am still confused about whether he realizes his feelings for her or not... If not, then I am surprised that he excluded himself from her world. Why would he unless he realizes that given her current state, his presence would complicate things much more for her?

Pensive IV - I liked his confusion about whether or not to have the shirt washed... but could not understand it much. Again, it is slightly confusing to me at the moment whether he realizes his feelings for her or not. I think he just thinks she is someone special... but then, his thoughts about her words about him not being a part of her New York etc are... I am absolutely loving the confusion too... but I want to know if it is intended to be this way, or if I missed a bus.

Disappearing man - Well, what else could be expected of Dev. H, u did complete justice to this part of the story...(not that u have missed any parts so far, but this turned out to be what I had expected). I liked her reaction... As painful as it was, it was also realistic. She was forced to marry Dev against her will at an age when she did not even know what was happening with her... and since then, she has lived with him under the same roof. Whether or not as husband or wife, they shared some relationship, and leaving that behind can be difficult for anyone, including Dev... and his email showed that too... and her wanting to believe that it is all a bad dream, heart wrenching...

In all, 3 fantastic updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago
well...hmmm...3 updates!!! 26...i loved it...:) 28??? i dint xpect dat...
w8ng for ur next update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...
geet still believes dev will come back...
Oh got this is so emotional...
What was her fault that she has to go through this...
I just wish Maan helps her to come out of this blackness which is consuming Geet...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing
Read all the three parts.

Loved the terrace part Maan
Noticing Geet's every feature.
Their convo was gud. Liked it.
Maan eating Geet's jhoota.
Wow u named every food item
Wid the convo. I didn't expect kapakand.

Geet trying to stop Maan. Her movements
Were highlighted

Pensive was again fabulous. I like
It frm Maan's.pov. He has kept the
Shirt as it is. Sumwere he is feeling for
Her.

Dev's letter of making separate ways.
Geet break down. But she os in control
Of herself unlike last one.

Hope this time Too Maan supports her.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
more once I read all the updates.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

I am still confused about whether he realizes his feelings for her or not... If not, then I am surprised that he excluded himself from her world. Why would he unless he realizes that given her current state, his presence would complicate things much more for her?


Priti, You have been a wonderful support :) Thanks girl.

Yes and No to your question. Once he acknowledges his feeling for her, then what? There is no going from there when she is very much married and he's is not willing to speculate on where he stands in her life.

Its like falling in love with a vista, you have to remain at the crest to still have a view of it. He believes that she is more unattainable than everything else in his life.


Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
did he just broke up with her over e-mail...😳...i mean now i c we have moved into an era that has no personal...face to face conversations...otherwise I would have surely hit a man like dev...😆

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