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Posted: 12 years ago

#1021

Originally posted by: Onir

Now that he's found such beautiful bonding with her, he doesn't want to lose out on it by wrongly naming it' unless he is not able to break free from all that's holding him back from placing his trust again on someone without having a fear of it being broken'.

Now that is the question I have been waiting for...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1022

Originally posted by: crazydream
TIME

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THREAD.

I'm hoping to finish two more updates here...😊

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1023

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Honestly, I understand it can be a bit freaky when you are so in-tune with the story. Its such a great honor to have you spend this time into looking for these details.

But what are you planning to do? Do tell 😊...I can give you free reign on this thread, for there is another New York Times in bloom in your words.

The funniest thing that has happened ever since I have been writing for the last year or so: I'm writing two updates simultaneously. 😆 Just wanted to share that bit, because I'm being blown away with the multitasking that my brain has suddenly become capable of.

Freaky ... don't ask I was waiting the whole day to just put it down here... befor my mind goes into an overdrive mode...😆

I don't know seriously... If you have something to offer please bring it on hopefully it will do some good...

Oh really ... would love to be privy to all those updates...

Multitasking does sometimes become a pain...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1024

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Now that is the question I have been waiting for...

Seriously man... how can you again trust someone after you've been shattered & left to pick up the pieces on your own... especially someone whom you gave so much importance that you gave them the power to hurt you. You do become quite guarded & protective towards self to save you from again going through it

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1025

I'm hoping to finish two more updates here...😊

😊 ...😍

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1026

I left with the visual of the most romantic update with them on the swing with Anshu and am returning to her in a ball of pain. Such a journey from one moment to the other that life brings people to. The spectrum of emotions that you took us all through was amazing.

Totally loved the karvachauth continuation at the gym sit out. The minute details that he observes about her; the casual eating of her papad, then the sweet. Her finishing off the rest of the kalakand and realizing that she ate his jhoota too. He realized via Meera and Yash's conversation about her life. I have a feeling that the change and openness that came about in Maan is also connected to this. The Pensieve parts are new and I think it makes him more endearing.

I can't believe the most insensitive and cruel way in which Dev broke up with her. Knowing what is to come I am super excited to read more. Loved it all. Obviously except the last one, I will be reading it again. Thanks for updating.

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honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1027

beautifully written hasini...awesome parts...loved it...😊

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1028

Part 28... 😭 quite sad for her. My heart goes out to her...

But what's with the title... : " The disappearing men" did you mean men or man...

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Originally posted by: had2bu
I had left with the visual of the most romantic update with them on the swing with Anshu

I have a feeling that the change and openness that came about in Maan is also connected to this.

Ah! the swing is here to stay...I think. I have another update planned with it.

Its just the different kind of awe that she raises in him, when they are so much alike and yet different.

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Originally posted by: Onir
Part 28... 😭 quite sad for her. My heart goes out to her...

But what's with the title... : " The disappearing men" did you mean men or man...

Its a typo and one I'm unable to correct yet. Will think of another title and name it.

Or you can give me one. 😊