MAKE YOU MINE AT ANY COST ...last part ..pg 137

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will be waiting dear
but update other too dear
pls dear
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MAAN SINGH KHURANA






GEET HANDA



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The atmosphere in the handa haveli was not something one would expect …. It was the marriage of the smallest daughter of the handas … the barat had arrived and the dulha was also there but some thing as wrong … all the guests were looking at the scene unfolding there …. The brothers of the dulhan were shouting and there was a huge argument going on …..

Mr.handa – yeh kya tamasha hai savitri devi ??? aapka pota aise kaise kar sakta hai ????

Savitri devi – hum sarminda hain hamare pot eke liye ….

Mrs.handa – sarminda hone se kya meri beti ki zindegi sudhar jaegi ???? mandap main saadi toot gayi … kaun karega meri ladki se saadi …..

Brij – meri behan ki zindegi barbad karke aapka pota aise nahin ja sakta ….

DEV !!!!!

Just then they heard a loud male voice and turned to see tej coming there holding a sword in his hand followed by 3 other men with swords ….

Meri behan ki zindego barbad karke tu kisi aur ke saath nahin ja sakta ….

As he was ready to strike him maan came in front of him ….

Mana ki mere bhai ne galti ki par aapka yeh haq nahin ki aap mere bhai ko marne ki osis karein mr. tej handa …. Waise bhi hogi aapki behan koi gaun ki gawar and she doesn't deserves to marry dev singh khurana … he is my brother … mere family ke pressure main aake isne saadi ke liye haan keh di .. but he deserves the best and the girl he has choosen is the best … he gets the best and not some village girl who doesn't even knows how to speak properly …

How dare you …..

He shouted and with that the four of them were ready to strike him when they heard a scream…..

VEERJI… NAHIN ….

And it stopped every movement in the room … and then she ran down the stairs …. Every eyes had stopped on her … she was looking like a princess there …. Wearing a red coloured lehenga .. and ornaments she ran down to her brothers

…..


Tej – tu andar ja geet … aaj hum in logon ko nahin chodenge …..

Geet – veerji … chodiye … kya kar rahein aap …

Kul – tu janti nahin geet .. in logon ne kya kiya hai …..

Geet – kul veerji … please chodiye … maine sab sun liya hai …

Kul – hum in logon ko …..

Geet – kuch nahin karenge aap log yahan pe …..

Brij – tej chod ..geet ko baat karne de … un logon se ….

He said in a strict voice that ment the end of discussion …. The four threw the swords and looked at the khuranas with fire in their eyes …..

Dev came forward to her and stood with his head lowered … and then there was complete silence …. After some time geet just laughed lightly and it attracted attention of every one …. Dev looked at her with wide eyes ….

Geet – can I see her dev ??? she asked smiling

And then from behind came anathor girl who was shocked to see geet …..

Dev – she is nain …

But before he could complete his sentence the girl hugged geet to which she returned….

Girl – geet ????

Geet – naintara … oh my god ….. now I am glad that this marriage is broken ….

Dev – you two know each other ????

Naina – of course we do … you don't know her ??? my ….

Geet – best friend …. Geet completed the sentence that she had left….

Naina – I am sorry … I didn't knew it geet …

Geet – hah !!! chod yaar …. Waise bhi tum log mile kab ????

Naina stayed quiet …..

Geet – don't tell me yesterday ????? … in my mehandi ceremony ?????

Naina – had I known that he is going to be your husband …. I am really very sorry … I wont stay a second now .. he didn't even tell me that he is the groom ….

And with that naina was starting to go when geet said in a loud and clear voice ….

I am calling off this marriage naina .. it will never happen even if you choose to walk out now ….

But by that time naina had walked out already.. it followed a complete silence .. a heavy one … mrs.khurana was walking towards geet to say some thing when geet said …

Do you love her dev ????

Dev – what ????

Geet – I asked do you love her ???? she said as she looked up …..

Dev – yah …

Geet – then go and get her ….. geet laughed as she said that … you I have very little tolerating power before I can stop my brother from killing you .. so run ….

Dev – thanks ….

Geet – all the best …. She said and gave a thumps up and smiled …..

As the khuranas were starting to go she called them …

Excuse me mrs .savitri devi …..

She said as she went to her and took out her pair of bangels … her mang tikka and her payal and gave it to her …

Savitri devi – yeh sab ????

Geet – shagun the … jab rishta hin nahin to shagun kyun ???

She said as she took off her chunar and gave it ….. as the went out with them 10 servents came holding every cloth .. every jwelery and every material they had given to the handas since the relation was made with them ….

Maan – its good that koi gaun ki gawar hamari khandan ki bahu nahin ban rahi hai ….

And was about to sit in the car when A voice was heard …..

Bechare handa … Mumbai main rehte hain …. Aapni beti ko London bheja tha … doctor hain … mandap main saadi toot gayi… najane aab kya karenge ……




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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow. loved it. maan as usual his arrogent self. geet sounds really mature. but we will find out soon. wow the handas are different. thank god they are not typical orthodox male dominant family.pls update soon. cant wait for your next pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx for the pm
awesome start
mind blowing update
loved it
now maan will know that geet isn't village girl n she's educated
update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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great update
ohhh maan's face will be worth watching listening to that guy
thanks for pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing start..
geet was vry good
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ossum start dear
really waiting fr the next prt
pls update soon

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