MAKE YOU MINE AT ANY COST ...last part ..pg 137 - Page 41

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plz update part5 want to read it plz plz plz plz plz
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hi dear,... when will you update this one..
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sorry gies ...

results declared and am totally busy in the admission process ... so at most it will take few more days for the admission procedure to complete and then i will update regularly ...

promise ...

thanks for tolerating dear ...

all i ask is little more patient ...

thank you all gies ...
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we will be surely waiting dear complete ur admission process then update but regularly ok😳
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He wasn't mentally ill...ryt????? It was a drama... I m sure about it...
Now he don't want geet to that he traped her...i hope you'll update soon..
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it was one of those days when the peoples should feel happy and elated … for it was the mehandi and sangeet function of a marriage … so it was a occasion to be happy .. and all were except one … and the one was not some ordinary character but was the main character of the wedding because she was the bride of the wedding ….

While the whole handa haveli was decorated with lights and flowers and the sounds from it did say it was a saadi wala ghar …. The dulhan was sitting on a road that passed through the long and wide lake that marked the entrance of their village … but all had to go at least 5 kms inside to come in contact with the real population ……

Geet was sitting on the road and had covered her face with her duppata … it was 1 day to her wedding and today was her mehandi and sangeet … but she had a nagging feeling for this wedding.. she had not yet seen the groom for he had to come yet… but she knew few things about him … he was known as maan singh khurana … was MD of khurana groups .. and the rest she had not bothered to hear about him …

She had known about this weeding and for this one she had been called from USA to get her married…. Hell!!! The moon was still up in the sky and was reflected in the pond whose water was clean and clear and confident …. She thought and chuckeled to herself as her inner joke ….

A slow breeze passed by her and she secured her duppata around herself and covered her face with her duppata leaving her eyes and looked at the water below enjoying few moments of peace to herself for she knew she would have to wait for anathor 24 hours to come here again to be in peace …. She was so indulged in her thoughts that she didn't realize the presence of a shadow near her until she saw a face near her face in the pond …. The moment her eyes were set on the face … something happened inside her … a current passed through her body slowly and it started from her heart … in her life she had seen so many men but this feeling of a dj-vu was not experienced with anyone …

Their reflection was a sight to behold …. Just beneath the moon there was geet's eyes and beside her was the reflection of that man…. But before she could turn to see him herself he sat near her in the same fashion dangling their feets down ….. they were silent for a long time just sitting by it and said nothing and enjoying the view….

"Why does it happens with us ??? ".. he asked suddenly and looked at geet …

"Well because it is destined to happen " Geet said .. she didn't bother to ask about what he was referring …

And then the silence again continued … as the dawn was about to break she got up to go .. as she got up she again heard him asking …. " who are you ????" to which she just turned back and smiled while she said …"just a friend …"

And as she walked suddenly her duppata stuck in a near by tree and when she turned around to get it out her leg slipped and she was about to fall in the pond when he suddenly held her hand and pulled her to him …..

"are you ok????" he asked and turned his face to look at him and realized it was his mistake because the moment he saw her face moon started to fade in her comparision … almond coloured doe shaped eyes , sweet sloped nose , rose tainted cheeks , a small fore head where he had a strong urge to kiss her there … and her kissable lips that were now apart and her cheast heaving up and down ….

"yah I am … thanks " she said as she gained her breaths and looked up to him only to see him looking at her with a emotion she couldn't put her finger to …. But by then she knew one fact that had become universal that this one moment of her life was the moment that would be forever imprinted on her heart , mind and soul …

as her car stopped in front of the khurana mansion she was brought out of her thought …

" are you ok ????" some one asked shaking her … "geet ??? dr.handa ???" the voice continued when she didnt reply … she looked at dr.sasank beside her and then it dawned on her that she had went back to the time she had first met maan ….

"yah uncle I am al right …" she replied as she smiled at him to reassure him that she was actually all right …. She got out of the car and waited for dr.sasank to join her … as he came near her she said …" uncle do I really have to come ??? "

"beti… believ me it was important.. he was your patient and also is a trustee of our hospital.. we cant upset him now can we ??? we cant also ignore his invitation he he himself came to give me and asked your presence …" he tried to explain it to her .. he knew every thing about her past and in a few weeks she had become like her daughter .. he also knew the nature of the khuranas and it was also one of the reasons he had brought her there was to show them who actually dr.geet handa was ….. also to make geet aware of few things … "well may I ????" he asked as he took out his hand an dgeet put her hand in his and laughed as they walked inside the mansion ….

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The moment she entered the mansion she felt like running away but for her uncle she stayed there … maan was throwing a party for seemingly he had returned to india to take over now …. And then she saw aman walking towards them ….

"hie geet … " aman said as he hugged her .. in a short time aman had become a sweet and a very understanding friend of her that she forever wanted to cherish …. "well geet I said I wanted to introduce you to my dad ????"

"yup… who is he ???" geet asked …

"dr.sasank gupta …. An di am his son aman gupta …." Aman said giving a shock to geet ….

"what uncle is your father ??? you didn't tell me aman …" geet said faking a anger ….

"sorry .. but it was a surprise .. well I have anathor surprise for you .. well it would be shocking … " aman said …

"now what is it ???" geet asked and just them maan came there in his trademark attitude ….. he touched dr.sasank's feet and hugged him…

"I missed you mamu …." He said and it was a shock to geet ….

"you are his uncle ???? you are mrs.khurana's brother ???" she was shocked and angry ….. she looked at him for some time …. "but you weren't there in the weeding right ???"

"no we weren't there .. actuaaly geet .. I am maan's cousine … but we never had any relation with the khuranas .. we hated them for how they treated maan and then after the marriage incident .. all our relations broke with them .. we are here just because maan wanted dad to comr here before he shifts to shimla for ever …." He said and geet did understand and smiled at aman ….

And then they saw the khurana family entering the hall and geet turned her face away …. But then suddenly some one collided with her and her a drink fell on her dress and that same time the power went off ….

"come let me show you the washroom .." aman said as he held her hand and led her to the seconf floor of the mansion which was pin-drop silence and went to the very end of it …. "well this is a guest room … you can freashen up here …"

"here??? In the second floor ???" geet asked in a doubtful manner …

"well here we have spare dresses naw … so I thought that you can change if you want …." He said and though she couldn't see him but knew by now he would be giving a cute expression … she nodded and walked inside the room …. It was not hard for her find the washroom for there was lights there and as she came out of the washroom she thought to stay for some time in the balcony… she walked into the balcony where the wind was flowing slowly and it gave chills to her bare arm but then as she thought that she should go back she felt something pass thorough her … it was not a unknown sensation .. she was very well aware of this feeling and she wished against all odds it to be wrong … she closed her eyes and clutched her hands on the railing when she felt a unmistakable heat on her back…

"you still can feel me … " she heard his husky voice and then felt a hand going on her waist in a slow way .. and anathor hand moving her hairs aside … she wanted to say but nothing came out of her mouth except a slow moan… and he smirked …. "I still effect you don't I ????"

Geet took a deep breath and said …"what are you doing mr.khurana ???" as she put her hand on top of his that was on her waist to take it out but she was unsuccessful as he held her hand and then slowly brought his anathor hand along with hers and held them tightly …..

"you haven't seen my room yet have you hosanna ?????" he said and before she could react he piced her up and took her to his room and switched on the lights and then looked at who was looking down …. He took her and let her slide down his body making the farmhouse incident a freash in her mind …. He turned her around and felt her body stiff because of the picture in front of her .. it was her picture in the green outfit that she had wore during her mehendi and had his name written on her palm …. It was the exat moment when the women wrote his name on her palm and she was sitting there with her head down ….

The function was going on with full pomp and shore … the haveli was filled with music and songs .. while geet was sitting in the middle wearing a beautiful green coloured ghagra , with minimal makeup with her hairs left open and with two ladies on both side putting her mehendi … but her mind was somewhere else .. on that stranger .. in three words he had done something her heart …. All the loud music and everything was falling on her deaf ears … but she did register what one of the ladies asked her …….

"aapke whoh ka naam kya hai ???"

"maan " she said in a robotic way .. all giggeled thinking that she was thinking about her honewala …. But she knew better … the mehandi was over and her hands were half dried and she was walking down the corridor when she heard a commotion in the room of her daarji …. And there was un mistakable voices that she clearly recognized as her family and of her future in laws . and she could make some sense of the conversation but what she heard took her breath away and before she could control herself she barged into the room and stood there looking at her future in laws … she looked at the head of the khurana family savitri khurana and just asked one question ..

"why ???" this one word was so strong that it took off their senses …. But what she got was total silence to which she suddenly laughed a slow one and shook her head … and then asked …"well at least can you tell who is the guy with whom I was to get married ????" but then again she got a total silence and then she tried hard to control her anger and went directly to her future father-in –law and said ….

"you just cant keep quiet after almost destroying every thing …. " she said in a loud voice ….

"it was a mistake … you were about to get married to dev not maan …. And that man send you the picture of maan instead of dev … when today we got to know about it we called here and asked to stop the mehendi … but …." He said

"stop the mehandi ??? do you mean this mehandi mr.khurana ????" geet asked in a mocking way and showed her hand where the mehendi had taken a deep colour and maan's name was visible …. "this mehendi that has your elder son's name instead of your younger one ????"

"so whats the big deal in that ??? it was just a mistake I just don't get why you gies are making a big deal out of it …." She heard a familiar voice behind her…. She didn't want to turn around because she feared the worst but at last she turned and her fears were proved right … it was him .. that same man …. She just looked at him with first shock and then hatred in her face ….

"maan bhai …" a young man from behind came up to him …. She recognized that man to be dev … so he was maan singh khurana ….

"I am maan singh khurana…my family said it was a mistake and why are you making a big deal of it ??? come on you were the bride and you had to get married in the khurana family who ever the khurana boy be …. It is an arranged marriage not some love that you are reacting as such….. " maan said in his usual arrogant attitude …..

Every one expected her to shout and do such things as usual but all she did was to stare at maan for a long time before she walked back to the door to go out when she suddenly stopped and asked ….

"answer my one question mr.khurana … was it all planned ???? "

"it was all planned …." She said quietly and this time it was maan who turned stiff … "then and even now … waasnt it ????" \

His hold loosened on her and she took off his hand from her waist and turned to look at him .. and smiled a sad one …. "you broke my heart then and you broke it now…." She took few steps back as he tried to step towards her ….

"you broke my trust just after I had begun trusting you even without knowing who you are .. and then you broke my heart now after I had fallen in love with you …."

She said as a lone tear threatened to fall from her eye …..

"do you know three months I had been living in uncertainity … if you will remember me or not … yes or no … yes or no … and then after 3 months you didn't even recognize me …. Kitne baar aap hospital aaye … phir bhi aapne hamein pehchana tak nahin ….."

She said as at last the drop fell from her eyes … maan couldn't control himself …. And went to her and held her tightly .. she started to protest but he was way too strong for her ….

"no .. no.. no… I didn't do it knowingly … that day I was rude because somewhere deep inside I wanted to break your marriage with dev … because now I realized that I had fallen in love with you at the day when I had seen your eyes… and then in the hospital .. It was because of my family … my father wouldn't have hesitated to kill you ... I wanted to secure your safety first and then …. " he tried to tell ….

"lie …its all a lie maan …. " she said as she at last loosened herself from his hold… "aapne tab bhi mujhe takleef diya tha aur aaj bhi sirf takleef hin diya hai …. Main hin bewakoof thi … kea apse pagalon ki tarah pyar kar baithi thi …." She said as she wiped her tears

"nahin aisa mat kahiye please …. Hosanna …. Main aapse …" he started to say when she cut him off ….

"don't call me that maan…. Only the maan I knew had the right to call me hosanna .. not you… you are not the maan I knew or had fallen in love with … "

She said as she closed her mouth with her hand and ran away before she could cry there ….

" bohat pyar karta hoon …." Maan completed the sentence as he saw her retreating figure and realized that he had indeed hurt his princess …

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Geet ran down just in time as she was in the line of vision of others she wiped away her tears and smiled at others and stood near aman as if nothing had happened …. But aman asked …

"he did make you cry didn't he???"

Geet was shocked to hear it …. "so it was indeed planned …. Was it ????" her voice held accusation…

"I know I have earned your hatred geet .. but at least listen once to him before you do anything …" he said … but before geet could reply the lights went dim and a voice was heard ….

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LcFvod0Fhbk

Dil.. hote jo..
Mere seene mein do
Doosra dil bhi mein
Tumhe deta todhne ko ..

As the lights foused on the singer all were stunned to find maan standing and singing … and just then few girls joined ..

Ho..o.. Hossana.. Hosanna..oo
Ho..o.. Hossana.. Hosanna..oo

And then maan remembered the evening he had first seen that girl sitting near the pond and the reflection of her eyes in the water …

Dilkash thi woh shaam
Pehle peher jabke tumse mili thi nazar
Aisa chakkar aaya ke
Ab yeh na jaanu ke
Jaun toh jaun kidhaar ??


Hosanna
Tu samne thi ek paal
Hosanna

Agle he paal thi ojhal
Abb kya bataaon main
Kis haal mein hoon main ?
Yaha waha bus apna
Dil aur hosh dhunta hoon main

Hosanna

Madhoshi deewangi
Hosanna
Main aur teri bandagi
Hosanna
Ab hai yehi zindagi
Hosanna

Every one looked shocked at maan as they came to know that the maan singh khurana had fallen in love with some one and they indeed wanted to know what he felt for her and who was she …

Everybody wanna know I feel like a i like a
I really want to be here with you ..
Is that enough to say that ..
We are made for each other,
It's love that is hosanna true ..
Hosanna.. Be there when u callin' I will be there
Hosanna..Feeling like my whole life will changed..
I never want to be the same..
Its time we rearrange
I take a step,
You take a step and me calling out to you..
Hello ..
Hello..
Hello..

Hosanna..

Hosanna..Ho..

Hosanna..Ho..

Oh..

It was a benefit that no one knew that he called geet hosanna … and so no one knew that he was talking about her but all the time he was looking at her and was singing and knew that his hosanna would understand him .. then suddenly saw a butterfly sitting on a flower ..

Udhati hui titalli(butterfly) ki rangeen parchayi
Reh jaati hai phoolon mein
Waise hi tum ik tasveer ke jaise
Chahye ho inn aankhon mein
Hosanna
Tum joh mera khwaab ho
Hosanna
Dil kyun na betaab ho

Kahoon toh kya kahoon
Main kyun dewaana hoon
Tumhare baare mein hi
Har ghadi main sochta hoon kyun

Hello..
Hello..
Hello..
Hello..
Hello..
Hello..

Hosanna
Ab din ho ya raat ho
Hosanna
Dil chahe tum saath ho
Hosanna
Bus haathon mein haath ho
Hosanna

Dil.. hote jo..
Mere seene mein do
Doosra dil bhi mein
Tumhe deta todhne ko ..

Dil.. hote jo..
Mere seene mein do
Doosra dil bhi mein
Tumhe deta todhne ko ..

He was sure that his hosanna will forgive him …. But as he started to walk towards her she turned back and ran out and the sound of her foot steps were drowned by the loud thunder of claps by the people but in his ears he could only hear her foot steps going out of his mansion while the thunderous claps fell on his deaf ears ….

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"you have already hurt her a lot maan … " aman said as they were sittingin his office and were having their tea …

"I know … all because of my stupid family …. " maan said as anger coarsed through him…

"its high time you need to take a strong step … geet is a girl once if she goes you wont be able to bring her back even if every thing you do maan… so you need to do something quick !!!" aman said …

"I know … I am thankful to you for you had been with her during the time as her friend …" maan said gratitude heavy in his voice….

"come on she is my friend well a very best friend… " aman said because he felt so …

"but how do I make it up to her ???" he asked his brother for he was totally inexperienced in this way ….

"well how about seduction ???" aman piped in …

"never .. you don't how responsive she is … I am afraid trying to seduce I wont be able to control myself to rip her…."

"GEZZZ…… " aman shouted before maan could continue further …"damn you maan .. she is going to be my bhaibi … I don't want to hear these gandha gandha things about her …."

"sorry …." Maan said .."but I love her yaar …. What shall I do ???? she is so angry that wont even look into my face badi muskil se I have asked 24 hours of her …."

"then seduction is the only way you can make her listen to you … else she wont listen to you …." Aman said to him as he looked at him with a crooked smile …

"of course bro…. seduction but in maan singh khurana style … be aware hosanna … I am coming to do gandha gandha things with you … "

Next …..

Seduction …. 24 hours ….. what is going to happen ?????




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