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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

Seems like the affection seeking ones are under fire here so just a word in my defense. They made a baby together. I just want to go into the part where Maan was more open to her. Where her seeking him was reciprocated. This Maan is so closed and controlled and controlling, he is not likeable to me at all. I want to go back to a time where all shields were off. The truth of their togetherness, the love he is still trying to protect. Maybe a dream scene if not anything in the present. Then perhaps the justification for his behavior can make sense to me. Again just my POV. Waiting for more eagerly.


I completely respect your view, & I agree to an extent, we all want to see more affection between the two. But like H said above, there are moments & glimpses where you do see that affectionate side of Maan, where he lets himself slip occasionally and a hint of the Maan he was before all this occured is seen, for eg the bathroom scene where she touches the tip of his ear & the old Maan resurfaces briefly.. I guess it's easier for him to close himself of from everything & from her, he is a very complex character.

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Posted: 13 years ago
This is my favorite quote of all times...From a woman in Love. And I will say that this applies very much to Maan in this FF.

I have racked my mind to date and never been able to tell why he ever fell for this Geet. And this quote helps me have a gleaning of the intenseness that must have been born inside him...and perhaps, help with your ill-feelings for him.

I cannot let you burn me up, nor can I resist
you. No mere human can stand in a fire and not be consumed.
Christabel LaMotte
Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am aware that I look like H's stalker now, commenting on everything 😆

But that quote is one I've come across before & it is absolutely breathtaking, I feel as if anyone who has loved before can somehow relate to that quote, as love eventually makes you give in no matter how hard you try not to fall.

Oh please have a scene where Maan says that to Geet! Even if it's just to her photograph or something, that quote feels like it was written for PDS' Maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
U askd abt agent series on MAANEET... dr ws 1 in my knowledge n though startng ws a bit filmy bt as the story progressd it gain beauty n maturity...bt thn d writr ws a medico so she got bsy in studies n ift dt stry in midway n thn i lst tab of it...
by d way my indicatn ws towrds Hllywood movies

regardng my thoughts thn Sorry yaar!! cz being Law studnt if i stard writng my thoughts I vl begin analysng the story... MAAN , GEET, SIDE CHARACTERS even THE MCH ALLEGED BOMBBLAST whch vl b an insult of PIAZZA n whch I cnt evn imagine...

cz i m unable to put a fingr on wht s or who s wrng... evryone seems to b in place...
so I btr wait eagrly fr nxt...read the chp. 2-4 tmes...close my eyes n sigh...dts wht i do whn i read ny of ur wrk...n m hpy to cntinue tht...

love

SANJH
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

This is my favorite quote of all times...From a woman in Love. And I will say that this applies very much to Maan in this FF.


I cannot let you burn me up, nor can I resist
you. No mere human can stand in a fire and not be consumed.
Christabel LaMotte

Beautiful quote. You are right, it does apply very well to Maan. Waiting for more soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
chap 4 The door shut behind him with more than a necessary thud. A sign, he said to himself. Some doors were better left shut than opened...And some never to have opened at all...

I need to read on to understand why Maan is behaving the way he is

Hasni this is exciting stuff u have written 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hasni yes this is something new for me also I am finding some parts funny & thank God u have a a small funny bone in you 😉

Chap 5

"No kidding..." Giovanna scoffed, straightening, "Says the man who couldn't do shit about the security of a L1 agent..."

"Aren't you two a little too old to be playing 'my job is better than you job...?'" Alistair walked in, peeking out through the one-way mirror at Geet who had her forehead resting on her folded hands that lay positioned at the edge of the table. 😆 Giovanna & Thor funny argument reminded me of how elder's argue in my house



The ending reminded me of 24 hrs series all of a sudden I have Kiefer Sutherland face on chap 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
Please..No Keifer sutherland...Anyone but him...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

Seems like the affection seeking ones are under fire here so just a word in my defense. They made a baby together. I just want to go into the part where Maan was more open to her. Where her seeking him was reciprocated. This Maan is so closed and controlled and controlling, he is not likeable to me at all. I want to go back to a time where all shields were off. The truth of their togetherness, the love he is still trying to protect. Maybe a dream scene if not anything in the present. Then perhaps the justification for his behavior can make sense to me. Again just my POV. Waiting for more eagerly.


So well said...i totally agree.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me like this stalker avatar of Geet...

Maan is still in denial of possible repercussions his actions could have had on Geet...his motive was only protection...but doesnt each action have an equal and opposite reaction?

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