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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element


Part 15 is what you are looking for. And you don't even have to go back in time for that. It is an update very much in the present.

I'm calling this update Molasses... syrup remaining after sugar is crystallized out of cane or beetjuice.

Waiting for this eagerly... Molasses reminds me that its time for some serious baking action.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

Seems like the affection seeking ones are under fire here so just a word in my defense. They made a baby together. I just want to go into the part where Maan was more open to her. Where her seeking him was reciprocated. This Maan is so closed and controlled and controlling, he is not likeable to me at all. I want to go back to a time where all shields were off. The truth of their togetherness, the love he is still trying to protect. Maybe a dream scene if not anything in the present. Then perhaps the justification for his behavior can make sense to me. Again just my POV. Waiting for more eagerly.

Agreed... I would also like to see those scenes where he was more of the Maan who is not so bounded by his "Mission Protection of Geet"...
Even I wouldn't mind if its even a flashback or even a dream scene...
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Oh i see that you have planned to add such a scene in part 15... Molasses... hmmm interesting... will be waiting for those... eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

This is my favorite quote of all times...From a woman in Love. And I will say that this applies very much to Maan in this FF.


I have racked my mind to date and never been able to tell why he ever fell for this Geet. And this quote helps me have a gleaning of the intenseness that must have been born inside him...and perhaps, help with your ill-feelings for him.

I cannot let you burn me up, nor can I resist
you. No mere human can stand in a fire and not be consumed.
Christabel LaMotte

👏 very apt... loved the quote!
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Posted: 13 years ago
In this time and day, I think this scene is more impractical than impossible ;) What say?

North and South: Chapter 52 (The last scene of the book)

Her voice had cleared itself and become more steady. Mr. Thornton did not speak, and she went on looking for some paper on which were written down the proposals for security; for she was most anxious to have it all looked upon in the light of a mere business arrangement, in which the principal advantage would be on her side. While she sought for this paper, her very heart-pulse was arrested by the tone in which Mr. Thornton spoke. His voice was hoarse, and trembling with tender passion, as he said: —
'Margaret!'
For an instant she looked up; and then sought to veil her luminous eyes by dropping her forehead on her hands. Again, stepping nearer, he besought her with another tremulous eager call upon her name.
'Margaret!'
Still lower went the head; more closely hidden was the face, almost resting on the table before her. He came close to her. He knelt by her side, to bring his face to a level with her ear; and whispered-panted out the words: —
'Take care. — If you do not speak — I shall claim you as my own in some strange presumptuous way. — Send me away at once, if I must go; — Margaret! — '
At that third call she turned her face, still covered with her small white hands, towards him, and laid it on his shoulder, hiding it even there; and it was too delicious to feel her soft cheek against his, for him to wish to see either deep blushes or loving eyes. He clasped her close. But they both kept silence. At length she murmured in a broken voice:
'Oh, Mr. Thornton, I am not good enough!'
'Not good enough! Don't mock my own deep feeling of unworthiness.'
After a minute or two, he gently disengaged her hands from her face, and laid her arms as they had once before been placed to protect him from the rioters.
'Do you remember, love?' he murmured. 'And how I requited you with my insolence the next day?'
'I remember how wrongly I spoke to you, — that is all.'
'Look here! Lift up your head. I have something to show you!' She slowly faced him, glowing with beautiful shame.
'Do you know these roses?' he said, drawing out his pocket-book, in which were treasured up some dead flowers.
'No!' she replied, with innocent curiosity. 'Did I give them to you?'
'No! Vanity; you did not. You may have worn sister roses very probably.'
She looked at them, wondering for a minute, then she smiled a little as she said —
'They are from Helstone, are they not? I know the deep indentations round the leaves. Oh! have you been there? When were you there?'
'I wanted to see the place where Margaret grew to what she is, even at the worst time of all, when I had no hope of ever calling her mine. I went there on my return from Havre.'
'You must give them to me,' she said, trying to take them out of his hand with gentle violence.
'Very well. Only you must pay me for them!'
'How shall I ever tell Aunt Shaw?' she whispered, after some time of delicious silence.
'Let me speak to her.'
'Oh, no! I owe to her, — but what will she say?'
'I can guess. Her first exclamation will be, "That man!"'
'Hush!' said Margaret, 'or I shall try and show you your mother's indignant tones as she says, "That woman!"'


I was reading the last scene of North and south and pleasantly surprised myself when I did not shun myself from adoring the propriety of conduct that was still present in such an intimate moment between Margaret and John Thorton. If the likes of the men from that period were Darcy and Thornton then you could only appeal to their sardonic humor and their disdain for everyone else by walking to the other end of the spectrum and carry oneself with poise and a practiced gentleness in appearance, gesture and character...(The list almost seem endless...tenderness in approach, a trained mind, personal wisdom, certitude in opinions). Those are just my thoughts...anyways...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ooh,the perfect heroes ever... Darcy and Thornton. You are right about them.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ah, Mr Thornton *sighs* & Darcy, how can anyone not love Darcy, after all he owns half of Derbyshire, even if it may be the miserable half 😆

Do you write PDS' Maan with Thornton & Darcy in mind? I feel as if he has a little bit of both in his character, that's just my opinion of course.


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Posted: 13 years ago
I don't know for sure...For me this Maan is the Kaushik from Unaccustomed Earth...(The self-denying fools that they are...) I don't think I have ever fallen for anyone as hard and fast as I have for him. And its been quite a while too, but I don't seem to have recovered from that crush at all.



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Posted: 13 years ago
ohh wow part 10 was awesome...he gave away...all those self control went down the drain...😊 eager to read the next part...willl comment after that
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 11..

she knew that much...and her questions were painful...ahhh cant wait to read the next part...and maan , hope he s safe
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part ...this story was never the my first preference among your other stories...but with the last few updates i have become a faaan of this story...i love G... y cant he stop taking her decisions...cant he just let her know everything...

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