SS:Piazza di Spagna - Part 12 Upd Aug 2nd - Page 34

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: undercoverhappy

chap 3 was jam packed it was as if i was abt to come out of my computer 😉


"Stupid is your middle name Maan, not mine" Delilah quipped and he rolled his eyes at the sometimes disbelieving sassy wit, their fellow agent, Thor had built into her system.

"Not you darling...now I wouldn't want to be so ungentleman like to you...would I?" He answered while his eyes remained on the screen.

"Stop hitting on me Maan...I'm already Thor's girl. Go find your own at the pub. There are 6 pubs within 2 miles of the Crypt" 🤣 even computer's have feelings

He called Delilah 'darling' 😍

will read chap 4 later on this is too good to leave it for the weekend what have u done H I am hypnotised to continue with this


Good to see you are here again...Keep them coming and you do have quite a bit to catch up missy.

I'm never good at writing light scenes and if that made you laugh, trust me, you made my day. Thank you :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjh89

I m speechless...

wantd to write mny thngs bt sry I culdnt...


I jst wnt my thoughts to b within me!!!!!!!!!!

love


SANJH



Oh! Do write...I ardently believe people always have something to say...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Oh! Common you can never ever give me long comments...🤗


So, does this mean you haven't read the precap yet? Maan has rubbed off on her. She has gone into stalker mode.



well I just read that , I have a doubt !! who is G speaking to . And does Maan know about it? update soon , my scalp is pricking. I think you are too modest to disagree that I wrote a long comment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
G is speaking to Maan...

Oh! not at all...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Now now
I shall say
I am lovin it.
Hope she makes him smile
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank god they are safe...phewww...
Maan didnt knew geet was pregnant...
Giovanna wants maan and geet together i guess...
Through how much pain both maan and geet are going...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally!!!! phew!! i liked it 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!!! Just wow!!! Amazingly well written!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Precap...


"Where have you been?", Giovanna sounded angry, "Check your email...Pronto..."

And then there was a click the very next instant as she hung up without giving him any context for the urgency she'd expressed.

In deliberate slow moves, he got to his laptop and clicked his way to the link which was the only content in the email. A small command window opened where he typed in his passcode after which a satellite feed came up. It was that of the Piazza, but his head was swollen with fuzz, from all that thinking he'd done all day and he couldn't tell what he was looking for at first look.

He blinked a couple of times lifting the laptop off the table and drew it up close in his line of sight.

F**k!

She was back again on the steps; a red umbrella gave her the much needed shade from the scorching roman sun while she calculatedly popped channa into her mouth.

His head lolled back, staring back at the ceiling of his room and his mind was wiped clear of all thoughts but one: "What the hell was he going to do with her?"


God bless Giovanna, I could hug that woman right now if she was real! 😆

I reckon Geet will be able to piece the majority of her past pretty quickly. She's a very smart girl, & Maan's wall of defence has already been half knocked down, of sorts. This is getting even more gripping now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliantly written

waiting for the moment when they will see each other again


..seems maan miss being with her at home

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