SS:Piazza di Spagna - Part 12 Upd Aug 2nd - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved these lines.

"I'm scared G...scared that she will end up inside a box", he said .

shows Maan's desperation to keep Geet away from his life.Wanting for Geet's persistent efforts in finding her past
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Posted: 13 years ago
Folks,

I have been shuffling between three different FFs and since my reader group don't merge across threads, except a handful, its become increasingly difficult to meet individual requests in the respective threads.

Since, I would need my motivations as well from regular readership engagement and perhaps it isn't recommended to keep jumping from one story to another so very often, I have decided to do more updates for Piazza di Spagna. In second priority would fall Palki and NYT will have one update a week (given most of you have already read the story)

Hope this is to everyone's tastes...

-H
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it ...
So he's safe... & didn't knew about her being pregnant at the time of the blast. Quite sad for him. You are slowly making me doubt whether my hatred towards him is justified or no, but then again his few dialouges with G.. & Thor especially saying she was being just desperate to get to the answers was making me feel that my anger towards him is justified... quite a confused soul I am.
Giovanna's words describing Geet's feelings after hearing his accident on call... was well put forward, the pain & anguish Geet went through at those moments quite well expressed in those few effective words. It did bring a lump in my throat too... this is in a way an affirmation to him that she still cares for him & he has a lot of importance in her life still.
He said he's going home, now where is this is it Geet's house to stalk her as in "home is where the heart is..." & his heart is permenantly with Geet... & your heart does always take you to where you find solace & love ... so might either be her house or someplace that is their own place of love...
Beautifully written...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element





"Scared that she would have access to her past if you told her everything and still not love you as she did before...", she spoke at a slow pace, modulating herself such that her motivations behind her intent to hurt him would trickle down direct as a saline into his veins, "Scared of that rejection...scared that you might just end up kindling expectations for a life with her again..."

He stood there for a beat longer and prayed for composure to outlive the animal urge at wanting to tear something apart with his bear hands.

"I'm scared G...scared that she will end up inside a box", he said without looking and added after a moment's repose, "I will see you tomorrow...then...", before walking away.

These lines... beautiful
Just awesome... so free flow of emotions & feelings... I've read it again & again yet it just makes me feel the same amount of helplessness for the whole situation...
Edited by Onir - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Loved it ...

So he's safe... & didn't knew about her being pregnant at the time of the blast. Quite sad for him. You are slowly making me doubt whether my hatred towards him is justified or no, but then again his few dialouges with G.. & Thor especially saying she was being just desperate to get to the answers was making me feel that my anger towards him is justified... quite a confused soul I am.


If you put it that way, I would say we are all confused between what we feel for Maan...

There is what he should do...

And then there is what we would all like him to do...

Like how there was a conversation yesterday in the thread about Maan pulling her into a hug...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element


If you put it that way, I would say we are all confused between what we feel for Maan...

There is what he should do...

And then there is what we would all like him to do...

Like how there was a conversation yesterday in the thread about Maan pulling her into a hug...😆

Yup I know thats quite true...
And yes I was just reading all the convos that have happened in the thread... seems quite interesting ones out there.☺️ Count me in too , even I would like to see some of them included...
Especially the one in which he pulls her in for a hug & then for a kiss... hayee😳😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Precap...


"Where have you been?", Giovanna sounded angry, "Check your email...Pronto..."

And then there was a click the very next instant as she hung up without giving him any context for the urgency she'd expressed.

In deliberate slow moves, he got to his laptop and clicked his way to the link which was the only content in the email. A small command window opened where he typed in his passcode after which a satellite feed came up. It was that of the Piazza, but his head was swollen with fuzz, from all that thinking he'd done all day and he couldn't tell what he was looking for at first look.

He blinked a couple of times lifting the laptop off the table and drew it up close in his line of sight.

F**k!

She was back again on the steps; a red umbrella gave her the much needed shade from the scorching roman sun while she calculatedly popped channa into her mouth.

His head lolled back, staring back at the ceiling of his room and his mind was wiped clear of all thoughts but one: "What the hell was he going to do with her?"

Oh no now what's in store for us... or to say for Maan
But I love the spirit that Geet has after all that she's endured... she keeps bouncing back & ready to face it head-on...
She's not going to let her life be played in by Maan even if its for her good...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Seems like the affection seeking ones are under fire here so just a word in my defense. They made a baby together. I just want to go into the part where Maan was more open to her. Where her seeking him was reciprocated. This Maan is so closed and controlled and controlling, he is not likeable to me at all. I want to go back to a time where all shields were off. The truth of their togetherness, the love he is still trying to protect. Maybe a dream scene if not anything in the present. Then perhaps the justification for his behavior can make sense to me. Again just my POV. Waiting for more eagerly.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank God both are safe
both the updates are lovely dear
continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

This Maan is so closed and controlled and controlling, he is not likeable to me at all. I want to go back to a time where all shields were off. .


Part 15 is what you are looking for. And you don't even have to go back in time for that. It is an update very much in the present.

I'm calling this update Molasses... syrup remaining after sugar is crystallized out of cane or beetjuice.

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