SS:Piazza di Spagna - Part 12 Upd Aug 2nd

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Posted: 13 years ago

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smoochie woochie 😆

Oh! that reminds me of Gaurav's dialogue...

"Sorry to disappoint you Aditi", his eyes showed his disbelief, and he added shaking his head, "but a kiss is a kiss".

Agreed, twenty nine year olds were expected to call a kiss, a kiss; not resort to an indirect reference as a coy teenager.

"A kiss by any other name wouldn't do justice to it...And technically I didn't kiss you...", he ended.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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a new way to eat tomatoes... and you say you are not good at this?

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609931

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: had2bu
a new way to eat tomatoes... and you say you are not good at this?

I second this! If you can turn tomato eating into intimacy, you can easily sway your fingers through more intense scenes...

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749230

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Posted: 13 years ago

#324

Precap...

"Where have you been?", Giovanna sounded angry, "Check your email...Pronto..."

And then there was a click the very next instant as she hung up without giving him any context for the urgency she'd expressed.

In deliberate slow moves, he got to his laptop and clicked his way to the link which was the only content in the email. A small command window opened where he typed in his passcode after which a satellite feed came up. It was that of the Piazza, but his head was swollen with fuzz, from all that thinking he'd done all day and he couldn't tell what he was looking for at first look.

He blinked a couple of times lifting the laptop off the table and drew it up close in his line of sight.

F**k!

She was back again on the steps; a red umbrella gave her the much needed shade from the scorching roman sun while she calculatedly popped channa into her mouth.

His head lolled back, staring back at the ceiling of his room and his mind was wiped clear of all thoughts but one: "What the hell was he going to do with her?"

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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and on that note I can go to sleep peacefully. Seems like someone is on madam's beck and call. Ah, peace at last. 😆 Excited to read more soon. GN H.

Edited by had2bu - 13 years ago

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undercoverhappy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#326

thank u for the pm

just read chap 2 & will read the rest over the weekend

I'm speechless i remember reading chap 1

fab work from u as expected 👏

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undercoverhappy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#327

chap 3 was jam packed it was as if i was abt to come out of my computer 😉

"Stupid is your middle name Maan, not mine" Delilah quipped and he rolled his eyes at the sometimes disbelieving sassy wit, their fellow agent, Thor had built into her system.

"Not you darling...now I wouldn't want to be so ungentleman like to you...would I?" He answered while his eyes remained on the screen.

"Stop hitting on me Maan...I'm already Thor's girl. Go find your own at the pub. There are 6 pubs within 2 miles of the Crypt" 🤣 even computer's have feelings

He called Delilah 'darling' 😍

will read chap 4 later on this is too good to leave it for the weekend what have u done H I am hypnotised to continue with this

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Posted: 13 years ago

#328

I m speechless...

wantd to write mny thngs bt sry I culdnt...

I jst wnt my thoughts to b within me!!!!!!!!!!

love

SANJH

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hamini_yash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#329

Hmmm what do I say??? SAD , SADDER,SADEST

Well these are the stages of Maan( if they exist i.e.), poor him, 😭aur kitna dard sahega, I feel like he really has a supernatural power for not breaking down at such words and keeping calm, atleast a faade of it. G's statement about Geet's condition was like an ultimate arrow in his already dreading soul.🥺

I am sure those moments before she got to hear him again would be agonizing, that too if she thought that it was because of her, but still ...

And I am really happy that you kept him alive in 1 piece, after the last update, I thought he'll be sent to hospital .

Then the news of her pregnancy!!! Some part of me wanted to scold her for revealing it to him if he didn't know it before. Now the condition has worsened. If there was something after saddest, he is currently in that position.

After reading the update, I felt really bad for Maan, but when I started reading the comments, gosh they are expecting an intimate scene,I don't know what to say, well if I can wish for something then I wish some peace of mind for Maan, a cute smile on his face.

Well this comment is quite long right? Can't help it.