SS:Piazza di Spagna - Part 12 Upd Aug 2nd - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago
Why soon to be ex wife as there is so much love? It's really painful for Maan going thru all this, reliving his past...
Amazing update
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Posted: 13 years ago
even i had the same question, why wouldnt he just go n tell her all about her past...today's update gave me the answer...maan has got a great self control to stop himself from revealing their past to her...awesome one hasini😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u for the awesome update...really emotional ...








t_areeb thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
wife
or soon to be ex-wife
it must have been really hard for him to stay away for her good
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was a stunning update. Wow!
How painful for him to watch her in danger with a gun to her head, then comes the incident that leads to the memory loss and now him willing himself to stay away from her so she suffers no further hurt. I liked how he checked Dev out too so that he was sure she would be able to move on with him. Knight in shining armor of course. In all his efforts to be the good guy, he is overlooking the obvious; how would she able to survive when she remembers? It would be like giving her a lifetime of hurt.
Too awesome. Thanks for the update H.
🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Since The last update so reminds me of MI: III, today's dedication to my most favorite film star ever.

Things had been like this...😳


Then he entered...😭


And everything changed...


But, me the ever optimist, have my confidantes, who I have faith in to change things favorably...😉


And then the happily ever after...😃


And again about the update, am I the only one who got the shock of her life reading the word "wife" (ex or not, doesn't matter)😕

And since he is stripped out of his jeans, do I need to say, can't wait for the next update?😉😆☺️
Tyro thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
so it was a bet...

n geet loves him to an extent that she will leave everything for him...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well well...two updates and am I not happy?😃

The scenes you write are absolutely rivetting...I can see a white room with a table and chair with Maan sitting and Geet examining him...

It surely was a long physical and the emotions running in their hearts each of them hiding from the other pained me..Its sad to see Geet trying to ignore her emotional bumps at meeting him as just another one of her post-amnesia effects and Maan trying to be normal inspite of the turmoil inside..The bonding among them is admirable and inspite of being agents, they understand emotions pretty well.Truly speaking, I didnt expect agents with hearts😉

I am banking on G to try a big step.Another mission in 7 days?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Let me start by saying.."Is there a reason why you make me dislike your Maan in every story...If this is done deliberately then "

I would like to read more on their past, how they come about to be "one" and then separated...
~ Were their secrets in their marriage before her memory loss took place?
~ Did Geet not approve of his profession or was she kept in dark about his work?
~ Did she come to know about his work after gun point at her head episode?
~ Is Maan the reason behind her accident/memory loss?
~ Why would Maan leave her after the accident/why the betrayal (and this is one of the reason I do not like Maan {for now })? It's almost like saying "for better or for worst" put to test!

Some things which I am not clear about...
~ How did Maan manage to take Geet with him with-out having her fight him?
~ Why is Geet so calm and cool while she is in the cell?

The question of the day will remain..."If life is all about moments of impact, and how they change our lives forever, but what if one day, you could no longer remember any of them then what is the purpose?"

To my fav! song..."I would do anything for love but I won't do that" ...and "that" will forever remain a secret with Maan?
Edited by -Aarya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Let me just start with answering them, by saying that they are all awesome questions...

I'm not going to touch on the questions that are yet to be written and so let's get to what has already come by in the story.

Some things which I am not clear about...
~ How did Maan manage to take Geet with him with-out having her fight him?

Maan drugged her with a dart before coming over to the front.

Giovanna, threw her head back in frustration and her hands flew up into the air as she reckoned he'd used a small pod dart to drug her first,

~ Why is Geet so calm and cool while she is in the cell?

When she is with Giovanna or with Maan?
When she is with Giovanna she has just woken up from a drugged haze.

"Hello..." She whimpered, her voice filled with trepidation as she called out again, "Anybody there?"

Seeing as how the room was stark empty with nothing but white walls and a table and chair in the center, she couldn't tell if finding herself alone in that room was a good or a bad thing. She was still wet from the rain and her head felt swollen and murky in its memory of how she'd gotten there


Moreover, her sub-conscious doesn't treat the place as a threat...The point was to convey that she was unusally relaxed, when Giovanna asks her, "You look calm for a civilian"

When Giovanna gives her some hopeless answers, there is sheer resignation in her, making her that muted person you get to see on that update. Which is still not the case, because she gets frenzied when she wants more answers for the weird things that happen around her.
Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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