SS:Piazza di Spagna - Part 12 Upd Aug 2nd

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

@ part 7

very unconventional physical check up

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Lovely update. They are finally face to face and both seem to have something to prove to the other. Geet with her initial reluctance to examine him did end up giving that full hands-on physical😳. I am sure a storm of emotions are being held at bay by both. Sometimes its not the one who walks away with the smirk that wins; the action replays in the head make you surrender😆. Loved her attitude about talking to "mommy" and his sarcasm with the "doctor" part. Battle of wills came out very nicely.Thanks for the update. Enjoyed it a lot. I have the perfect picture to post for this part but it is a .jpeg and I don't know even though I tried to copy it on it does not work😕. Well will keep trying.

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Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

The last bit in Maan's perspective just had my stomach in an aweful knot, it was so well written! How hard it must have been for him to sit through that and act indifferent.
Whether it's good or bad, being effected by someone makes a difference and the doctor will certainly remember this patient.

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

feeling at a loss of words...

she felt familiar...he felt to take her in his arms...

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Hey H, I have not been commenting here because I am yet to catch up on this story... but I will soon have a lot to say here too... 😃

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-Elfin-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

😳Now who would not get a "little" carried away if she gets to "examine" this...😉

or this...😉

and finally this...☺️

Babaji *sigh*🤢

Now coming to the update, I must admit I was pleasantly surprised. Here I was expecting fireworks when they meet, you give us something soothing as the moon light.😃

And as for the end of this story, I personally believe, all stories should be happily ever afters, because since there are hardly any in real, in reel we can get them with a flick of a pen.😳

Please Hasini😊

Edited by -Manashi- - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Resistance exercise - the new form of torture! Ha Ha!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

So...I'm giving you all a bulk response because really, when I write back, I don't respond just to that one person.

Its a SS so catch up fast, because there isn't more than 7 - 10 parts to the denouement.

I'm no math whiz...blah! I was struggling to count my trail miles on the top of my head by looking at the trail map. But I sure am passionate about numbers and their significance. 😊

Trust me, I almost feel in the future that universities should only test for people's aptitude to do research with Google. Every one can be a doctor that way...😆

As for the story telling that is happening with the pictures, Oh! I'm loving it...
Happily ever afters...🤔 I will think about it, because this story is not about the ending, its about the angst.

It's about her fight

And his battles to fight her off...

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Happily ever afters...🤔 I will think about it, because this story is not about the ending, its about the angst.

It's about her fight

And his battles to fight her off...

And we do know who wins when its the fight of a man and a woman, right?😉

At least you said you will think about it, I am more than happy that way.😃

Do THINK, haan.😆

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-Aarya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

It is believed that we can be in the exact same place, looking at the exact same thing, but see things in a completely different way. People travel the world to find happiness but are never happy cause happiness is something that you bring inside of you, it is not where you are or what you are looking at, but it is how you are and how you look at... I feel the same about Piazza di Spagna!

R {...}