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AliaSharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

superb prologue...
cont. soon... 😍

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
3 cheers to my girlfriend *woohoo*. Chalo ab Ruchs, Anu aur Mel ke thread ke saath ek aur hang out adda mil gaya. Chalo mil kar baaki logo ka dimaag kharab karte hai *grin*.

Awesome, devil dost. Abhi se warn kar du. Mel ki tarah conditions mat rakhiyo, Anu ki tarah latka kar mat rakhiyo and Ruchs ki tarah exams ke jaal mey mat phansiyo. Baaki mera ashirwaad hai tere saath *me wiping tear drop from the corner of my eyes*

me crying in happines

teri foot kaha hai dear

let me take your blessing in proper way

i feel so alone

tu kaha thi yaar

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Me bhatking from your thread to Mel and than others too. Mere charan ki kya jarurat? Mera haath toh sada tere head par, Mel ke neck par, Anu ke cheeks par aur Ruchs ke shoulders par rahega.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
Me bhatking from your thread to Mel and than others too. Mere charan ki kya jarurat? Mera haath toh sada tere head par, Mel ke neck par, Anu ke cheeks par aur Ruchs ke shoulders par rahega.

make their is print on anu and mel so every one can see how much you love them

and about me and ruchi

so we r do jism ek jaan and ruchs is our smile

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: shah10
Nice

thanx for liking it

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: valli22
really a surprise to see u as a writer..
congrats for ur first ff..
waiting to read urs..
very happy for u..

thanxxx

its really matter

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

here goes my first part

please comment

everyone

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

past

some ten years back

an old lady sit on swing in between the clouds. she some thousand year old but still got the power and no matter what she is still not ready to pass her power and position to next generation.

here she is our sweet old mel rajmata

Again she is ready with one of her new plan to save her crown from next gen. as she knew its going to be really tough this time bcose the one who in fight for crown this time are ready to win by hook ya crook.

as per rule here come finalist

these angels r best in every way be it in beauty or brain.

and most important they new what they got and how to use them to get her way

first one

angel sara

she got what others lack a true friend which is her trust in her

as she knew- with her by her side she can do anything

and now

angel anu

she got the power to turn situation in her favour in second.

angel third

ruchs

she is tooo sweet but can be very hard at times.

and about others character

you have to wait...

And now as per rule all of three angels are now standing in front of our dear rajmata to know what the hell is going on in her mind to make their dreams shatter in piece and burn their imagination to be next heir of crown in ashes.

but as rajmata is still busy in her monologue so ruchs main sahi kah rahi hu girls isse rajmata banaya kisne tha

mujhe ek baar mil jaaye sach main na uske mind ka test jarure karvougi .kyoki yeh asi hai rajmata jise makeup karne aur cigrette pine ke alava kuch nahi hai aata.

anu sach main yaar budi satihya gayi hai . pata nahi ab kya nikalegi apne is khali dimaag ke pitaare main se

sara just chill girls. lets see what she can do to stop us.

mel rajmata ok angelsss

just shut up now

what you girls think i don't know your great thought about me

he he heee

i knew everything but as the agenda of this meeting is to decide the topic about your task to become the heir of the magic world. So lets talk about that,as

you can see i m now getting old

ruchs (is budiyya ko ab pata chala hai ki yeh budhi hone lagi hai.jab isske dono par kabar main laatak rahe hai) anu (chalo der aaye durust aaye. paaka iska young rahne wala tonic apna asar dikhana band kar gaya hai)

sara (i m sure budhi itni bhi nahi sathiya sakti .she still have some plan to stop us. its just to mislead us . let see what is she upto now)

and so i can't handle this world now. and as every one say you girls are best.so i hope you can finish your task and make me happy to leave this chair(heee main aisa hone du tab na)

now the line come in brakate will be the monologue of angels . you can guess them by color code.

okkk girls that all for now.

tell me what you think task can be.

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago