jaara hatke please sab bachke pt 16,17/pg137,140

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Nishu, you proved that you are my better half devil, love you girlfriend.

Awesome start. Haye, me first on intro. Mel rajmata, sahi character diya hai. Kanjoos and Khadoos rajmata. We three to fight against to get her powers. Maza ayega.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Awesome start dear!
Angel's monologues are too sweet naughty and cute!!
Rajmata Mel is too kaminii types!! he he!!
awww Ruchs is so sweet yet knowing about Mel's character!! She is quite and intelligent!!
Sara is clever and witty clearly knowing about Rajmata s intentions!!
And Rajmata what to say? Is too quick in comparison to her age!!
OMG OMG jawaani ka tonic ROFL!
And about Angel Anu I wont say Few time back I said someone that i wont speak about my character!
Anyways 1 whole day went and no one missed

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

me!! Grr
Upar se Mel calling me nautanki!! So not fair *sob* *sob* No one misses me over here! So I have decided to... anyways leave it!
Awesome one Nishu!
cont soon!!
thnx 4 d pm!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya
me!! Grr
Upar se Mel calling me nautanki!! So not fair *sob* *sob* No one misses me over here! So I have decided to... anyways leave it!
Awesome one Nishu!
cont soon!!
thnx 4 d pm!!

hi dear😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

hi dear😊

Hi😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

Hi😊

sachi sachi bol

main kya likh rahi hu

kuch samajh aaya

is it any gud

bcose i m hell nevous

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

sachi sachi bol
main kya likh rahi hu
kuch samajh aaya
is it any gud
bcose i m hell nevous

Arey yaardont worry! Its g

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Its going great!!
Just dont use that kind of green for Mel! Its not visible!
Increase the letter size a bit!!
And yeah put it like this:
If its a dialogue
Mel : " dialogue"
and if its monologue
Mel: 'Monologue'
And the story is great and funny!! Btw where is Sally in our story?

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya
Its going great!!
Just dont use that kind of green for Mel! Its not visible!
Increase the letter size a bit!!
And yeah put it like this:
If its a dialogue
Mel : " dialogue"
and if its monologue
Mel: 'Monologue'
And the story is great and funny!! Btw where is Sally in our story?

just wait dear

abhi to picture baki hai