jaara hatke please sab bachke pt 16,17/pg137,140

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vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

awesome star..so its a story behind magic powers..waiting

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Break.The.Code

@Break.The.Code

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Nishu I already read it yaar but my power went off..grr..
Mel Rajmata???!!!???
LMAO!!!!!
Seriously teri dimag hai nah!!!
Aww..Sara is really sweet..especially wen she says iss budhi ko abhi pata chala ki wo booti ban rahi hai..

ROFLLL
Anu's monologue is absolute sweet...
And Ruchs..yaar u just seem lyk a complete daredevil..he he..frm wat nishu has suggested..
Mm..so wat is Rajmata going to do??cont soon nd don't be angry with me fr commentin kate kay??

A small suggestion nishu..
We you are postin the part,pls see that all the dialogues are aligned like:
Rajmata-Hi
Anu-hello

U can color code then...it will be easy for the people to read and understnd..
Love you..
Sally

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---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sdlife19
lovely yaar

thanxxx yaar

ok so u like it

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---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: SallyAmanda
Nishu I already read it yaar but my power went off..grr..
Mel Rajmata???!!!???
LMAO!!!!!
Seriously teri dimag hai nah!!!
Aww..Sara is really sweet..especially wen she says iss budhi ko abhi pata chala ki wo booti ban rahi hai..

ROFLLL
Anu's monologue is absolute sweet...
And Ruchs..yaar u just seem lyk a complete daredevil..he he..frm wat nishu has suggested..
Mm..so wat is Rajmata going to do??cont soon nd don't be angry with me fr commentin kate kay??

A small suggestion nishu..
We you are postin the part,pls see that all the dialogues are aligned like:
Rajmata-Hi
Anu-hello

U can color code then...it will be easy for the people to read and understnd..
Love you..
Sally

no late latif

you have to on top list of commenter

nahi toh tera character aana abhi baki hai

than agar kuch gadbad ho gayi to mera koi kassor nahi

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---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

yaar yeh mel kaha hai

i want to see her reaction after seeing her sooo natural pic

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---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

thanks alot all you lovely readers . i really can't able to digest the fact you all like it. please be my side till the end of this.thanxxx again

part - 2

and so i can't handle this world now. and as every one say you girls are best.so i hope you can finish your task and make me happy to leave this chair(heee main aisa hone du tab na.. i m going to check this personally that you girls will fail in this. as their always be onle one queen kyoki abhi toh main jawan hu)

so girls listen this carefully. i m not going to repeat it again

as you can see i m old .so i get tired to easilly.

task;- jaise ki saari duniya jaanti hai ki hum angels kitni soft

hearted and kind hai

ruchi (haan haan ab kah de tere jaise.)

so i just want that all of you make two strangers fall in

love.these two people has to be as different as day and

night or one say black and white.

anu (here she goes again ab ek ladke aur ek ladki hona hi kya kam alag baat hain.yeh budhi toh asse bol rahi hain jaise hum do boys ya phir do girls ka pair bana kar laane wale hai)

and girls their is little condition but on second thought

sara ( ab aayi na asli baat par. chal hoja start let see is baar

iske khurafati dhimaag ne koun si dish banaayi hai)

these r not condition but the point that you all write on

the paper before the start of the task and you have to

follow them in any situation

sara (saaf saaf bol na come on bull hit me wali situation hain)

In the end , result will be in the favour of one who follow the terms correctly.

so today , you can go and decide the boy and girl who r going to be the star of your task.

if you girls need any help(don't even think ke main help karugi) you can ask me . but before tommorow when the game start. ok bye angels

ruchs yeh sach main haamari halp karagi. she is not that bad

anu haan haan kyu nahi. SHE IS NOT THAT BAD ruchs yaar

agar yeh bhi buri nahi hain na to god accho se baacahye.

sara yaar yeh jitna simple bata rahi hai. situation itni simple nahi ho sakti. logo ki toh daal main kuch kaala hota hai par iski tih puri daal hi kaali hoti hai.

ok lets move on girls .chalo chal kar dekhe to saahi earth par kaise kaise antique piece hai.

anu pata nahi woh koun lucky boy hoga jisse hum choose kaarege

ruchs yaar kisi hot and sexy ko select karage

sara haan kyu nahi. tum to apne liye groom search par ja rahi ho. stop all this and think woh dono kaise hone chaahiye

unka background 'nuka nature everything. as we have to

write all this in paper

ruchs oh god , main toh bhul hi gayi thi us RAJMATA ki condition nahi nahi terms

rajmata think girl think but your going no where as ,i don't want you all to reach to my crown. i m ready with plan to make you all fall. he he heee

next part will be soon...

i know this is short but can't help

i m still hell nervous

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

you teri toh you called that old women with a cigar in her mouth Mel Nishu tutje mein to erghhh😡
eh hello even if it is though mel will win the battle samij you kamini
😲
Sara is so good looking and me😭
and anu is defo anu ki jawani🤣
aww ruchs is cute😳
acha bachu I cvan only do make and smoke huh owww Nishi you just wait choen choenm ke padle loon ghi choen choen ke
😲 I see mera dimaag bhi ghaali hai😡
Now I also get your tilte you a super megar erghhh Kamini

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
yaar yeh mel kaha hai
i want to see her reaction after seeing her sooo natural pic

Erghhh Mel is here fuming in anger I made you Elizabeth gillies and you dehka geet ke babaij dehkliya is ki asliyet yeah hei meri dost

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---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: mel420
you teri toh you called that old women with a cigar in her mouth Mel Nishu tutje mein to erghhh😡
eh hello even if it is though mel will win the battle samij you kamini
😲
Sara is so good looking and me😭
and anu is defo anu ki jawani🤣
aww ruchs is cute😳
acha bachu I cvan only do make and smoke huh owww Nishi you just wait choen choenm ke padle loon ghi choen choen ke
😲 I see mera dimaag bhi ghaali hai😡
Now I also get your tilte you a super megar erghhh Kamini

so finally mam ko time mil gaya

waise yaar

sach sach bata

tu ekdum jhkas lag rahi hai na

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Break.The.Code

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Yahoo [:D/]
Me first!
*Pats on back*
so Mel Rajmata is kind of cruel yaar 😆
A complete wierdo 🤪
Her condition..
O God!!
You knw Nishu,U write the monologue of the angels very well 👏 it had me laughing so hard!!
You can a little bit work on the alignment alone 😳 because it wud make the readers' job easy 😊

The colors are very well chosen!!
Green,Red,Blue and Pink..wow!! 👏
Another thn my like tab is not workin 😡
So imagine my like below 😉
Love you ❤️
Sally 😎