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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetgirls1

hey divz...
did i told u that i m officially in love...??? no na... dont think that way... i m talking abt this DEVIL MAAN... haye... itna hottt... well... i love it to the core...
ok let me guess the twist now...
MAAN GONNA MARRY HER BECAUSE ONLY HER HUSBAND CAN TOUCH HER... haina...??
hayee, how much i love it...
uff that stupid moron dev , his single name made my temper hell...
Update soon re...
officially in love with it...
regards
Hira


aowww aowww aowww i luvvv u for this
hehe Dev evn i hate him issilie to yaha rakha karo bashing n make him craky 😉
and Devil evn m in luv wid him
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gbhat

loved the update so much.loved the devil maan he is not going to stop any where and think the twist is maan will marry geet in order to satisfy himself since he is so obsessed with geet. continue soon


as if we want aur devil to stop 😉
obsessive possession 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NiharikaNeha777

please let me go...please, this is not right, this is against my will, my consent, only my husband have this right on me, please leave me

wid this line why um getting a feeling dat MAAN will take a drastic step like marrying GEET... become her husband... thn hav his all right on her... n fulfill his DEVIL wishes??? 😆 😆 😆 lagtha hain ajkal main kuch jayada hi novels padhne lagi hu... so NEHA going bak for her long sound beauty sleep 😳 😃
btw... Divzz... plsss DD ka updt jaldi jaldi diya karo na... as currently um nt reading any other works of urs 😒 (aur ab iss baat se bura na manna... main abhi thodi studies mein bzy hu 😭 jayada ffs padhne ka time nahi hain... but jab hi main free hongi... Divzi's Dreamland mein tut padhungi I promise 😃 but till thn DD is ma only relief 😛)


aoww aoww aoww koi na shona i will surely do dis in contiuty just need a lil tym hell messes up wid family and on top have an extream imp xam mid of nxt mnth 😭 my whole life depends on that single xam so bsy wid dat bt will surely be reg as much as i can 😃 pwomish
n mam aap jitna sochte ho kaafi hai 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

...dear😃
...4 pming me...😃
ur update sweety..😃
u done a dear...👏
keep the job up dear..👏..
keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
Note:

guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics


aoww aoww aoww this was actually swt thanx a lot and all the best for ur xams 😉
thnxxx a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago



Devil's Den
Part 6


she crawls behind over her hands looking at him with fear as if the devil she evoke in him was going to kill his soul and heart tonight under his hands by his act...am sorry...she crawled back over his hands...am sorry, please let me go...please, this is not right, this is against my will, my consent, only my husband have this right on me, please leave me

She started backing away, the fear to lose your esteem for a girl is not less than death, even that seemed to be the better option and here she knew, she wasn't even allowed to choose that till she's in her Devil's Den, she is his prey and she knew he won't leave her till he has quenched his thirst, she knew he won't even allow death to engulf her to give her peace before he is done, she can't even die, not at least now, not before he is done with his hunt...her heart knew no bonds she have tried everything but all in vein not even a single blow went into his ear to give him a piece of mind, she tried her all logical attempts to free herself but he dint budged from his pace, he just knew one thing and that was his need to have her, he needed her to calm his untamed lusty desires she evoked in him with her first damn look, his frustration to feel her in all possible ways he knew she couldn't even imagine, he wanted to sooth that dispersion to hold her, to have her in his arms to make love to her...damn was he thinking about making love, it was always a damn bloody f**k*** s** for him then why the hell he was thinking about it the other way, she wasn't some mistress or something else for him, he just needed her for tonight, for dooming this aching desire in him, just once and he knew he'll be done he won't even ask her the other time...but what he dint knew there are many things which even this devil can't have his hold upon

please leave me...please...
she cried again trying to make him understand but he was nowhere to listen not at least today, he needed to stop himself from thinking all bullshit thoughts lingering in his mind, he needed give an end to all this he looked at her, she was shivering her face was drenched with tears and sweat, her face has lost its color and her shaking self was clearly voicing out her grief and pain she was feeling right now, he looked at her ready to take her in his aching arms to hold her to sooth his thudding heart but couldn't muster the courage to break a step towards her looking at her already torn state

please maa papa will be dead, only dev, only my husband have this right...

then marry me...he interrupted it, cutting her shot, he just said it not knowing what it meant, not knowing what exactly the words he just said mean, not realizing the depth, the sacredness of the words he just stated it in front of her, he just knew he need her, he won't be able to take if anyone else touch her the way he has hallucinated till now, something burnt inside him thinking her words...just dev...just my husband...demit he won't let any man touch her, she is his desire, his possession, his obsession he won't let that happen, not at least in this birth he won't let any damn thing touch her without his permission, he couldn't just take it, God knows the reason but he won't be able to take if any man ever try to touch her the way he want to...his desire to have her only for him was taking a toll not letting him think what he was doing or stating, she looked at him in shock some fear, some helpless fears engulfed her being, her eyes grew as big as if they won't take a second before bursting and plopping out in her hands, she just looked at him horrified, terrified of him...what the hell does he think of himself, what is he, an alien, a psycho, a lunatic, God...no he is a Devil, Hell's Personification descended down the blue heaven to rule it in his own demands and desires, and here she was stuck in her Devil's Den

she looked at him and immediately cupped her mouth holding the scream under her breath, God knows from where the hell she got the power and in a blink of a second got of the bed and ran for her mighty life towards the big door to rescue her life from this devil's claws...but who can tackle this fast and furious Devil ready to hunt his prey down to feast upon it in his Den

he held onto her wrist and twirled her yet again blocking her last hope for freedom twisting and thumping her soft body hard with the giant wall, blocking her movements pinning her hands sideways under his calmly plastered perfectly over hers, crushing her bonny back beneath his rock hard chest, he smirks yet again...I told you not perfect enough to tackle this devil...he said breathing on her neck making her gulp saliva hard.

He came close to her ears and bites it making her wince in pain...we getting married tomorrow, get ready, I'll be there by early morning tomorrow we have a long job to do...he kissed the area he previously bitten to sooth the redness appeared

her heart was dead to beat further, the fear of losing everything she possessed just overpowered her and she felt numb under his body, when he spoke to break her trance...Go before I change my decision and take you now itself...she shuddered under his words and looked over her shoulder to his sharp face, and then to his hold, he had already loosened the tug holding the wall beside her tight in his fist calming the burning desire in his each ounce of body, she looked back to him and without a single thought her heart again got into the previous race in which it was racing without any mercy and got off his hold running, running away from there, far away trying to hide herself somewhere away from this devil's reach, she ran away with all the power she could have in her shattered self without looking back, as if, if she'll look back the curse of this devil will poison her entire rest life, if she looks back the venom this devil holds in his sinful nerves will kill her, she ran as fast as she could endure the power without stopping, without breathing, forgetting her sandals behind her, running barefoot on the lonesome rocky, thorny road with no mercy on self, thinking of she stop now, this devil will overpower her existence she ran till she reached the guesthouse room she was living in she barged inside the room locking it carefully tightly behind and thumped on the floor against the door hiding her face in her folded knees close to her chest and cried, cried her heart out to take all her miseries and pain thinking she'll wake up and all the nightmares will vanish just like they use to disappear like each time, but she forgot it wasn't a nightmare, it was the reality his devil has created for her and slept wimping holding her heart close to herself which she knew she won't be able to protect if she loosened the clutch a single second again

She drifted off to sleep thinking it to be an end when she'ss wake up, this all will end she slept with a trust in her destiny, her god, when a dark sleek merc parked outside her cottage started, beaming her headlights with full rays and here he was, her Devil protecting his prey, his possession, his obsession, he thumped back his head to the headrest of the comfy car when he started the engines and settling the wheels with a roar talking on his mobile smirking...I need this all done by tomorrow by hook or by crook

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A new day, a new start, a new beginning, she felt fresh, relaxed a little, her breath was back to normal and so was her heartbeat, she opened her swollen red droopy eyes, sore by crying whole night and took a deep breath thinking might be that demon she have awaken in her Devil was calm by now, praying it under her breath to give him some piece of mind, thinking her all nightmares, her all miseries might have ended by now, her Devil might have came back from his dizziness of alcohols and forgot the night, his pledge, his words, Her...but what she dint knew that, A Devil is not meant to forget he is meant to make his desire his and fulfill his thirst, for now which was no one else then this angel of his...

She took a deep breath letting all the negative thoughts drift away and let the positive vibes enter her being, she took a sigh deep breath filling her lungs with appropriate oxygen and got up the floor, the extremely uncomfortable floor and the hard door made her back stiff and she wince in slight pain getting up her place and made her way to open the door to let the fresh breeze come inside and give her a reveal from all the tensions and stress she went last night, to get some peace which she required badly right now

she unbolted the door and opened the doors wide to let the sun rays enter the dark room with a new light and breath in the air with closed eyes and a bright smile when some noises hit her ears and she felt suffocated not able to get the fresh air and she opened her eyes to get the shock of her life, she was surrounded by the crowd of hundreds of unknown strangers riding one over the other trying to make their way inside the small door to reach her, with cameras, mikes, wires and what not, flashing lights where blurring her view to make and clear picture of what all was happening and continuous questions were making her deaf to here even a single word properly...

What is this mam???...what were you doing with MSK last night???...are you two in a relation???...are the rumors of you getting bound to MSK true???...are you going to get married soon???...is it true the wedding is today itself???...are you going to break up with your fianc???...how long you two in relation???...how do you both know each other???...till where your relation has gone???...what are you to him???...are you again a night stand like his each night out or something more than that???...what exactly is happening here???...Mam please make your relationship status clear???...with whom you tied and whom you breaking up and why???...are you interested in MSK's money that's why you dumping you current fianc???

The question felt strange to her as they were not from this planet she looked here and there feeling weird when her eyes felt on the three standing right in front of her eyes and she gasped...maa papa ji, veer ji...in a low voice

maa was crying but why what happened that made her cry, papa ji was numb she can feel it here and Veer ji...his eyes spitted fire which made her shiver but why, what all was happening she couldn't imagine and she looked around again, and then back to her family when nothing was making sense to her just to get shock of her life...she looked back to her family and the next moment to the piece of paper in her veer ji's hand to get chocked in her breath to death, she looked at the highlighted front page headline which was clearly stating

''Famous Businessman Mr. Maan Singh Khurana going to tie the secread knot with Miss. Geet Handa TODAY''

She was still under trance not able to think straight when two hands from behind embraced her making her stiff in her process and she looked behind to get another shock, her Devil was standing right behind her snaking his hands round her waist keeping his head over her shoulder and whispered in her ear...Good morning Angel...!!...with that most sinful smirk enchanting his chiseled face, making everyone gasp at the scene and their proximity

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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


wow lovely lovely...i loved tis part so much...i love u devil...tis is my maan...wow im giggling...im jumping,,...oh no i cant control my happiness...i loved tis part so much...now my maaneet will get married...but bechare my geet, she standing blanky without knowing , wat is happening arounds her...dont worry geet now u r marrying a devil, but with ur love he will becam angel...i love u devil...waiting for my maaneet's marriage...
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg ... Devil ne sab twist kar diya ... Poor Geet ... No other option left.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww this devil...he is really very smart...
he didn't give any chance to geet to escape...
n now he has decided to get married to her...
poor Geet...she is trapped now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
aew wah this is what i call a fadu updat
loved the devil very much
continu eoon
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg... i had guessed this would happen and it really did..
so devil on to get married to her...

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