ff: Ms. Hspur Exp. - The Imperfection pt11-pg 42 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
OMG..OMG!!!
Lovely update Srini...👏
It was absolutely hilarious!!!
Gosh..Diya the little girl beleive me even I have a cousin who is in 3rd class and whenever people ask about her class and all..she starts telling everything ,her name ,class along with the section...Her post in the class, in the bus...her test marks ,her hobby activities ,abt her newly learnt dance steps..!!😆
This completely reminded me of her!! 😆😆
Maan babu aap kis duniya me rehte ho?? Itni jaldi irritate ho gaye?? 😆
Diya called Maan Deer Uncle!! 🤣
I'm so eagerly waiting for the enxt part...Geet's entry is going to be dhansu...jumping from the window 😆

P.S: Is that my usename at the end?? *rubs my eyes*
Thanks dear ,Waise I'm love with this FF 😍..Aaawww..that's so sweet of you Niti..Love you my little sister 🤗
Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Awesome part.
Loved it.
Waiting for next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33


deer uncle Maan...🤣

Geet jumped from window...😲🤣

yaar please update next fast...

Maan having dreams of Daadi and Geet taking pheras...🤣

very funny and amazing update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Awesome update.
I loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
omg me 🤣🤣🤣 while readng...🤣
suprbbb
wtnggg 4 geet
omg maan ka kya haal hoga geet se mil ke..🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

woow awsum boossom update dear 👍🏼

waisay who jumped from window😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Yaar when are you gonna update this!!
Wanna read the next part...plss update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Part 3

Everyone in the hall were shocked by the sudden voice especially maan

He observed the owner of the voice from head to toe.

Maan (st) : Is she the girl whom dadima has chosen for me.

Having curly and unkept hair , wearing a loose t shirt and baggy shorts and absolutely dirty sneekers with stinky socks the girl gave her 1000 watt smile.

Maan was staring at her as if he had seen an alien.

Mama the girl said and gave a bone crushing hug to rano.

Rano was not able to respond

Are mama aisa kya dekh rahe ho . aapko meri surprise accha laga.

The girls sight immediately shifted to her bhabhi

Bhabhi !! she screamed and gave her another toight hug

are aap bhi mujhe aise kyun ghoor rahe ho. Mei koi bhooth ya alien nahi hoon . appp ki ghar ki beti hi hoon

waise d1 aur d2 kahaan hai

bua screamed diya and ran to the girls arms

d1 screamed the girl and gave her another bone crushing hug

bua meoine aapko bahut miss kiya

awww my dairy milk I missed you too and gave a kiss on her cheek.

While the handas were recovering from their shock there were two more silent spectators of the whole scene.

One who was enjoying the girls presence and the other who was thinking her to be a different species who came from another planet.

Maan (st) : ye dadi mujhse kis baath ki badla lena chahti hai ki wo mere liye aisi ladki pasandh ki hai.

Mama mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai. Mere liye kuch khan eke liye laao na .

As the girl was about to sit on the chair she noticed two of them who were unknown to her.

Mama yeh dono koun hai.

But rano was just staring at the girl.

Are mama kya ho gaya aapko.

The girl waved her hands infront of her mother . that's when rano snapped out and noticed the two people who were giving her a questioning look.

Wo ji maaf kijiye ye hai meri dusri beti hai GEET .

Aur geet beta ye hai savtri ji aur unke pothe maan . ye log tumhari di ko dekhne ke liye aaye hain.

Maan was relaxed when he came to know the she was not the girl. He just took the glass of water infront of him to drink .

Di ko dekhne ke liye log aa rahe hai aur aapne mujhe bathay tak nahi.

Without hearing another word front rano geet sat on the tea poy infront of dadima.

Mama ne meri intro tho kaerva diya . lekin mujhe tho apni intro khudh karna accha lagtha hai.

Lekin haan ek baath hai agar app meri intro sunna chahte hai tho aapko mujhse dosti karni hogoi.

Savitri was smitten by the girls charm .

Tho friends

Dadi gave a broad smile and said friends

Geet gave her hand forward . so mein hoon geet . geet handa . mein 22 years ki hoon aur ghar mein sabsi choti beti beti hoon. ab mein Mumbai mein rehti hoon aur amrita organization ki tulips school mein kaam karthi hoon.aur ab aapki baari.

Dadi took her hand in hers and said mein savitri devi khurana hoon aur 72 years ki hoon . mein delhi mein hi rehthi hoon

Kya aap 72 ki ho. Mujhe tho yakin hi nahi ho rahi hain. Aap tho bahut young lag rahe ho. Ek baath bathaun agar mein ladka hotha na tho mein aap se hi shaadi karthi.

Maan just puked the water that he was drinking . he was shocked to see the way she was talking

He just imagined his dadima and this girl talking pheres around the pyre and his mind and brain both together shouted together WHAT THE HELL.

Meanwhile rano was absolutely embarrassed with the way her daughter was talking.

Jiska dar tha ab wahi ho raha hai. Isiliye tho meine ise nahi bulaya. Hey babaji agar aapko mujhe ek beti deni hi thoi tho mujhe ise kyun diya. Bagavan na kare ki koi gadabad naa ho jaaye.

Waise meina abse aapko BD bulaane wali hoon.

BD ka matlab KYA HAI BETA

Bindaass dadi . accha hai na

Bahut accha hain saying this both gave a hi five to each other .

Geet andar jaake fresh ho jaao beta

Are maa aap dekh rahe ho na . mei BD se baath kar rahi oon. Baad mein kar loongi na !

Geet's and dadima's talks seeme never ending. Dadima was enjoying her company like anything. but here our maan babu was getting highly irritated and annoyed.


precap :

geet gonna talk with maan

ab socho kya hoga😆


i'm sorry for the delay

but within two days my dad will put internet at home

so u'll get regular updates from then

pls hit the like button and leave ur comments

Edited by sarkh26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Awesome update!!
Geet toh puri bindaas hai!!
Bechara maan!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
omg geet is a full chatter box
loved the update
continue soon

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