ff: Ms. Hspur Exp. - The Imperfection pt11-pg 42 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ooh... waiting for Geet now..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great cs
awesome n amazing update
loved it
waiting for geet's entry
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome !!!
Loved it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏Dadi meri instincts keh rahi hai ki bro ko ek imperfect ladki hi milegi. Exactly opposite to him .


loved it!!!!!!!!!!!😃😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update dear cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...!!
The frst. Part was lovely...Loved Vicky and daadi ka drama 😆
oh gosh...so daadi always narrates the same thing every morning...her and dadaji's prem kahaani 😆
Aur Vicky ke instincts sahi prove hone wale hai!! [;-)]
precap sounds damn interesting...!!!
Waiting!! :-D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the new ff...

loved the CS n part 1...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2

Maan was super duper annoyed today. Everything was just happening the way he wanted . until his dadi had dropped bombs in his plans.
Just a week before dadi had informed him about going to see a girl THAT DAY
And maan had already planned how to get out of this marriage fiasco. He told yes to dadi only to convince her . but was he really gonna marry ? A BIG NO !
He had purposefully planned a meeting with one of his clients in shimla on the day he was supposed to see the girl. Maan was really confident that his plan will work. Because if he didn't go with dadi to see the girl the girls family will surely develop a bad opinion about him and call off the wedding .
But now he has to go and see this girl for sure and thanks to dadi.

Maan meine kaha na aap meeting attend karne ke liye nahi jaayenge.

Dadi aap samaj kyun nahi rahe hai. Ye meeting humare company ke liye bahut important hai.

Isiliye tho mein Vicky ko bej rahi hoon.

Vicky was smiling sheepishly at his bro giving a u cant escape look

Lekin dadi Vicky ko is project ke bare mein kuch bhi nahi patha hai.

Bro aap fikar math kijiye. I've already gone through the project details. Aur vaise bhi mein Aadi ko bhi apni saath le jaa raha hoon na. so no problem.

Maan gave an angry glare to aadi who was standing near Vicky shivering with fear.

Aur vaise bhi meine aapki client mr. Sharma ko bhi inform kar liya hai ki Vicky meeting ke liye aa rahe hai aur aap nahi. So all problems solved.

Maan was extremely furious.

Ab bro mein aur aadi nikalte hai . flight ke liye der ho rahi hai. Aur haan ladki dekhne ke baad mujhe zaroor phone kijiye and he winked. Before maan could have ripped him into pieces Vicky and aadi bid adieu to dadi and left for the air port.

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HERITAGE ENCLAVE ( IT IS A GROUP OF BUILDINGS. EACH BUILDING HAS FOUR HOUSES . TWO AT THE GROUND FLOUR AND TWO AT THE FIRST FLOOR )
HOUSE NO ******

Are beta sara kaam hogaya naa

Ji ma . aap bilkul tension math lijiye sara kaam hogaya hai. Bus mujhe ye sweets arrange karna hai

To jaldi karo beta mehmaan aathe hi honge.

Just then the phone rang.

Maa mei dekhthi hoon.

Are jyothika ruk jao. Mei dekhti hoon.
Hello
Phone :…………………………..
Are kunal saab . sasriyakaal. mei rano bol rahi hoon
Phone : …………………………………
Ji bahut danyavaad ji . aap ne meri beti ke liye itna accha rishta laaya. Mujhe patha hi nahi hai ki Iske liye mei aapko shukriya kaise karoon .
Phone : ……………………………………..
Ji saare thayaariyaan ho gayi hai. Bus mehmaano ki aane ka intezaar hai.
Phone : ……………………………………………..
Ji rakhti hoon. sasriyakaal

Maa kaon tha ??

Are kunal saab ka phone tha . wo bus pooch rahe the ki saare thayariyaan hogayi yaa nahi.

Just then they heard the CALLING BELL

Lagta hai wo log aa gaye . chalo.

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Maan noticed that they were entering into the HERITAGE ENCLAVE

Maan ( st ) Are ye tho heritage enclave hai. This was constructed by xxx construction company five years back. They had provided luxurious homes at an effective rate . I really liked their company's stratergy. Some of the homes even have four to five bedrooms in them………………………. ( aree he owns khurana constructions . tho eisa hi sochega naa )

Are maan bte apap kya soch rahe ho. Gaadi se neeche uthariye. Hum pahunch gaye hai.

Maan was lost too deep in his thoughts that he did not realize that their car has stopped infront of one of the buildings.

Dadima and maan went in front of a house.

Maan noticed a brass metallic plate with HANDAS on the door.
Soon they were welcomed warmly by rano and jyothika.

Jee aayiye baithiye.

Dadima and maan sat on the sofa. Maan looked around the house. It was a beautiful house which had four bedrooms. Maan was impressed with the way they had furnished. But suddenly maan realized his purpose of coming there.

Maan (st) Maan now stop looking around the house and concentrate on what you have come here for. You just have to what you have planned. Hope dadima does'nt spoil my plans

His thoughts were broken by rano's voice

Are maan bte aap kya lenge. Chai , coffee

Ji wo coffee.

Aur savitri ji aap

hum chai lenge

Rano signaled jyothika to get some coffee and tea

Waise kunal saab ne humein aapke parivaar ke baarein mein bahut kuch bataya . aur unhone ye bhi bathaya ki aapka ek beta bi hai.

Ji haan. Par maaf kijiye use do din pehle hi sheher chodke jaana pada kuch zaroori kaam se.

Are koi baath nahi.
Waise aapke ghar mein do pyaare bacche hai naa

Ji ek min mein unhe abhi bulati hoon

Diya beta zara idhar aana.

Aaayiii dadiii !!!!!!!!

A small girl wearing a violet gown came running to the hall

Ji ye hai diya meri pothi . Diya beta jaake aashirwaad lo

As diya was about to takle savitri's blessings savitri stopped her

Are iski koi zaroorat nahi hai. Hamare aashirwaad hamesha aapke saath hai

She took diya in her lap and began to talk to her.
Waise aap kounsi class mei pad rahi hai ?

I'm studying in LKG. Aur patha hai mei hi apne class ki leader hu aur haan kal maths test mei meine 10/ 10 le liya tha…………………………

Diya started to tell everything about her and dadima was keenly listening to her.

But our maan babu was highly irritated. He just wanted to do what he had come here for and leave as soon as possible.

Suddenly maan felt a tug on his pants. He noticed diya pulling his pants
Aap meri bua se shaadi karne waale ho kya ???
Maan was giving a blank look.

Aap ka naam kya hai ?

Maan.

Maan ????? !!!!!!

Diya began to think for a while and suddenly her face beemeed like a 10000 wats bulb.
Are haan !!! patha hai meri ek classmate hai . wo south india se ayi hui hai. She speaks tamil so well you no . usne ek din kaha ki tamil mei maan ka matlab deer hotha hai. Tho aap bhi deer ho kya ??

What ???
Just then jyothika called out to her

Diya !! andar jao bua ke paas

Par kyun maa !! mujhe deer uncle se baath karni hai
Dadima was trying really hard to control her laughter

Maan glared at her

Maan (st) ; iss dadi ki chakkar mei kahaan phas gaya mein.

Diya meine kaha naa andar jao.

Teek hai ma. Turning to maan. Deer uncle aap kahin jaayiyega math . hum baad mei baath karthe hai.aur haan mei aapko apni toys bhi dikaungi.

Saying so she ran inside.

Maan was highly irritated
Maan (st) : yahaan mein toys dekhne thodi na aaya hun . aur ye bacchi . how much does she talk for her age !!!

Ji maaf kijiye. Wo kuch bhi samajthi nahi

Are ye kya baath hui. Bacche tho eise hi honge naa. Aur waise agar humare pothe pothiya husthe kelthe hai tho humein hi accha lagega naa she said eyeing at maan.
Maan was about to retort back.
Are Baath karthe karthe hume waqt ka patha hi nahi chala. chaliye jaldi se ladki ko bula dijiye.

Ji ek minute bulathi hun.
Urmm….. beta aao naa!!!

Suddenly someone jumped from the window and shouted AAGAYI !!!!!!

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precap :

He just imagined his dadima and this girl talking pheres around the pyre and his mind and brain both together shouted together WHAT THE HELL.

a special thanks to world - of - dreams for supporting me a lot for all my works. niticool ( my sis ) sings praises about u everyday.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
lovd it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome n lovely update
loved it
diya is so cute
after seeing geet maan will be have zor ka jhatka
precap seems interesting
do continue soon

thnx for the pm dear

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