ff: Ms. Hspur Exp. - The Imperfection pt11-pg 42

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PROLOGUE

mr . perfect

jisse sab kuch bilkul perfect chahiye tha

subha ki coffee se office ki file tak

ghar ki naukar se apni room ki cheezon tak

sab kuch perfect chahiye tha use

overall he is the avatar of perfection

tho biwi bhi usse apni tarah bilkul perfect chahiye na

lekin !!!!

what will happen

when mr. perfect falls for the epitome of imperfection

so presenting u

heres my second ff

this is a purely entertaining one with no drama and villains like my previous ff .

pls comment to let me know whether i should continue it or not


my other works

A JOURNEY FF

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45276788�


A LOVE STORY - OS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1768368/my-first-mg-os-a-love-story



INDEX

CHARACTER SKETCH PAGE - 3

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PART 4 - PG 13

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PART 9 PAGE 34

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kamiya thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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for your new ff
awesome concept
loved it
loved to read about maaneet
do continue soon
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beautiful concept dear
please continue soon
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sounds very interesting. ..

I am very excited to read this..

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interesting concept..
thanx fr the pm..
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sounds interesting
m very excited to read this..
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the start for new ff please add me






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Hey dear..How are you??
It's been a long time 😃
Well..congrats on this new FF...I loved the start
This seems to be fun 😆
Cont soon 😊
Will be waiting for the first part 😃
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Prolouge is interesting!!
Pls continue soon!!
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character sketch

maan singh khurana ( mr perfect )
27 years old . owner of khurana group of industries . Epitome of perfection. Loves his dadi a lot and always listens to her. The word failure is never in his dictionary. And his time management skills . oh my god !!! A perfect elder brother and loves his brother a lot a very strict boss but not angry and arrogant. Really sweet and caring to his near and dear ones. His employees do not fear him but respect him.

Vikrant singh khurana aka vicky
25 years old
Younger brother of maan singh khurana .. Really playful but responsible at times. Loves his bro and dadi a lot. Is irrevocably and head over heels in love with a girl. Works with maan in his office.

Savitri devi
Maans and vicky's dadi . loves both her pothas a lot. She is the only person who can control msk
Wants maan to get married and is searching a girl for him.

Geet handa ( miss imperfection )
22 years old.absolutely a tomboy . Lives in Mumbai . Works in amrita organization that runs many old age homes , orphanages, charity , hospital etc. the perfect example for imperfection. She does not need anything else other than Maggie noodles, dairy milk chocolate and her favourite ben ten . loves her family a lot especially her bhai and di.and of course a pakka chatter box and totally mischevious . but really kind at heart

Rano handa
Geets mother. Very caring . loves all her children a lot. Wants her daughter geet to be a bit girlish.

Shauriya handa
29 years old
Eldest handa .a software engineer. Loves his family a lot and pampers his sisters to the core . he is a perfest son , perfect brother , perfect father , and ofcourse a perfect husband.

Jyothika handa
26 years old
Wife of shauriya . a very caring wife and a perfect bahu. Best friend of her sasu ma rano. Loves her family a lot and always thinks about their welfare .

Diya and dev
Shauriya and jyothika's children
Diya 4 years old
Dev eight months old

Nisha handa
23 years old
Geets elder sister . a really calm and quiet person. Always protects geet from rano as geet is always upto some mischief . she is not only geets sister but also her best friend . always reads romantic novels and truly believes in love . wants to have a love marriage but never goes against her family. Will doanything for her family .

GEET'S FRIENDS ( IT'S A LONG LIST YOU KNOW )

Ravi chandrashekar
23 years old
Geets best friend works in amrita organization along with her. Has come from south india. he writes poems but don't know why all run away from him whenever he wants to present it. Wants to become a director.

Vanadhi chandrashekar
21 years old
Ravis sister ( sorry vanadhi ) geets best friend . a responsible person. Also works in amrita organization.
Loves her brother a lot even though he is foolish at times.

Ishwarya raj
Geets best friend . works in amrita organization . absolutely filmy

Riya sen
Geets best friend . works in amrita organization

Payal kashyap and pari kashyap
Twins. Best friends of geet . work in amrita organization

Nageshwari reddy
Superviser in amrita organization . very strict . everyone call her hitler . but kind at heart.

Nidhi verma
Head of amrita organization

Other characters
Aditya chopra - maans accountant
priyanka Sharma ( pinky ) – receptionist
gmsrk - secretary
and last but not least sasha and her chamchi tasha

THE SECRECT SEVEN OF AO ( AMRITA ORGANIZATION )
geet
ravi
vanadhi
riya
ishwarya
pari
payal
( POOR RAVI HE IS THE ONLY MALE IN HIS GANG)

i know a lot of characters but the story will mostly revolve around maaneet
will upload the pics later
thank u so much for ur support.

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