Dial A Secret... MG FF (thriller) part 13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
Mimi, welcome back mere 'eid ke chaand'. Howz you, seems hell busy. That's why again a short part with grammar mistake and in a hurry. Upon that, 'journey' still unupdated. Relax honeybunch, calm down.

Well, again on guessing game *this time at starting itself*. Adrian is scared for the first time and helped Maan too, is all this real? Why he is blaming himself, the very opposite of his nature. Maan was not the only one, Sen sisters too attacked means no love triangle or is it only a trick for the time being? Is there anyone related to their families? I mean at starting, they all were showed as the gems of NY who have a dark past and disturbed family relations. Why all of a sudden, HE *or maybe SHE* decided to play the blood game? Or there is more than one involved?
The secret keeper is keeping a very close watch on them and it clearly can be seen that 'money' is not the matter here. Everything is smartly planned. Maneet romance, as always, acted as a fresh drop of dew. Overall, excellent. For the first time ever, Sara doesn't want to suspense end that easily or soon and even romance can be presented like a light shower of rain. Me totally love the story.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

u r so r8 mimi is soo busy in her new college that I have to push her everytime to update😡 .. ds gl is too lazy .. not only DAS or journey she is same during Jannat n she must have forgotten she has one more ff too .. thanks for reminding her .. plzz keep on reminding her else she is gonna sleep bt not update

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

maan got attacked

now what will happen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

interesting update

maan stabbed and adrian saved him n he is scared

loved it...

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582445

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

another intrigue part

d story is going rally well .. only wish updates were fast

lots of things happened in this part

1st the video clip ..

ds Gwen thing is quite confusing

I think Damien is not d centre of d mystery .. Gwen is

what happened to her???

n then Maan is attacked n Nicole n Naomi too

Adrian is afraid!! .. d ruthless man isn't out of fear ..

he is felling responsible for all ds may be because he was d one who send d man to beat Damien . lets c what is more in his bucket

I must say Adrian is a very interesting character .. no matter if I like him or not he catches my eye ball .. n choosing of Gasperd Ulliol in ds character is just apt ... I just love him

MAANEET scene was soo sweet .. oh iss secret keeper ko tabhi attack karna tha 😡

continue soon plzzz😭