I Don't Know How Long This Will Take Me But I'm Doing It!!
Lemme Start With A Summary😆
No Actually Let Me Say Something.
From The First Few Updates, Mrs.ZSK Had already started calling herself Evil---Thus Being Called Zaalim😆 Ya Ya I Remember 😆
Okay Maan--Sameera, Heartbroken🥱 Boooringgg--No I Mea Their Prem Kahani Is Boring😆, Though You Still Haven't cleared why she said "I'm Sorry Maan"😆
No Actually It's Sad😭 Look At Me!! I'm Cryingg!!!😆
4 Years Later
Maan Geet Meet---Haha Meet---MEet😆
Maan:KYUUU!!!!!!!
😆😆I Imagined that😆 Kyyuuunnn Naaahhhiii😆
I'm not gonna pick on your hindi, well ...not for now🤣
I kept telling you it was sooo sooo sooo cuteee!!!!
Wait I Have A List🤣
She screamed the same😆
Maan: Hello...uhh hello lady...wake up.
OMFGGG🤣🤣 I Don't Know If It's Made Anyone else Laugh But OMFGGG That Was The Line I Told U!!! OMGGG I COULD NOT STOP LAUGHING!!!!
He Just needed to slap her a few times that's all😆
Wait Your Hindi😆
'Maan: Chup bil ko chup!!'
Not Bad Not Bad😆
'Daadi: Beta kaha ho tum? Tum kal raat ko ghar kui nahi aayeti ?'
I Get the first part, What does the second half say?😆
'Maan: mein camping chala gayeti.'
OMGG Sooo Cuteee
'Geet:ye red wala sari bahut sindoor lagraha hai'.nahi ye saphed wala sari ham bi sindoor lagraha hai'..hayyye babaji me con se choose karogi'.i don't know which one to choose.'
I Told You about this too😆 Shooo Cuteee
Then their bags or someth got exchanged and decides to;
'An idea strikes Geet. She goes over to her computer and goes to google.'
😲🤣 Like Seriously?!!
Okay Fine she did google him up😆
Then she works in his office.
'Geet: I am okay'you can let me go now.
Maan snaps out of his thought and lets geet go'
She falls hard onto the ground.
Geet: Ouch!
Maan: You told me to let go!'
🤣I Told You this too!!
And All I Got Was "Shut Up And Read It All!"😆
'She starts to feel bored after awhile and out of boredom starts to spin in her chair'She was kind of enjoying it. After a couple of seconds she sees maan's face as she spins'at first she thinks she is imagining his face'but soon she finds herself flying out of the chair as Maan grabs hers wrist and she bangs into him.'
Weee🤣
The Dare😉
You know what, Your title should be "Two Dramatic hearts falling in love"😆 Like Seriously!
What Is This!
He Kissed her!😆 Like...VICKY!!!!!! I Sure wanna see Maan kiss A Guy...Most likely..ADI🤣
All In For Dostana!!!🤣
'congrats on the new job'
Sadiie: 😲😲😲 You had A Job Zee?!!
Zee: Yeah, Easiest Job in the world😆
And The Rest!
People were congratulating You 😆
I'm Keeping myself awake by drinking Hot Chocolate, Come on!! I Woke Up At 3PM!!!🤣
Hain...? This Does NOT Look Like A Summary To Me At All!
Okay Moving On! Forget The Summary!
All Iz Well All Iz Well😆
'Maan looks at what Daadi was pointing at and he see's Vicky passed out hugging a bottle of alcohol. '
Like...Awwwhhh Reminded me of them AdVERT thingys😆 They hug the toilet paper like that🤣
'Geet enters KC and is about to enter into her cabin when Vicky bumps into her.'
WHAT IS WRONG WITH THE KHURANA BROTHERS?!!!!
She fell twice because of them!!!🤣
Though I Told You I LOVE Vicky, He's A Right Asshole when it comes to...Idk..."Bringing New Ideas Into Action"😆
Like Who Does That?
Oh Vicky Does.
Maan All Jealous and follows them in the restaurant 😆
'He breaks a flower vase that was in the restaurant out of frustration.
Employee: Hey mister what the hell are you doing? You are going to have to pay for that.'
😆Like Seriously? He breaks whatever he can grab hold of😆
Poor Geet, Loves Lecturing Maan But Can't really Protect herself.
I Had A Dream Today!!! 🤣This Stupid Friend Of Mine Whom I Used To Go With During P.E And Get Chased By Dogs😡 Came Into My Dream!!! Like WTH!!! I WANT MY GC!! Not This Idiot!!
Okay Its Soo Random!
Like There's Dogs Everywhere 😆 And We're Going Into Town Or Someth And There's People walking out of shops with Dogs. And Its Like...The Doors, you have to hold them othervise they'll come springing back to u. She see's a dog and drops her hand and runs inside, the door closes and pushes the dog miles away outside. And The owner's like "Are U Stooopid?!" 🤣 OMFGGG Even In My Dreams she does stupid things!😆
Okay Where was I?
Yeah Then Maan Saves Her😆 And Reads Her Journal.
Your Name
I wrote your name in the sky,
but the wind blew it away.
I wrote your name in the sand,
but the waves washed it away.
I wrote your name in my heart,
and forever it will stay.
(also crossed out in blood)
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THE DAY I GOT STRUCK BY LOVE'S POISON.
THE DAY I REALIZED THE TRUE NATURE OF LOVE
I Like that Poem. I Should have known she loves sucking blood😆
She Effin Thanks Him By Writing On The Walls With Her B...B...Blooodd...Ahhh Zee!!!! I Had My Wrists Aching And Feeling Light Because Of That!
Tell Me I Can Be A Doctor!!🤣
Ahhh!!! You said Coffea😆
'Maan screams: NOOO!!!!!!!!!
WHAT ARE YOU DOING'.HOW DARE YOU DOOO THIS'.SHE IS STILLL ALIVE YOU HEAR MEEE!!
Maan: Geet uthooo'please open your eyes'.GEEET, '
Poor Man😆
'OYEEE didn't you hear me..she is still alive.'
🤣🤣Brij Ka Bhooot!!!🤣
'Maan: GOOODDD! You told me you would save her'..than why is everyone telling me she is gone'..I know she is not'I can still feel her presence..her soal is still here.'
Really?😆 As Far As I Can remember, God didn't talk to you at all😆
'He whispers geet and collapses on top of her.
Geet's eyes shoot right open and she takes breaths in. Her first word was "Maaan".'
🤣Ahhh Its Like, He fell on top of her and Booom!!!! She sat up straight😆 Zindagi De Di😆
'Geet: oh that stands for Dha'
Dhak Dhak😆 No No I Mean Dusht Dhanav😆
Just Friends?😆 I Think It Went Tooo Far For Just Friendship🤣
Noo I'm Not Gonna Add That!!! I Told You I'm An Innocent Baby! I Don't Need To Know What Chocolate Does To A Man🤣🤣
'Maan is walking with pain masked as anger, clearly visible in those deadly intense brown eyes.'
Right BROWN Eyes😆
Ahhh Finally Realized His 'Love'
'intruder: Surprised? Maybe you shouldn't leave the door open next time.'
At first I thought, Oh Shit!! It's Dev!!🤣
Turns Out, It was Sasha😆
Oh Yeah Oh Yeah, Pigeons All Over The Place😆
Okay She realized her 'Love'😆
'Maan takes out his frustration by punching a hole in the wall and then storms off.
Vicky: bhai can't you find a way to relax and take out your frustration without hurting yourself'
I Know Right!!! Go for a swim or something, LEAVE THE WALLS ALONE!!!🤣
Ahhh Vicky's Kahani With, Meera😆
'Vicky was flabbergasted. He was trying to put the spotlight on Geet to make her understand her love for maan, but then all of a sudden the table seemed to be turned on him now.'
I Know!!!!! Always Have A Plan B Next time!😆
'What happened last night? Did I really spend a night with a girl or did geet give me a kiss as she was on me in the morning.'
Now That's A Mystery😆 Maan still needs to remember that😆
Okay Now, Mission; Ger Meera And Vicky Together😆
( I do not live in India or have ever visited so I am hoping there is a beach in delhi'otherwise just pretend there is for this FF') 😆 I'm Sure there's a beach in Delhi😆
'Vicky says, "hey geet", but then geet quickly grabs the handcuffs from her purse and cuffs Vicky and Meera in a blink of an eye.'
Like...How do you do that? If I were doing that, I'll most probably drop the handcuffs OR Handcuff myself😆
NOte :Part : 35 B is below in the 3rd post!
I CLICKED!!!!😆 I Know Lame😆
(imagine geet in this...)
Uhhmmm...I Can Only See Aishwariya🤔😆
There Goes the 'Lets see who makes who jealous the most'😆
'Her heart felt like it was dipped into oil and was being burned'
I Can smell it!!🤣
'For some reason i just felt like writing some dialogues in hindi...so excuse my poor effort if it doesn't make any sense. If you want you could even correct me if you wish...'
Huhuhuahahahahah I'm Sooo Looking Forward To This!🤣
Then I Realized, Wait...Its All...Oohh Aaahh Types😆 There's No Point Cuz He's Drunk Anyways.
BUT
If You're Evil, So Am I😉
His Eyes Are Hazel Now😆
'Maan: Ek baar mujhse darkana ki dil mein sunno'
I Just Assumed it meant "Listen to my heartbeats" Or something😆
That Was It Really, Didn't Wanna Pick On You when I struggle at hindi myself😆
Ahhh Morning After!
Like, Is your Maan ignorant? I Think he is😆 Like is he really... forgetful?
I Still need to know what he did with them alcohol bottles and red rose petals😆
'She falls on her knees as they fall numb as she realizes how she drank the poison that comes with love again.
Log sach kehte hain. Love is fire for a second, but ash for the rest of your life! Aur yeh sirf ek toot gayi dil jaanti hai.
She looks up at his retreating body, "He came as a stranger, stayed as a friend, left as a lover!"'
Poison Of Love I Think😆 No No Love IS Poison😆
'Second thing was that some people's FF's have been getting copied and i would like you to know that i don't want this to happen to me or for ppl to accuse me of copying. I don't think i have copied other ppl's FF's and work very hard to bring in freshness into some of the scenes. If by chance it has occured to you that i have than it is by coincidence...because i have not done it intentionally.'
People would be MAD To copy your stories. Marna Hai Kya Unko🤣 Obviously I Know My Zaalim Twin when she gets ANGRY😆
Geet's plan...Uhhmm...Crazy.
Vicky Is...Already Crazy,
Crazy+Crazy==TROUBLE!!!!
'Vicky: I just came here to tell you that our client from London is here to "Geet" you
Maan: Kya'!
Vicky: I said someone is here to meet you. She is outside and won't come in unless you "Geet" her in.
It had to take all of Vicky's strength not to burst out laughing, but he managed.
Maan: What! Unless I What..???
Vicky: I said unless you "greet" her in. You sure you are okay bro?
Maan murmurs to self: Okay???...i am turning crazy! Not only do I imagine and see her everywhere, I seem to hear her name too. I always knew that yeh lakri mujhe pagal kar degi. See I am even talking to myself just like her!'
TWO Things.
ONE, STUPID Vicky's Plan!
And TWO, I Dont know how many time Maan's said Geet's Gonna make him go crazy😆 Cuckooo😆
Part 45
Your Link; Takes me to Page 121 When its On Page 120😆
Yash---Romeo
Romeo--Yash😆
'Maan: So "Mr. Romeo" it looks like you already know "Miss Laddoo" here.'
🤣🤣🤣🤣OMFGGG🤣🤣🤣 SOOO Unprofessional!!!🤣🤣🤣
He thinks Romeo is he guy who broke her heart😆 He loves coming to conclusions at an early stage, I Don't blame him. Laddooo🤣🤣🤣
'Even at this age you still play pranks" he says in a playful tone.
Geet: Yup and you are the only fool I play them on.'
I Am Sooo Gonna Get You Zee!!!
Rubbing Salt On My Injuries Are Those Lines!!!!
Ultimate Revenge!!!!😈
'MEIN NAHI KAR SAKTA ROMEO. . . NAHI KAR SACKTA!!!!!!!!"
NO MATTER HOW MUCH I WANT TO HATE HIM I CAN'T. KYUN! KYUN MEIN ABHI BI USHE PYAAR KARTA HUIN? MERI JAWAB DOH ROMEO! MERI JAWAB DOH!!!"'
😆I Love You Zee
Okay Geet's letter.
Emotional Wreck----That's You Okay😆
'Aapko bhool jana mumkin hai, Asan nahi!
Lekin mein vaada karti huin ki mein bhool jaongi aapko sanam dheere dheere.
Mohabbat ki sare sitam dheere dheere!
Alvida . . . hamesha ki liye Maan!'
That Sounded Like A Song😆 Bhula Denge Tumko, Sanam Dheere Dheere Lalala
'The bus driver stops and says, " paaji I have brought your Geet. I have brought your geet".'
🤣🤣Look look I Found a diamond!🤣
'" My name is Geet, but I am not his Geet" the women innocently said.'
🤣🤣I Swear I Could Not Stop laughing!!!!
'Driver: Acha? Than what are you doing here?''
Paaji🤣 you brought her here🤣
'The crowd starts to split in the middle.'
Yup It was all rehearsed😆 Filmy Style
'Geet's heart was going DHAK DHAK for the man named Maan Singh Khurana. Maan's heart was going DHAK DHAK for the woman named Geet Handa.'
DD Stands
UGHHH!!!!! Aunty Ji Aunty Ji!!!😡😡
DD Stands for Dhusht Dhanav
So Her Dhak Dhak Is Dhusht Dhanav, What's His?
Dhushti Dhanavi?😆
OH EMM GEE
Maan Singh Khurana who saved my life and gave my life back.
Maan Singh Khurana who accepted me and brought me into his world when my family and the whole world had turned their backs on me.
Maan Singh Khurana who gave a lost soul a reason for existing.
Zee, these lines mean a lot to me. You'll find out. I Realized it today morning while reading...
Ahhh Aunty Ji Wacked me on my back!!!!! FINALLY She's Left!!!! She turned my window Into her Ghar!!!
'Some girl actually fainted in the crowd.'
🤣🤣OMFGGG SARCASM AT ITS BEST!!!🤣🤣
Wait, they were seducing eachother amongst many people...creepy😆
" WE want a kiss. KISS! KISS! KISS!" they were chanting.
Sick Sick Sick Sick Sick Sick!!!! Like Come on!!! Would you want to be seen smooching? Would You? Huh Would You?!🤣
'Maan just wanted to throw Vicky out of the car, but what choice did he have, his car hit a tree, and so they had to go with Vicky who refused to sit in the front saying he was getting car sick sitting in the front'
🤣🤣
Throw him Out Throw Him Out Throw Him Out!!!!!!!🤣
Hungry? Come and get some!
Uhmmm...Title should be; I'm dying, do you wanna help?😆
'(Yup imagine Geet in this 😉)'
Uhmm...I Only See Priyanka🤔 My imagination doesn't force me😆
JAANI
NOW!!!! COMES THE BIG QUESTION !!!!
WHAT DOES JAANI MEAN?!!!!!!!
You Always say that And I've like...it was soo hard to stop myself from asking! Cuz I'm You now!😆
'He just freakin shoved her off to the GROUND!!!;
🤣🤣🤣
Oh Khurana Brothers!!!🤣🤣
" Chup bilkul Chup!"
FINALLY!!!!!!!!🤣
Part 55
W*F?! I'll be in jail If Do...'A Night Of Ecstasy'
🤣
Warning: COntent for ages 18 +
Read at your own risk
SHE PUTS THAT!!!
And FORCES This Innocent Child Who Was 16 At That Time! TO READ IT!!!!!
I've Read It Once And Disappeared For A Long Time😆
So Skip!
Part 56
SKIP!!!
😆😆Read Read And I'm Never Going Back There I Swear!
'Maan and Geet both jolt up in shock and Geet accidently loses her balance and falls on to the floor.'
🤣🤣🤣OMFGGG Here It Goes Again!!🤣🤣
"Maan beta" Vicky mimics Daadi's voice once more before bursting out laughing!'
🤣🤣🤣OMFGGG That Cracked Me Up!!!!
'Vicky: yeah! For saving your butt! Or else daadi would have come here first instead of me and you two would still have been dancing to " Yeh . . .Yeh lazy lazy lamhe ! lazy lamhe!" he says chuckling but makes a run for it seeing the anger in his eyes.'
🤣OMFGGG If The Above one wasn't enough, This one OMFGGG I HATE YOU VICKY!!!!🤣🤣
" Daadi as if Maan bhai wasn't enough of a zaalim singh khurana 'his future wife has already turned to a Mrs. Zaalim singh khurana that too before marriage. Geet ki babaji please mera raksha karna there will be two zaalims in the house'.mein toh gayi!"
MRS.ZAALIM SINGH KHURANA FINALLY MADE HER ENTRY😆
I Know That's You😆
Okay I Have Nooo Idea How Long This Took Me!
I'm Sure It Was Sunny And Look, It's 9PM Now😆
Aunty Ji Made Her Entry Asking Me About ITunes! W*F! How Am I Supposed To Know?! I Don't Use My IPod! Its Is So Alone My Baby😭😆
OMG I Love This FanFic!
And Yeah I'm A Slow Reader Because Then I Can Comment Like This Rather Than Something Like "OMG It's Awesome !! I Love It!" And Its Not Even Related To The Story😆
I Guess Everyone Has To Be Like My Zee In Order To Get Such A Big Comment😆
I Know I'm Zaalim--Hey No! You Called Me Zaalim Cuz I Wasn't Telling You What I'm Gonna Put In My Comment😆
I Swear I Have Sooo Much More To Say!!! But Damnnn My Memory Isn't That Strong!😆
You Did Eventually Say "Chup Bilkul Chup" Properly😆
Spell Coffee Right😆
I Noticed, Your spellings and everything would Go Perfect when you had Ample time for it😆
Now It's 9:03PM😆
I Loveee Youuu Zee🤗
Ameena Says We Write The Same But We Don't. What You Write, I CANNOT EVER Write Like That.
I Thought You were British and You thought I Was American😆 I Guess Our Accents now reveal we're NOT😆
AND AND The way you write, PURE AMERICAN-ISH🤣 I Don't write BRANG When its supposed to be Brought. Not that you wrote it but I Noticed Americans say that A Lot😆
Learn some British Slang😉
Apart From Inni And Rubbissshhh😆
Awesome!
Waiting For Season Two That Brings The Dead Dev And Scary Sameera Back😆
Wohooo I Commented Before You Completed It!!😃😆
Update The Last Part Soon😳😳
Sadiie
Ahhh Its 9:25PM!!
It Took Ages To Colour That!!😆
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