'Two Broken hearts falling in love' THREAD 6 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

are tum agai

mi seeing a dream
i hope thsi time ur regular means regular 😆


abi meri pindy queen 🤗🤗

no ur not dreaming 😆

yeah i am a zaalim so don't trust me 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK


abi meri pindy queen 🤗🤗

no ur not dreaming 😆

yeah i am a zaalim so don't trust me 😆


u r really a zalim
see i got new color
u r red red me pink pink☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Sadiie..

What A Zaalim Kamini She Is!! You told me you were gonna update this later on LAST NIGHT! Haawww 😲Now I Don't believe you, she's gonna leg it I know it 😆Update ...I mean POST IT MAN! I'm ready to go red! 🤣 🤣

Luv Ya! You Know I Do 😉
Sadiie x


i was getting screamed at for txting you while watching a movie . . . omg my cousin literally chased me around the house to snatch my phone 🤣🤣

i couldn't risk taking my laptop out 😆

hahaha okay jii gonna post 😳

awwwh luv u too! of course i know 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079


u r really a zalim
see i got new color
u r red red me pink pink☺️


hehe 😛

i know congratulations. u look sexyyy😉

this zaalim needs to catch some speed. i am still in the 5000s 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK


hehe 😛

i know congratulations. u look sexyyy😉

this zaalim needs to catch some speed. i am still in the 5000s 😆


i know this looks sexy just like me🤣
i just love this pink colour
i just hope in this vacation of 3 months u post another 5000 post to get pink😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079



i know this looks sexy just like me🤣
i just love this pink colour
i just hope in this vacation of 3 months u post another 5000 post to get pink😳


yes hopefully 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
waitinggg...!!!!!!
good to see u bak...
update soon...!!!!!!
plxxx update luv is blind too...
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Posted: 13 years ago

I am back surprised? Missed all of you loads! sorry to keep you waiting I am very zaalim i know. But to be honest. I was kinda feeling lost a little and as a result couldn't bring myself to write. In a way got detached. But now i think i am back on track and will do my best to update regularly. 😳

Thank you all for waiting and supporting me 😳🤗


Part:59

Mr.Zaalim singh khurana's sweet revenge

Warning 18+

Recap:

He looks up at her , " What I don't even get a kiss? Not even after your zaalim torture session at the breakfast table?
" nope! We are already late. . . daadima is waiting for us" she giggles away up the stairs.
Maan looks up at the sky, " Geet ki babaji. . . you are laughing at me and enjoying aren't you! Sigh!" he says going up the stairs but a naughty sexy smirk comes on to his face, " Mrs.Zaalim Singh Khurana. . . time to meet Mr.Zaalim Singh Khurana. You are going to have to pay up sweatheart" .

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Geet walks inside her closet turning the lights on. She lifts her finger scanning through the outfits, not being able to make up her mind.

Another red salwar suit attracts her interest she lifts out of the rack with a smile, but then she stops herself.
Geet: I always go for red as it's my favorite color, but for the first time in my life I want to wear the color that makes someone else happy.
She smiles as she softly mummers, " someone very close to my heart" not being able to help herself from blushing and biting her lower lip in the process.
Just when she was about to look for another outfit the lights turn off and the closet door closes shut.Geet turns around quickly but all she saw was pitch-black darkness. She wanted to scream for Maan, but her fear of darkness made her lose her tongue. She closes her eyes and from the bottom of her heart she calls out to Maan.
Maan. Kahan ho aap. Please aaja mere paas. Come and take me into your arms. Only in your arms do I feel safe.
"Geet", she heard his faint whisper.
"Maan", she almost yelps for him opening her eyes searching for him in the darkness.
Yet he was nowhere to be found. She had imagined it she thought to her dismay. Even if she had imagined it, his voice was so soothing. Knowing he was with her, even if he was part of her imagination made her forget that she was surrounded by darkness.
She closes her eyes again.
"Geet", she felt him whimper right past her right ear in his sexy baritone voice.
Her breath hitches and a sweet smile plays on her lips. Not wanting to break the moment she keeps her eyes closed.
"Maan" she whispers back.
"Do you love me Geet?", he whispers back.
"I do", she retorts back feeling the hotness in her cheeks.
" Prove it", he huskily whispers this time his lips brushing against her ear lobe making her suck in her breath sharply.
Geet: How?
Maan: If you open your eyes and you see or hear me than I will know that with eyes open or closed you only see me. I will know you love me, because my presence. . . my love will consume over you, over your whole body, and over your fear of the darkness. Are you ready Miss Geet Handa?
Geet: Maan please! NO! I can't do this. Don't make me open my eyes. I'm scared of the dark. I am only imagining you. If I open my eyes you won't be there.
Maan: On the count of three you will open your eyes.
Geet: Maan please. Don't make me do this. I . . .
Maan interrupts her and starts the counting.
Maan: One!
" Maan Please" she pleaded.
Maan: Two!
" The darkness will consume me", she murmurs holding back her tears.
Maan: Three!

" Maaan", she screams opening up her eyes.
Her legs would have of failed on her, but at the same moment she opens her eyes a flame ignites giving her enough light to see his face as he abruptly backs her up against the wall covering her mouth with his long but sensuous finger.
"Chup bilkul chup" he mutters in his serious tone as he inches closer to her moving the flame of the lighter a little to the side.
He could see the tears in her eyes ready to escape and fall down her cheeks. He outlines her lower lip with his finger, before sliding his finger down to her chin titling it upward, her lips inches away from his lips.
A tear spills and trails down her cheek as she murmurs, "I HATE YOU. . .I Hate you"!
He wipes away the tear and moves a few strands of her hair blocking her face then digs his fingers into her hair bringing her in closer. Their noses were brushing against each other, their breaths mingling and diffusing into one while neither one broke the intense gaze inside each other's eyes.
" I know", he utters weakly smiling before taking in her lips and fiercely showering a few open kisses on her.
Getting only a little response from Geet, Maan pulls away kissing Geet's lower lip and just hovers over her lips resting his forehead against hers in a loving way.
" But I love you. . . mystery girl", he softly whispers using the nickname he had given her during their first encounters.
Geet: Prove it!
Maan smirks and starts to brush over his lips across her cheek until he reaches over to her ear naughtily singing, "Hum tum ek closet mein banda ho . . .aur chabi kho jaaye "
Geet shies away moving her face to the side. Her heart racing faster against her chest.
Maan turns off the lighter and Geet holds in her breath as she felt Maan's fingers snake up around her back.
" I can't see you blush, but I can feel your temperature rising . . . your heartbeat fluttering. . . even you sucking in your breath" he says with a low chuckle.
" For someone you hate you awfully respond well to the feel of my touch" he huskily mummers under his breath as he bites her earlobe.
"Dusht! Danav!", Geet moans out as she dug her nails inside her skin trying to hold in the sensations that his touch was electrocuting through her blood stream.
Maan lightly chuckles as he slides his nose down her neckline showering kisses until the nape of her neck.Geet shivers feelings the outline of his teeth against her neck. He lightly puts pressure on her skin, pleasurable pain of his love mark shot through her core with in, a deep moan escaping from her lips. Geet scrunches his shirt pulling him closer, Maan smirks at her authoritativeness and before he knew it he gets pulled to the ground.
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Daadima is walking back and forth at the Khurana Mansion.

Vicky: Daadima. Please sit down. They will come any second.
Daadima: we have been waiting for 45 minutes. How long does it take to get ready? Pundit jii is waiting.
Daadima: Let me go over and see for myself.
Vicky: Nahi!
Vicky: Mere matlab hai. Nahi why trouble yourself. I will give them a call.
Daadima nodes and Vicky calls.
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"You are cheating Geet on your loving hubby who is waiting downstairs", he says throwing both their pile of clothes to the side of the closet then rolls their bodies against the floor where now Maan was on top inching dangerously toward her lips and taking them in.
"mmm really? Toh phir tum kaun ho" she moaned into his mouth biting his lip making it bleed a little. She licks it with her tongue and caresses her top lip with her tongue seducing and unleashing the animal in Maan.
koi faraq nahi parta . . .Pata hai kyun" she impishly moans as her chest heaves feeling maans hands glide ever so gently over her skin, taking it slow. "Kyun" he whispers as he caressed her labia and watched her gasp and arch her body around him.
" Because I am day dreaming" she giggles, which then turns into moans and screams of pleasure as Maan slides his fingers deeper in and out.
Moments later a cell phone starts to ring. Maan pegs it against the wall, irritated with getting disturbed.
The cell phone makes a bang sound as startles Geet. She flutters her eyes open and wonders what kind of day dream is this? Why would a phone ring?
That's when the phone rings again and before Maan could react Geet pushes Maan off her.
She goes and sees Vicky's name flashing on Maan's cellphone.
"Hello" she answers trying to steady her breathing and voice.
" hmmm. I call Maan bhai and Miss Geet picks up. Nothing fishy about that now is there. What are you guys singing Hum tum ek closet mein bandaho kya? " he says teasing Geet.
Geet didn't know what to say before she could say anything Maan grabs the phone from her.
" I saved you once. I can't save you again. Come here fast before Daadi sends an army down there and sees what you two love birds are up to" he says chuckling.
" Hum dono araha hai in 15 minutes. Tell Daadi to calm down" he says turning on the closet lights while Geet looked at him shocked.
Vicky: whatever you say bhai.
Maan then hangs up the phone and looks over to Geet who was now fuming not seeming to realize that they were both looking at each other nude.
"I would let you check me out all day but because of you we are late so let's get ready and wear our clothes" he says with a killer smirk.
"MY FAULT!", Geet screams charging at him with her finger pointing deadly towards him.
" You are the one who played this GAME with me! I was freaking out in FRIGHT in the dark! And you used the chance to have sex with me! UGHH! I HATE YOU!" Geet said turning around annoyed.
Maan grabs her wrist and pulls her in one thrust!
"Sss" maan hisses.
" Now you are about to make it my fault. You look even more sexy in your fiesty Mrs. Zaalim Singh Khurana mode. You are turning me on! Don't blame me if Daadi sends an army in search for us", Maan naughtily mutters as she continued to fight against his hold.
" Choro mujhe Maan!" Geet almost snarls at him with her dagger shooting eyes!
" Nahi chorunga toh? Kya karogi?" he hisses back pulling her closer lips inches away.
"Mujhe rape karogi?" Maan chuckles and releases her.
"Keep laughing Maan. Thank you for making me the joke of the day" she says turning around and choosing a goddamn outfit not caring anymore to wear his choice anymore.
What she said hurt Maan a little. She was taking it all wrong. He was just trying to punish and have a little fun with her. It's okay for her to be Mrs. Zaalim Singh Khurana, but not for him to be Mr. Zaalim singh khurana? Kya zamana hai!
"Geet wear this one. You look sexier in white", Maan says passing her a white designer salwar kamiz trying to lighten the atmosphere.
Geet takes it from his hand and flings it at him as she walks out of the closet.
" yeh sach much naaraz hain mujhse ya naataak kar rahi hai ? What ever it may be I have to manafy her now" maan shakes his head then smirks and heads to wear his clothes.

Pre-cap:

Wedding and engagement shopping


Important note:

I decided to not to do a season 2 and instead add a few more parts into this FF. Thus this FF will finish in about 10 more parts. There is one last twist left coming in a few more parts.

I am going to do my best to give daily updates. So i will be focusing on one story at a time. Those who are waiting for my other works. Please bear with me a little bit more. I will give you an update because you have been waiting for so long, but i am going to be mostly focusing with one story at a time. It's easier for me that way. This FF will finish soon. Next will be Love is blind. THen i will focus on my FF "I see right through you" and my SS " Shackles of Love" at the same time.

Is that okay with you all? If anybody has concerns or even suggestions please feel free to talk to me and let me know.





Please if you liked the update hit the like button and pweez comment. Me miss reading your lovely comments 😳




Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first hum tum ek closet mein band ho aur romance ho jaye love how vicky teasing them on phone waiting for next good that you are copncentrating on one at one time and good that you thaught to finish it first
















Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
loved the zalim panti of maan
zee i like ur decision as this u could focus on one story and not get distracted

me second 😭

congrats tamanna for coming first
Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago

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