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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ajenn

Part 24
Finally Maan gets to know the truth.
I tot its going to be Maneet making the game plan, but here its Maan had started his plan with Evelien and Emma.
I really hope Agent M will take charge in meeting Maan and Geet.
They are so going to pay for their dirty game.
Maan got lots of make up to do. Geet should not forgive Maan easily.


Well Maan will be needing Agent M's help😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
wow maan n agent M ...
together!!!!!
ll be waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: mel420


240 volt ka jhatka Yep one of your curses happenend even if the didn't happenend to the wrong person😆 don't worry I am not Ekta and hater her serials 😆 and MSK is back in action I am mean come on he is THE MSK he will make up and self loath he can do two thing at one time🤣

me too hate Ekta's long lasting serials though her pairing is awesome i mean lead actors!!

he he multi-tasking MSK!!!!!!

ha ha yup yup JHATKA of truth!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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phew this update just relieved me from all the stress...

Maan hear everything......Emma u r gone...Emma was so cunning she made plan with her mother to separate Maan-Geet...so evil...

awesome and interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



phew this update just relieved me from all the stress...

Maan hear everything......Emma u r gone...Emma was so cunning she made plan with her mother to separate Maan-Geet...so evil...

awesome and interesting update...

thanx for pm...


I am happy that your not stressed anymore😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

I was not planning to but if your waiting I will update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47


Part 25
Geet rubbed her eyes. She couldn't believe it. Why does she always fall so easy for Maan. Eh enough of his rubbish. No tears fel out of Geet's eyes. Her heart had become from stone. She heard a knock at the door. It was ramu kaka with Maneet's ice cream.

G:rame kaka Maneet is sleeping why don't you put the ice cream in the freezer. I will give it him tomorrow.

Maan walked back into the hotel room.

M:Honey
E:yes Maan
M:I am so sorry but it wasn't possible for me to arrange a meeting with the owner of D&G.. Her secatry is not picking up. I will try latter. But tomorrow I've got another suprise for you. BTW when is Evelien and Mohinder coming
E:After 2 days Maan. Maan you hadn't eaten well thx do ehh anyway I ordered wine and shrimp.
M:Darling if we want to start a real relation you should be the wife I always want right, honey.
E:yes maan
M:I never told you anything because I thought this relationship was a must for you to save you familiy's honor
E:It used to be Maan but not any more
M:Good now I won't feel guilty when I act like the husband I am
E:No Maan absolutly not
M:Good I hate this food. How do you think I would eat something like that. I hate the dress your wearing your looking like a S*** so go and change and you eat I am not hungry. Thx do all this drama today. I have a lot of work to do yet which I didn't. I am going to work here on the bed while you eat.

Emma was in tears he said she looked like a S*** and he hated the food. But still she tried to impress him

E:No Maan I can't eat without you
M:Alright honey. Why don't you go and change and give me a footmassage my feet are aching.
E:WHAT
M:Why something wrong
E:No I am just going to change

Maan smirked. This is going to be fun he thought. You will beg me that you don't want to be my wife.

M:Honey what's taking so long
E: Oh Maan where you missing me already
M:Yes sweety my feet are really aching
E:Huh oh

Emma sat on the bed.

M:No honey sit on the couch. it will be relaxing for my feet.
E:Eh okay.

It had been a hour poor Emma was still giving maan a message.

E:Maan I am tired
M:Please baby
E:Alright

After 2 more hours Emma fell in sleep. Finally Maan thought. He didn't want her to sleep with him on the bed that's why he had made her sit on the couch . Eh he hated it when she touched him, but he found it Hilarius to let her work like that and this was just the beginning. Emma woke up the next morning on the couch. Her hands were paining she had messaged Maan for three hours. Maan just came back from his jogging.

M:Good Morning honey

Emma smiled at him and walked over to him.She tried to hug him. But maan walked away.

M:No hugging sweety I am all sweaty
E:I don't mind
She walked up to Maan
M:Sweety I am smelling your morning breath why don't first go brush your tooth. I am going to have a shower.Make sure my breakfast is ready when I come out.
E:Sure Maanu
M:Maanu
E:Yes Maanu do you like it
M:I hate it The MSK doesn't like nicknames. My parents gave me a great name call me by that. (right so what happenend when Geet used to call you DD😆)
E:Alright shall we go shopping after breakfats
M:No darling I've got a long day a head. Working suprised for my dear wife.
E:Oh Maan being with you is enough for me

Maan just walked over to the bathroom. He was enough with all the sweet talk. he found it disgusting.

E:Maan
M:Go brush you teeth

Emma felt hurt. Am I stinking that bad. Gosh everthing is going wrong. Alright Emma get ready to impress your husband. Emma wore all long red dress with halve sleeves. She orderd egg bacon and wine as breakfast. maan came out the shower.

M:What's are you going to a party. Why can't you were normal dresses when we are at home. He looked at the breakfats What's with you and wine. Listen I don't drink and I don'gt wanna see wine at my place. Your not allowed to drink as my wife get it.
E:Yes Maan
M:And another thing I don't eat meat in the morning. I can't eat this. Forget that. have you made my chlotes ready
E:No
M:Can you do anything right women.
E: Maan you didn't ask me
M:Don't you have your own brain do I have to tell you evertrhing. Forget It.

Maan grabbed a bag and walked out of the room banging the door. Smirking he went to the washroom. He got changed and went out to do some arrengements. In the meanwhile Emma started crying. She didn't like it that she did everything wrong.What every she wore Maan hated her in it. She decided it was time again to wear dresses like Geet. And She decided to call Maan's mother to ask her what his likes and dislikes where. Poor girl she didn't know Maan told everything to his mom so Mommy knew about Emma and Evelien's evil plan to seprate Maan and Geet.

Pammie:Hello
Emma:Hello Pammie mom how are you
P:I am fine beta. having fun in caleforina
E:Yes a lot
P:Good where coming tomorrow to Caleforina togheter with your parents
E:Great wo I wanted to no want Maan likes
P: wo He loves OMG My chicken is burning I call you latter.

Pammie hung up. She didn't tell her wrong likes of Maan so that Emma wouldn't get suspicious. Smart Dadi kiski hai.

Maan had figured out where Geet lived. (Finally yaad ayi apni contact khi). When Geet was dropping Maneet to school, he followed them. He waited in front of Maneet's school. It was finnaly break time. Maneet and a girl walked out of th school. Maan stood up and walked towards them.

Maan:hey Maan(Ab bhot pyaar ara hai Maneet pe kya baat hai)
M:Eh Hi (What is he doing here Maneet thought)
Maan:Hey who's this pretty little girl
S:Hi I am sally Maneet's gir
M:My friend
Maan; Really maan said with a smirk
S:No I am his girlfriend
M:Sally don't start. For screaming out loud were just ten
S:So In muskaan's deewanigi the herione was was also ten when she fell in love and when she was

Maneet smacked his head. There we go again he thought.These love stories have drove this girl crazy.

M:Yeahyeah I know when she was eleven she got married.
S:Yes and the lived forever togheter there is even a part 2 comming called twisty deewanigi written by ruchs

Eh lo now she is going to drive me even more crazy with her lovey dovey talks. Thank you Ruchs and Muskaan😡 (I(Mel) just love these ff's)Maneet thought.Maan looked at the kids with amusmend. He decided to pull Maneet's leg a litle.

Maan:So your going to get married next year
S:yes
M:No
S:Why not
M:Because it's illigeal
S:So in deewanigi
M:Yeah yeah I know

Maan couldn't help himself he started laughing out loud. Maneet looked at him in anger.

Maneet:What are you doing here
M:sorry. Sally can I steal your BF just for two minutes.
S:Sure. I am just going to play with Frankie. I will be at the playground if your searching me Maneet.
M:Okay

Maan and Maneet walked to a nearby bench.

Maan:Maneet can I ask you something
M:Sure
Maan:What's the name of your dad.

Maneet took a deap breath. He openend his bag and grabbed the diary out of it. Maneet had asked Geet in the morning or he could keep it. When she asked why. He answerd answerd so that he could re-read the happy moments. He said he loved reading it. Geet nodded. I am mean he ahd already reading everything she didn't saw the use of taking it away from him.
Maneet gave the Manthsbook to Maan.

Maan:Maneet what do I have to do with a Mathsbook
Maneet: Open it
Maan: That's Geet's diary
M: Read it after that we will talk further.
Maan:But how can I read her diary
M:Fine then you will never now some important stuff

Maneet wanted to grab the diary back, but Maan pulled it back.

Maan:No I will read it Thx maneet
M:Hmm
Maan:No go to your friends or should I say gi

Maneet gave him a angry glare with shut Maan up😆

Maan:Sorry bye Maneet
M:See ya soon bye

Maan walked to his car and he started reading the diary

Precap:Maan's part of the story

Next:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2884476/deceived-2-link-to-thread-3-p-1?pn=11

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: mel420


I was not planning to but if your waiting I will update

yippeee
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
awesome update!!!!!!
loving maan already...
maan n his plan...
tich tich tich!!!!...
now emma ll know wat ll happen if yu mess wit the gr8
MSK...😆
Maan reading the diary...
awesome update dr...
loved it...
ll be waiting for more😊😃
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!Loved the part a lot...
So maan s in mission to tarnish emma..
Better late than never..!
Sally Maneet's girl friend..omg!😆
My dear cutiepie frankie s also a part of this ff..
I loved it a lot..
poor frankie has no boy friend?😉

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