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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: mayapari

hey hello...

wen did maan become ur maan...
hes our maan...
or may be MY MAAN😉😆


😆 not when you dared to hate THE MSK😆
acha my maan should I call geet I mean I am THE great MSK little sister 😳 but I am not trusting you😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: mel420


😆 not when you dared to hate THE MSK😆
acha my maan should I call geet I mean I am THE great MSK little sister 😳 but I am not trusting you😲

I NEVER HATED MAAN...
JUS SMALL MISUNDERSTANDING😳
ih no not the sherni geet...
kacha chaba legi mujhe...
plzzz don trust me wit MSK😉
hayeee😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: mayapari

I NEVER HATED MAAN...
JUS SMALL MISUNDERSTANDING😳
ih no not the sherni geet...
kacha chaba legi mujhe...
plzzz don trust me wit MSK😉
hayeee😆😆


😆Yes she will. looking at geet's MSK khatere is ghaali nahi hai😆
don't worry I won't😛
Kya baat hai MU but you never hated him. Hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Freaking awsome!!!!!!!most epic update!!!!!!
Want 1 moree!!!!!!!!!!!!plsss!!!!!!nowww!!!
Acha hoa emma ke saat...maaan lub u!!!!
Finallly truth out 4 maaan!!!!!!!
Waiting
Waitin plsss update now
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: princes939

Freaking awsome!!!!!!!most epic update!!!!!!
Want 1 moree!!!!!!!!!!!!plsss!!!!!!nowww!!!
Acha hoa emma ke saat...maaan lub u!!!!
Finallly truth out 4 maaan!!!!!!!
Waiting
Waitin plsss update now


alright😆 wait me updaiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: mel420


alright😆 wait me updaiting



Yipppi!!!!!!!!!
Waiting eagerly!! 😊
❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: mel420


😆Yes she will. looking at geet's MSK khatere is ghaali nahi hai😆
don't worry I won't😛
Kya baat hai MU but you never hated him. Hai

who can hate our cute maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: mayapari

who can hate our cute maan


😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

part 26
Maan was in tears while reading the diary. She loved him so much. She trusted him, while he didn't. Maan hated himself for this. She kept waiting for him, hoping he would trust her and he. ERH He banged his hand against the door of the car. She called him up to congratz him and he> he was so rude.And he looked at his watch. Accidentally he wore it today. She gave it to him. He loved it even when he didn't knew it was giving by her. She was truly his Misty. Crazy girl she called the company. Dhak Dhak, while actually he was a true Dust Danav. Dham it Geet I hurted you so much how can you love me so much. And Maneet are son. You had the bring him up all on your on. Sorry Maneet but I promise I will be a good dad and will keep you and your mom happy. I am so sorry. How could I hurt the ones I love the most. I will never and I repeat never deceive your trust and love again. I will always trust you I promise.

Maan walked up to Maneet. Maneet walked out.He saw ramu kaka and Maan standing there.He walked over to Ramu kaka.

Maneet:Ramu kaka you wait in the car. I want to play a little more. Preaty pleas.
R:Alright go

When Ramu kaka sat in the care Maneet walked towards Maan.Maan picked him up, hugged him and tears flew out of both their eyes.

Maan:I am sorry beta. pleas forgive your dad for not being there.
M:Mommy needed you more then me
Maan:I am sorry I will never leave you guys alone. Pleas forgive this stupid dad of yours. Pleas Maneet.
M:Only if you promise to keep my mommy always happy.
Maan:I Promise
M:But wait mom said your married so...
Maan: Well

Maan took Maneet in his lap.

Maan; I will tell you the whole story.
M:Okay
Maan:Wo when Geet left. I was about to leave when Evelien started her drama.

E:What will happen with are respect in the society. What has this girl done. I told you Mohinder don't give her to much freedom. Now have you seen what happened. How will I show my face in society. All the guest will be coming. Pleas Maan do something.

She fell on my feet and started sobbing. I didn't now what to do I was already really disturbed. So I wanted to walk away from there. But Evelien grabbed my feet and started sobbing. I looked helplessly to Mohinder. Who was in sate of shock. Somewhere I felt bad for him. I felt that he was to deceived. That's when I realized Evelien had left me and she was begging to Mrs. Khurana that Emma should marry me. I objected . Mohinder got a heart attack it become all to much for him. When Mohinder felt better. The first words that came out of his mouth where that everything was ruined. That's when some of Mohinder's family friends asked what happened, or he was okay. And where was his laadli Geet. Out of anger Mohinder spitted out dad she died. My heart pained when he said that but I hated Geet at the moment to much to say something. (Maan had tears in his eyes while telling Maneet the story. He had the feeling he would break any moment) Maneet interrupted him.

M:But how did you get married I presume to Emma.

Maan took a deep breath.

M:Evelien started the drama she said that she was scared that Emma would do the same as Geet she wanted Emma to marry right now. She started pleading again. I shook my head and said it wasn't hm headache if Emma would do something wrong. Mohinder started hitting his fists on his heart. Impermanently even the thought of something like this would happen again, scared him. he go another heart attack. The doctors told us that if he would get another heart attack, he would die. Everyone thought it was the best thing for us to marry, because of Mohinder's state.

Maneet:So you got married
M:No
Maneet:Huh
Maan:I took Emma to a separate room.

M:Do you want this marriage to take place
E:Yes for Mohinder papa
M: Even when you know nah that I am only marrying you because our families want to and your family name is on stake.
E:Yes Maan I know
M:Your sure you want to do this because I can never love you.
E:I know Maan and it doesn't matter. The only thing that matters to me is our family's respect.
M: Fine but you can live your life the way you want it even if you ever want to re-marry just tell me.And can we live like friends.
E:Sure Maan don't worry I am not expecting anything from you and I loved to live like friends.


Maan:Still I didn't feel like marriying her or anyone else expect Geet. something striked me she was only 16. We couldn't get married even if we wanted to. I told that to Evelien and my family and Evelien decided to fake marrige for Mohinders sake. Evelien asked me after two years of marrige if I wanted to marry Emma. I said we will keep living like the way we are living. I wasn't planning to marry her. It irked Evelien a lot but she said nothing anymore about this mater. I mean for the world we were married and soon Evelien and Emma forgot we were not married, come on it had been twelve years. Evelien and Mohinder started nagging about wanting to have grandchildren. I told them we would have them once Emma would settle in her career.

Maneet:Who do you think is behind framing Mommy
M:Hmm I heard Emma and Evelien talking on the phone yesterday. They were behind it
Maneet:Are you going to kick Emma out and tell grandpa the truth
Maan:No
M:NO
Maan; Not so fast don't you think Emma needs to get punished first.
M:Agree
Maan:I promise you I will give you and Geet all the happenis in the world. Maneet pleas call me dad.

Maan had fresh tears in his eyes.Maneet smiled, tears also formed in his eyes.

M: I need to go Ramu kaka must be waiting
Maan:Yeah I also have a apointment with geet at 4. Maan said with a broken heart.
M:Alright bye daddy

Maan couldn't believe his ears he stood up and hugged Maneet tied. Both started crying again.

M:Enough crying daddy it's time to smile now
Maan:Your right son

Maan kissed Maneet goodbye

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
me first again...
happie dancing drlng
awesome update loved it...🤗
yu deserve these...
loads of hugs n kisses...ummah😊😛
yippe emma n maan are not married...❤️
love yu loads n tons😆😆
loved the dad son talk😊
uff waiting for maan n agent M's plan...
hope geet forgives him😊
waiting for more updates😉😉
wouldnt mind if yu give one now😉😉😆
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago

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