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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Thanks dear😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NiharikaNeha777

lollzzz... Dev n Meera ---- Toota aur Maina... their balcony moments... Maan -Anniee kii mimicryyy... it's sooo funnyyy... Meera tho gaya 😆

aur Geet has d pic of Maan in envelop... par woh dekh nahi rahi hain... Maan ki ghar mein bhi baat chal raha hain... dono party sath mein shopping bhi ja rahe hain... um sure wahan mulakat tho nahi hogi 😳
par shayad as u say... b'day party mein bada surprise... hailla... waiting mishu... jald se milwa de Maaneet ko yaar 😉 mujhse Maaneet kii dooriyaan bardasht nahi hoti hain 😛 😆

hahahahahahahah Nihaa chill babe.. ok sure ..wait for there meeting 😆 but... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONOMAKTER1

superv update

loved maan teasing session so much he is so sweet 😳

Thats so sweet.. Thanks dear😊 Stay connect 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -maankimishti-

Lovely part dear 😊

loved Maan teasing he is so sweet 😍

and dear KEEP posting GURMEET's pics bhalay MAAN ki ho ya YASH ki ya phir GURMEET ki koi solo offscreen personal life ki pic, main Gurmeet hain, MAAN YASH dono ki GURMEET hain koi farq nahi parta MAAN ki ho ya YASH ki situation pai jo suit karay woh post karo bhalay Yash ki hi kyun na ho 😊

hey Thanks mish ur always my bestie.. thanks wait n watch.. will uplaod more mishti's and dhak dhak just according to demand. hugs .😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maaneet4eve

Awesome... please pm me!!!

Sure dear and Thanks 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: payalpari

awesome

waiting for their first meet 😉

Thats so sweet.. Thanks dear😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks dear😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Loved the part..
Loved the teasing session of maan for meera-dev..

Thats so sweet.. Thanks dear .stay connect .coz i have some more beautiful surprises in coming updates 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update...

toh maan n geet k proposal aya hai...lets see wht happens nxt...

i really enjoyed d teasing of maan n annie to meera...


i loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...

continue soon plz...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part : 6

Ppeeepp ppeeepp peeep OH Gosh This Mumbai traffic so annoying, I just don't like dis. We are getting late. I have to do lots of stuff today. (Pinky horn cont and blabbering)

Geet: Thand Rakh pinky. U know this Mumbai traffic and don't worry we will back before Ur parlor timings.

Pinky: Shut up yaar m already so nervous and u r reminding me about my parlor appointments.

Geet: (smile) relax see cars start moving.. Now speed up Ur car not ur tongue. We will reach in time.

On the other side Maan and Rohan are roaming in shopping mall.

Maan: Oh Man we are roaming like idiots in whole mall. Do u have any plans for shopping or we are here just for window shopping like girls.

Rohan: yaar m so confuse about today evening. It's my first time and I want look perfect in front of my future in-laws. I am so nervous.

Maan: (laugh) hahahahahahaa Rohan be a MAN .. Teri waja sy Mardo ki naa cut jay gi. By the way teri Barat jaye gi not aye gi..

Rohan: not so funny Maan. Tu mera dost hay ya dushman.

Maan: (control his laugh) chal us shop pr chal key tery leye allaa si jeans shirt leity hein chal ajaa.

They enter into the shop and start checking jeans and t-shirts. Maan choose black shirt with stylish button n curvy sleeves and ask sale man to pack for him. Geet and Pinky think to buy some outfits for evening and they entered into same shop.


As geet enter into the shop the breeze naughtily blow her hairs.. The strands teasingly move on her face.

Kitne duur duur ho, unn dono ke raste
Mil jate hai jo bane, ek duje ke vaaste
ek duje ke vaaste

Music...

The tickling sensation passes in Maan's heart. For a min he stop and looked around as his heart beat became fast.


He becomes confuse with sudden change that he loses his attention from Rohan.

Rohan: Maan Maan kidher goom hay yaar. Mein tujhy bula raha hoon ar tu paglo jaisy idher udher dekh raha hay. Teri tbayaat to theek hay naa?

Maan: Haan m fine.. Just tired ab teri is shopping k chakar mein meri halaat kharab kardi hy m bored yar. Teri shaadi hay meri nahee.

Rohan: ok relax mein agey dekh kar atta hoon u just relax.. Take dis seat and have some water.

As Rohan left..Maan stood and again look around and move towards unknown direction.

GeeT check dis yaar.. hows this. (pinky show yellow sleevless long gown ) Aj birthday pr ye color kaisa rahey ga?

Geet: hmm its fine yar but try some bright colors as its very special day for u...

Geet : hmmm try this one. (Pick blue gown wid shoulder off)


Pinky: ahaan Not bad Geetu.. let me check. As Pinky move towards changing room leaving Geet alone.

Maan move towards the dress rack and the same rack at opposite direction geet is standing and busy in selecting dresses. She saw men black shirt with beautiful button styles and curve sleeves lying on nearby counter. The same shirt MAAN asked salesperson to pack for him. She moved her hand on shirt.

Jaise dil hai dhadkan hai
ek duje ke vaaste
Jaise aankh hai darpan hai
ek duje ke vaaste

At the same time Maan eyes go towards a beautiful red outfit. Red is always Maan's favorite color so he stand and move his fingers on the red out which has silver broach on her dupatta. Unknowingly he stare that outfit.

Jaise barkha savan hai
ek duje ke vaaste
Ek sajani ek sajan hai

Geet serious looks change into sweet smile just as she felt tickle with Maan fingers moving softly on that red the dress. It felt Geet is wearing that dress and Maan hands are moving softly over her, admiring her. Standing opposite in front of same rack but can't see each other their moving fingers on cloths which is not just a piece of cloth for dem but a life and they adore that with their eyes and hands. A smile crept on Maan's lips too.

ek duje ke vaaste

ek duje ke vaaste
ek duje ke vaaste

Rohan came from back and pat his shoulder.

Rohan: Maan tujhy ye girlie outfit chahey (Rohan wid shock face)

Maan: (smile) no yaar u know RED is always my favorite and this outfit looks really cool. Haaye Kassh meri koi girl friend hoti then I would gift this elegant dress to her. M sure I would got something really sweet in return (maan wink)

Rohan: hahahaha Maan tu bhi na..

Maan: but one thing is sure that whoever would wear this outfit would be most beautiful and smart girl not by face but wid heart coz this elegant and stylish outfit is made just for that type of girl. Simple, sweet but smart brains ik daam hut key sabsy sundar sab sy alaag. Might me some angel from heaven .

Rohan: Oye hoyee Mr Tu kabsy Itna romantic type baan gaya..Kahin ye teri uss Mysterious Khirki wali ka to nhee asaar.

Maan: Uffh Kiski yaa dila di yaaar (Maan naughtily put his hand on heart) Ik bar mil jaye fr dekh kaisi halaat krta haoon. Gin gin kr badly lungaa (maan wink)

Rohan: hahahahaa tery iradhy khatarnaak hein Maan.(rohan tease)

Both share laugh.

Maan: chal chal bohaat hogayaa. Tera hogayaa now let's have some lunch fr mujhy bhabhi k leye kuch gift bhi leina hay.

With this they move towards counter for payment. And at the same time Geet who was busy in finding dress for herself saw the same beautiful red dress and select at first sight.

Geet: waoww its soo pretty. I m gona buy this.. Pinky teri birthday k leye kaisa rahey ga.

Pinky: ahaan Geetu tujhy ye bohaat suit krey ga.. Take it

Geet ask sales woman for that outfit and move towards the payment section.

After payment they move towards the other shop.

Pinky: uffh Geetu m so hungry. We are shopping and forget about our lunch. Right now I need 2 big Jumbo size burger with extra mayonnaise, extra cheese, with lots of French fries. One saucy pasta, two'

Geet: OMG pinky ye akely tu khaye gi??

Pinky: geetu m so hungry. u know mjhy bhook bardhst nahee hoti.

Geet ok u go and order I be just back in 5 minutes.

Pinky: ok come fast.

Geet move towards the "MOMENTS" shop for pinky birthday present.

She was selecting cards and gifts for Pinky. On the other side Maan is also busy in selecting gifts for her To-Be Bhabhi. Both are standing with back towards each other, standing side by side but unaware of each other presence. Lost in selecting gifts but their hearts recognized each other beats. Who can say they will be MANEET in future. They would be two souls in one heart. They are strangers for each other but there heart beats are known. Standing strangely with their backs but these two strangers will soon be together and will give new name to world's most beautiful feeling "LOVE"

Ush rab ne jab dil diye
dil ke do tukade kiye
Dono pe ek naam likha
ek radha ek shaam likha

While reading card a smile crept on Maneet lips.


Ab yeh dil dhadakte hai
milte aur bichadte hai
ek duje ke vaaste
ek duje ke vaaste

A violin in some nearby instrumental shop starts playing giving sign that it's the beginning of their journey towards each other. Nature, and the world around them are giving signs that they are made for each other but none of them noticed that how wind change its direction, how music giving their beats new rhythm. Time stop, clock tick tock became silent as to not disturb the spell of hour. The dancing of heart beats with the rhythm of new music, the music which is mix of their breaths and heart beats.

Geet : (phone ring) tring tring

ek duje ke vaaste
ek duje ke vaaste
ek duje ke vaaste

Pinky: Kahan hay tu Geetu. 5 min ka bol kar gai ar abhee taq nhee aye..

Geet: ok m coming.

Maan left shop and geet followed unknowingly. Both move towards opposite direction

Maan reach near the lift and press button for door opening. He entered and lift door close. There are many people in lift which make it bit suffocating.

Geet on the other hand call pinky

Geet: Pinky where r u? M standing in cafe.

Pinky: ooppss I thought u must be late so I m now at ground floor. Don't worry lift sy ajaa.. m waiting in parking area.

Geet: uffh tu bi na.. m already hell tired .dono how would I look fresh in ur party.

Pinky: hehehehe sorry baba..chal jaldi aja will go parlor and aj tujhy special relaxing treatment dilwaongi. M sure u would love it.

Geet: ok m coming tu parking sy jana nhee.

Geet move towards lift. She pressed button and after few minutes lift door opened. A rush come out from lift so she had to move aside. As one guy left ,she enter into the lift without noticing the guy and press close button. Lift start and with a sudden jerk it stop and it became dark. The jerk make Geet fall on the guy chest, due to darkness she can't loose her grip on his shirt. Exactly that's MAAN.


The smell of colone enters into her nostrils and she closed her eyes just to feel dem. The strong hands move on her back and cover her protectively.

Hum dono ek jaan hai
do dil ek armaan hai

She breath fast and her heart start beating as they are participating in MARATHON. Both lost in each other embrace. He said" Don't worry I am with u Mishti" She look upto his eyes. And start moving her hand on his face. Their breaths interact with each other. Their lips are few inches apart. Maan move his fingers on her cheeks and remove strands just to have clear view of her face. He was about to remove completely suddenly lift starts and lights on and lift door open. Suddenly light came out to disturb there peaceful romantic moment. Geet realize and as door open she run outside without looking back.

Lekin ab is mod par
deke daman chod kar

Maan standing static and shock as what just happen in last couple of minutes. Those eyes, those breaths and soft silky skin which softness still felt in his fingers..The caress he still feels on his cheeks. The rosy lips which could be seen in dark are so inviting that he urged to kiss them, to feel there softness, to enjoy their taste.

Waqt ka hai ye faisala
hum tum ho jaye judaa
Mange khushiyon ki duva

Geet run fast as she could with control her tears that what just happen to her why dose words really melted her. Why those eyes have her reflection.


Why those breaths are matching with her breaths. The cozy, arms which are protectively around her make her feel she is in safe hands. She didn't feel such comfort before. That embrace was just for her. as she belong to them only.What make her body connect so perfectly with his body? So many unsaid words are said thru the meeting of their bodies, eyes, heart and soul.

ek duje ke vaaste

ek duje ke vaaste
ek duje ke vaaste

ek duje ke vaaste

With this confuse and mind ful of questions she sat in car without realizing pinky's non-stop questions and blabbering. When pinky didn't found her answers and found her lost she became silent.

MAAN standing in lift when Rohan call him

Rohan: MAAN dude its fine. Lift door is open .. Come we are getting late.

Maan saw Rohan blankly who drag him outside in parking area.

...

precap: Waaat Shaaadiii 😲

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