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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...maaneet's dance wow...waiting for next update eagerly...
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wooow awsome part loved it 😊

engerly wait 4 next update😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

geet hate rj and love geet crying and maan sad to make her cry




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Amazng ya..y geet's cryng?did she remember her past?waitng 4 her past to be disclosed and maaneet's dance[\WINKS]

Thanks 😊 dear check last updates. her past already disclosed. but MSK is ANJAAN 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

omg!maan ki shaadi..

is it geet..
geet really blasted on maan..
waiting to c maneet's dance..

Thanks dear wait n watch. 😆
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Originally posted by: love4maaneet

nice update...maaneet's dance wow...waiting for next update eagerly...

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Originally posted by: SONOMAKTER1

wooow awsome part loved it 😊

engerly wait 4 next update😳

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Originally posted by: -maankimishti-

lovely part

continue soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey buddies thanks for ur cute comments and Likes but donno my likes are going down it was less on Maneet part and more on other parts. might be u ppl don't want Maneet 😆 well ok will not post more Maneet tickling scenes..😉 Complaint na krna rofl.🤪 anyways heres most awaited moment of all. so i tried to mark ur hopes . rest in ur hands. plss plsss plss hit LIKE Button or comments. I really work hard to get ur thumbs up.👍🏼

enjoy.😳 and bear my Mistakes 😊


PART: 8

Hey Pinky yar ur bzy with ur ROHAN m getting bored.

Lets have some dhamal yaar.. music, dance' something.

eshita ask Pinky)

Pinky: Relax yaar. Abhi to party start hay. I have something very exciting today.

Pinky move towards the mic and announce. Attention my sweet guest. Party is full on and I want to make this party more exciting, sweet and ROMANTIC by some games,dance, masti. So dear's lets have some DHAMALL yyyeeeaaahhh

Ok I have a brilliant idea to make dis prty more bright n thrilling. I have this two boxes which has Guests name. Red Box contains Girls name and Blue Box Contains Boys Name. so one by one u all have to pick one paper and read name. That's would be ur partner name and u have to dance or perform with dat person.

Wwwooohooo (all cheered) and whose performance would be loved that couple would be Our PRINCE AND PRINCESS of the party. Ooowww so be careful ..

Lets the Party Begin ooohhooowwooo. After all guests got their Paper, Again pinky start. So who's the first couple we have.

ESHITA and Rahul ooo ((Couple move ahead)

Janvi and Pratik ooo

ARmaan and Laila aaawww

Rithik and Amisha

Panchi and Abhay

Then its Geet turn ,she open her paper and found it has name "MAAN" she became confuse and speechless. Pinky ask Hey geet Speak up yaar. Who's the lucky man hmmm

Geet :yar pinky I don't want to play. Plsss

Pinky and Rohan: that's cheating Geet..don't be spoil sport. Tell me whos' name card u have.

Geet: Plss plss Pinky try to understand.

Rohan came towards Geet and took her card and surprise at name "MAAN" wooohhooo Kya baat hay Sali Sahiba. Not bad hummm. This confused Geet more and she start playing with her hands. No Jeeju Pls mera mood nahee hy plss Jeeju.

Pinky: so Maan now ur turn open ur card. Maan open his card n found "Geet" name. he smile inward. Hehehehe Cool dude. He call its "GEET"

Pinky: terrific.

Rohan: C'mn geet. Its ur bestie b'day atleast uski khushi k leye.

Maan: Rehny dey Rohan.. I know Maan Singh Khurana ka charm aisa hay k she can't handle me. Isko daar hay kahin ye bhee apni besties k jaisy mujh par Fida na hojayen.

Geet: excuse me mr .. ur not that much charming. And Geet kisi sy nahee daarti..Mujhy Impress Karna its not so easy.. get it.

Maan: Ohaa Ya I can see dat.. (maan Smrik)

Geet : haan ok ye baat hy M ready. Abhi sab tumhara M-

o-Hot ka nashaa utrey ga.

Maan: Great Dude..Hit on target. (Maan smile on his trumiph) he came close to Geet ears and whisper " SHAYD YAHEE CHAHTA HOON"

Geet: became restless and glare him.

PinkY; Greeeaattt sooo let the part begin. All couples proceed towards the dance floor.okkk Dj lets the music play..

Music...

Eshita and Rahul start there dance and all cheered but after few minutes all get bored so crowd start.. wooo (wid thumbs down) both quit dancing wid sad faces and left stage.

Janvi and Pratik start dancing and all start whistling n cherring dem but Janvi fall so all start wooo (wid thumbs down) looossseeerrsss both quit dancing and left stage. One by one couples eliminate.. Only Maneet remain so they came on dance floor.

Music start: (play Mohabbatein Theme dance music)

(theme song have 3 kind of music but I will include only two fast beats not classical ones. so m giving dem 1.2)

Music 1.

Geet start dance on the music ..She move around Maan with smirking expressions and pointing finger towards him. And stop as Music end end.

Music2.

Maan start dance on second music. He move back n forth towards geet and twist Geet by pulling her hand as beat change. And both start dancing together. Maan hold both hands and both move back n forth and right left.

Music 1

Both start dancing on beats wildly forgetting around where are they and wat are they doing. Lost in each other eyes and sweating and beating with fast breaths. They didn't realize it's just a dance. It's like they are fighting with their emotions which are attracting them towards each other. They want to refuse wat their body and beats want.

Music 2.

Maan put his hand on geet waist an they start moving with the beats. Lost in each other arms and eyes. Forgetting the world and their fights or Nok Jhonks. They were busy in the spell of love which touched there beats and they are lost in their own world where there is no one except Maan and Geet. A smile crept on both lips and twinkle in eyes. Seems the soul meets soul and bodies are enjoying their interaction. Hand in hand seems they are made for each other. Just perfectly in grip.

Music1.

Geet run towards Maan jump, he holds her from waist and lift her in air and turn around. Geet spread her arms with close eyes like she want to fly and feel this soul soothing air. It feels she is free from tears, sadness and hurting moments and now she has smiles and love around. She want to live dis moment in MAAN arms. Maan make her stand and both again start dance with the beats which has new theme. It's the music of their breaths, hearts and soul dancing at the beautiful MILAN of two bodies.

❤️Janey kabsy Is pal ka inko intezaar thaa. Kho Jayen, Gum hojayn, is duniya sy dur kisi ar duniya m ponch jayen. Ye waqt yahee tham jaye, ye hawa younhi gudgdati rahey.🤗❤️

As the music goes wild both there dance, moves become fast and passionate. Its not the dance for some event it's the celebration at the meeting of perfect TWO souls, bodies and hearts. Is Dil ki Barsoo Ki talaash Khatam hoyee. Both start heavily breath and can't resist the charm ,the calmness, the passion of each other, Both are so comfortable with each other in arms that they don't realize wat they were in last couple of minutes. For them they are always together like this. They don't need excuses to come near or to feel each other.

Beats stop and now the slow music giving new feeling, sensation in air. The feeling,the love, the sensation which Maneet hearts only understand. Geet stand static with heavy breaths and closed eyes. Both were sweating, breathing heavily .A drop clearly seen on Geet neck moving naughtingly and tempting inviting Maan. He can't control and move towards her and hold his waist from back n remove hairs from her shoulder and start drawing pattern on her neck with his finger on dose droplets. He doesn't like them to move wildly on her Mishti body and make tickle her when his fingers are enough for make her crazy. He closed his eyes and lost himself in beautiful scent of her hairs and body. He tightly hugged her from back. A huge round of applause start and all start cheering, clapping and whistling on couple. Maneet realize and both open their eyes and free dere self's from each other holds. Both bodies don't want to leave each other but they have to separate.

Geet saw confusingly around and then to Maan who was confuse too at his actions moving his hand on his hair looked towards Geet. Maan lost in dose deep, beautiful brown eyes who had so much hidden emotions, tears which are ready to come out, the confusion or hurtful sight which pierce Maan's heart. He wanted to took her far from this cruel world who had given her so much tears that they lost their sparks , lips who were enjoying pleasure in last minutes and become more red are now like a dry leaves who became lifeless in autumn.

Pinky and Rohan came forward and hug both. Waoww waowww u guys are amazing just sooperb.

Rohan: Hey dude wat was dat.. aaa its smashing yaar. It doesn't feel u guys were fighting at de start and now dis much bonding simply fantastic. It seems u both know each other since ages. Waoww waoww.

Pinky: So Buddies all knows who are the STARS of the SHOW'crowd shout MAAN and Geet yeeeaahhh.

Maan and Geet move towards the stage and got their Title belts as Prince and Princess. Both thanks and with smiles move from the stage. All congratulate Maan and Geet. Geet wid fake smile thanks and MAAN as usual cool dude with really killing smile.

Pinky came from back n whisper in Geet ears " Mein na Kehti thi MK is Dhak Dhak,ik baar miley gi to u can resist her "

Geet gave him angry glare and was about to say something when Rohan and Maan came towards dem with smile and teasing gestures.

Rohan: so u guys have wonderful chemistry and u really made dis event rocking. That's wonderful.

Maan: (came close to geet ears and whisper) I told u MSK charm is so magical no one could resist. Miss Geet welcome to MK drooling list. But ur lucky coz dis tym MK accept his heart stop beating when u were in my arms and I love it. (maan nuzzle in her ear)

Geet gave him glare and Maan in return give her wink.

No one notice as Pinky and Rohan were busy in praising dem and discussing their performance. After some time.

Rohan: dude don't u feel its late now. We should take a leave now. Warna in haseenao k ABAON ney dhulai karni hay mera to susral hay. (Rohan wink towards Pinky)

Pinky: hey Maan pls do me favor. Geet ko usk ghar drop krdoo. Me and Rohan really want to go for ice-cream.. wasy tum dono bhee humhein join kar shakty ho but u know Kabab m haddi bana kisko acha lagta hay RIGHT!

...

Precap: Suhana Safar Aur Ye Mausam Haseen Humhein daar hay Hum Khoo Na Jayn Kahin 😍

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Edited by MyInfatuationz - 13 years ago

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