Maneet FF...NOT A FAIRY TALE pt39-pg86(Mar 31) - Page 42

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lovely update dear,thank god maan reached on time.
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part 34
nice part...
Rohan is fine...
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who is this person?
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part 35
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what revenge this Brij has?
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Hi guys,

Thank you so much for the liking the previous update. I am so glad to read all of your comments.

Guys I wan a clear some confusions though. I know they have arisen due to my infrequent updates 😔.

Birj Chaudhary is Maan's business rival, who had lost the Techno Computer's contract to Maan and had swore to revenge him.

Also Karan was the event planner who had organized the party with Geet and Rahul is Geet's fianc.

@ritzy09 guys i really apologize for the infrequent updates. Actually the nature of my work requires me to travel a lot and also I am such a poor writer, I really need a lot of time to correctly pen down my ideas. Hence I really can't promise regular updates, but do promise you guys to make the update as long as possible each time. I hope u'll like that 😊

@namita25...thanks dear 😊

@Tyro...yes her Savior did reach there to save her in ekkdum Dabanggg style 😉

@snehapriya...thanks yaar for liking the bollywood tadka.

@love2_soma...i know...aab hamari Geet hai hi itni intelligent 😎

@ Hanishadevi..."full of action ,emotion,faith"...truly it was all Geet's faith in Maan that made her so brave to face those goons.

@mayurmaaneet...hey glad u liked the FF. Hope u enjoy the rest of the updates in the same way.

@sona-rai...saada MSK hai...time pe to punchana hi tha 😃

@spvd...Brij is avenging Maan using Geet, for the Techno's contract. Ganda baccha 😡

Not A Fairy Tale

PART 36

All her feelings, all the horrors, which she had faced in the last few minutes, came flowing out. She was shaking badly with fear of what would have happened if Maan had not reached there on time. But she had not lost faith in him and he had come to save her, he was her savior, she knew he would not have failed her.

Maan too held her tightly in his embrace and was trying to console her. But somewhere inside him there was a guilt, because he knew that he was the reason that Geet landed up in this trouble. All this was definitely work of some business rival of his. He was also angry at himself for wrongly doubting Geet's intentions, even if it was just for a second. For him, he had failed himself in keeping Geet safe. But he will fight with his demons later. First he had to take care of Geet, so he kept consoling her, assuring her that she was fine and safe. After a few minutes Geet calmed down and came out of his embrace. Maan released her, but brought his hands on her shoulders. "Geet tum theek to ho na"

She slowly nodded her head, though she kept her eyes down. "Geet.. tumne yeh saab kyu kiya. Kisliyia tumne aapni jaan ko itne khatare me daala. Agar koi tumhe kuch karr.." he couldn't even complete his own sentence and closed his eyes tightly in pain. He couldn't bear to even think about the possibilities.

He opend his eyes and looked back at her again, with a very pained expression.. "Main aapne aapko kabhi maaf nahi kar pata Geet, kabhi nahi. Kyun kiya tumne aisa Geet. Bolo Geet bolo. Kya zaroorat thi tumhe iss tarah khudki jaan khatre me daalne ki. Kya zaroorat thi.."

"Zarrorat thi" Geet raised her eyes to look at him. "Mere hote hue main kaise kisi ko aapko takleef punchane deti. Mere liyia aapki izzat, aapka maan sabse jada mayne rakhta hai. Main maar sakti thi paar aapke sath itna bada dhoka nahi kar sakti thi"

Maan was taken back at her words, the intensity of emotions in her words. He could clearly see love for him in her eyes. Since she was always trying to maintain distance between them, such a truthful admission of her feelings was not expected by Maan. But in her state of mind, Geet no longer had any control on her emotions. Her mind was too in shock still that she could not disguise her feelings and just said all what she felt. Even Maan coudn't stop himself from expressing his true feelings for her. Since long he, not accepting though, was dying to hear her confession.

"Kyun.. kyun Geet. Kyun tumne mere liyia aapni izzat, jaan kisi ki bhi parvah nahi ki. Akhir aisa kya rista hai mera tumse ki tumne khuke baare me ekk pal ke liyia bhi nahi socha aur yahan chali aayi.." without realizing, he had drawn her nearer. Her face was very close to his, their lips just inches apart.

"Bolo Geet bolo, kyu kiya tumne yeh sab mere liyia" his eyes were boring into hers, urging them to speak up her mind, to confess all her feelings. For once to forget all and just remember him, to get lost in him.

Geet was utterly helpless. She was not able to control her feelings. Even she didn't know what made her take such extreme steps. Just the thought that he may get harmed, had made her forget all about herself, her safety. At that time he was the most important for her. She was fighting for him in his absence, but in her mind she was sure, sure enough to risk her life, that he would not let anything happen to her. He would protect her. Yes, she knew it nowfor sure, that she had fallen for him. That he had become a part of her, that she could not see him getting hurt in even the smallest way, a part she would protect, even with her own life. Such a part that now even the thought of staying away from, may kill her.

"Kyunki mere liyia aap bhut mayane rakhte ho. Mainn.. main aapse.."

but the police siren interrupted her. She stopped, "Yeh main kya karne jaa rhi thi. Vahan ghar pe meri shaadi ki taiyariyan ho rhi hain, aur main yahan Maan ko yeh sab bolne wali thi" and she dropped down her graze from his face.

Maan was getting restless. He didn't hear any other thing, than her voice. He just wanted Geet to confess her feelings.. "Tum mujhse kya Geet, bolo Geet, aapni baat khatam karo, tum mujhse kya?" he was shaking her. His grip on her shoulders was getting tighter.

"Aaahh.." hissed Geet, her shoulder was hurting under his grip. He immediately left her shoulders, but he was very frustrated. He turned around to calm himself, it was then he noticed the police and Adi were rounding up the wounded goons. He suddenly remembered something and turned around. Surely, on hearing the approaching men, Geet was trying to cover her torn clothes with her hands, getting conscious. Maan quickly spotted her chunni, and wrapped it like a shawl around her.

"Geet tum yahi rehana, main abhi aata hun"

**

"Sir aap theek to hain na" Adi asked with concern on seeing Maan's wounds.

"Adi main bilkul theek hun" he continued.."Karan mila? Aur tumne pata lagwaya ki iss sabke peeche kiska haath tha"

"Nahi sir, Karan abhi ke liyia to hamare haath se nikal gaya par puri Amritsar ki police force usse abhi dhoondh rhi hai. Aur sir hume tip bhi mili hai ki iss mamle me shayad aapke competitor Brij Chaudhary ka haath hai"

Maan tightened his fist in anger, but for now controlled himself for Geet's sake.

"Theek hai Adi, tum uske khilaf jitne sabot ikkhate kar sakte ho karo. Phir iss mater ko main deal karunga. Maan Singh Khurana se takrane ka anzaam saab acche se jaan jayege" said Maan determinately.

"Theek hai sir. Siiir..wohhh..wooh Geet theek hai na?" Adi asked a little hesistantly.

"Haan Adi, woh theek hai. Bas abhi thodi dari hui hai. Tum chinta mat karo, main usse sahi salamat uske ghar pauncha dunga."

**

During the whole drive, Geet was exceptionally quite and lost in her own thoughts. Even Maan was at loss of words to say to her at this point of time.

But as her house drew nearer, Geet.. "Maan, car rokiyia please"

Maan pulled the breaks hard and looked worriedly towards Geet " Kya hua Geet, tum theek to ho na??"

"Sir hum yahaan se ghar nahi ja sakte"

"Kyun Geet? Tum daro mat, main hun tumahare saath, tumahare mummy papa se main baat karunga. Hum unhe sab kuch samjha denge "

"Nahi sir, who baat nahi hai. Wooh , wooh.." somehow Geet was hesitating in referring to her roka ceremony.

"Wooh hamare saab ristedaar hain ghar me abhi, aur agar main iss halat me unke saamne gayi to woh kuch na kuch galat matlab to nikal hi lenge, chaye aap kitna bhi samjhale unhe" Geet said with down casted eyes.

Maan understood. "theek hai Geet, par phir tumahare ghar jaane ka koi aur tareka hai kya?"

Geet knew there was only one more way in.

**

Maan was standing there with Geet, anger starting to build up inside him. He did not want to shout at Geet now, but what she was suggesting was simply testing his patience. Both of them were standing below Geet's room's balcony, and according to Geet, that balcony was their only chance to get inside the house, unnoticed.

Collecting all the patience he could and trying to keep his cool "Geet please be practical. Koi aur rasta batao, this is utterly impossible"

"Nahi sir, aur koi raasta nahi hai. Aur sir main yahan se chadi hui hun, kayi baar, chupke friends ke saath ghumne. Its absolutely safe sir" talking to Maan like this was helping her getting back to her normal self. With him around her, she was feeling all safe.

Maan was glad at listening to her argue with him again, but her climbing up that balcony, in her this condition, he will not let her to hurt herself any more.

"Nahi matlab nahi Geet, tum chalo mere saath, tumahare saare ghar walo ko main samjha dunga" he tried dragging her from there, but she freed her self, "nahi sir. aapko mujhpe yakeen nahi hai na. main abhi aapko chadke batati hun" and she started to climb with the help of a nearby creeper stand. But she forgot that her clothes were torn from a lot of places. The minute she tried climbing, her chunni shifted and exposed her bare shoulder. And in correcting her dupatta, she lost her balance and was about to fall, but Maan grabbed her at the right time.

Maaahhhiii..😉

They came to their senses and Maan put her down and adjusted her dupatta to cover her properly and moved a little away at her discomfort.

"Geet main tumhe bol rha tha na, tum iss halat me upar nahi chad sakti"

"Par sir, main iss halat me aapne rishtedaaro ke saamne nahi ja sakti. Woh thodi deer bhi nahi lagayenge mere, ma pitaji pe ungliyan uthane me"

Maan understood her plight. He turned to face her, she was looking down, tears dropping from her eyes.

"theek hai Geet main kuch karta hun. Tum yahi ruko, jana mat kahi yahaan se" and instantly Maan started climbing at her balcony. Geet was looking at him with astonishment. Once up, he vanished inside her room. It had been a few minutes and he was still in her room, Geet was starting to get worried, when something fell near her feet. It was her jacket. She looked up and saw Maan standing at her balcony and signaling her to wear it and then climb up. Geet gladly removed her dupatta and wore her jacket. Now she was easily able to climb up and in no time reached the balcony. Just when she was about to jump into the balcony, she lost her balance, but Maan already had her hands and easily pulled her up. He was holding her securely in his embrace and Geet was also holding him tightly. Both of them had their eyes tightly shut out of fear.

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Main hoon gumsum tu bhi khamosh hai

Sach hai samay ka hi sab dosh hai

Dhadkan dhadkan ik gham rehta hai

Jaane kyu phir bhi dil kehta hai

Jee le zara, jee le zaraa

Kehta hai dil jee le zara

Aye humsafar, aye humnawa

Aa paas aa jee le zara

They slowly opened their eyes, and looked into each other's. Many emotions were playing on their faces. With all what they have gone thorough in the past few hours, their emotions were especially heightened and they were no longer able to hide them from each other. Geet was secure now, but still Maan's hold on her did not loosen. Even she forgot to move away. Both were lost in each other's eyes. Eyes which have a language of their own, which were not capable of hiding any thing and laid bare all of their feelings for each other. Volumes, of their earlier hidden emotions, were now openly being communicated via their eyes. None of them wanted to break this contact.

But sudden voices below, broke their reverie and they moved apart. Geet saw people coming towards the garden area immediately below her balcony, so she hurriedly rushed Maan inside her room and closed the balcony door.

"Geet, yeh tum kya kar rhi ho??" Maan asked getting surprised.

"Shhh.. sir dheere boliyia, woh log sun lenge. Lagta hai papaji halwai ko yahaan neeche hi baitha rhe hain"

and she turned towards Maan with a worried face. "Sir, aab hum kya karenge. Aab aap yahan se kaise jaoge. He Babaji, saab garbad ho gaya. Aab kya hoga. Kisi ne innhe yahan, mere kamre me dekh liya to meri to shayamat aa jayegi" and she continued complaining.

"Geet..geet..GEET" Maan shouted and grabbed her and covered her mouth with his hand.

"Shhh Geet.. shayad tumhare kamre ke bahar koi aa rha hai"

Geet's eyes popped open in fear and she was trying to speak something, but her mouth was still covered.

"Kya hua Geet", she pointed towards his hands on her mouth. He immediately removed it.

"Chupooo.."

"Kyyaa.."

"Siiirr, chupoo jaldi se, koi yahaan hi aa rha hai"

"Kya..Nahi.. Maan Singh Khurana kabhi kisi se nahi chupta" he said in attitude, crossing his hands. Was this girl mad.

But Geet kahan kisi ki sunne wali thi, she was already pushing him towards her cupboard. "Nahi sir, aapko chupna hi padega, varna main to gayi, please sir, sorry sir" and she literally stuffed Maan inside her cupboard and hurriedly closed the door. Just then her room's door opened and in came Meera, Rano, Geet's taiji and Rajji.

On seeing Geet taiji shouted out loudly "Geet!!"

Geet got totally paralyzed with fear. Did they know?

"GEET, tu abhi tak taiyaa nahi hui, aur yeh kya haal bana rakha hai. Tujhe thand lag rhi hai kya, tune yeh jacket kyun phen rakhi hai."

And all four of them hoarded around her. Geet took in a breath of relief. With one glace at her cupboard, she tried steering them away from there.

Meera.."Geet yeh sab kya hai, tu abhi tak taiyaar nahi hui. Woh log aab kisi bhi waqt aa skte hain"

Rano.. "Geet puttar, jaldi kar. La hum tujhe taiyaar kar dete hain jaldi se yahi" and she signaled Rajji to go out and close the door. She giggled and started going out.

"Nahi..nahi Rajji, ruk" Geet almost shouted and hurriedly grabbed Rajji. "Mmmaain main yahaan change nahi kar sakti. Aaap sab log neeche chaliye, main abhi taiyaar hoke aati hun" Her cupboard was the one with the grills and they all would have been visible to Maan.

"Nahi tune na vaise hi bhut deer kar di to. Aab jab tak tu taiyaar nahi hoti, hum yahi khade hain"

and they pushed her inside the changing room to change. Maan would not stay in the cupboard for long. He would sure come out if these people stayed more, Geet feared.

Geet changed hurriedly and came out. She had her base on, but she still had to wear her jewelry. But without them also, there was looking very different. Her natural beauty was getting highlighted in her attire. Everybody was happy to see her looking this way.

Rano.. "Koi kala teeka to lagao zara isse. Mera baccha, idhar aa" and she lovingly placed a peck on Geet's forehead. She had tears in her eyes "Aaj hamari pari humse paraya hone jaa rha hai. Geet puttar, hum kaise tere bina akale reh payenge. Aaj tera roka hai, aur phir jaldi hi teri shaadi ho jayegi. Kitni jaldi tu hum sabko choke chali jayegi"

Instantly Geet's eyes shifted towards the cupboard. Maan had surely heard this now.

Taiji.. "Beetiyian to paraya dhan hi hoti hai Rano, tu khudko sambhal. Geet puttar, tu aab bas jaldi se aapne ghane phenle aaur neeche aa ja"

And they left her, closing behind the door. Instantly the cupboard's door opened and Maan came out.

Hai zindagi mana dard bhari

Phir bhi isme ye raahat bhi hai

Main hoon tera aur tu hai meri

Yunhi rahe hum, ye chahat bhi hai

Phir dil ke dil se, pul kyu toote hain

Kyun hum jeene se itne roothe hain

Aa dil ke darwaaze hum khole

Aa hum dono jee bhar ke ro le

Jee le zara, jee le zaraa

Kehta hai dil jee le zara

Aye humsafar, aye humnawa

Aa paas aa jee le zaraa


He was astonished at what he heard. Geet was having her roka today. So then why did she put her life in danger for him, if she was just going away from him and marrying someone else. Why her eyes showed love for him even now. He was slowly moving towards her. So many questions in his eyes, and pain was evident on his face. Was there really some other reason behind Geet taking this step. Geet looked at him helplessly. She knew she meant something for him, she knew he was hurt at hearing her marrying someone else, she knew he had read her love for him in her eyes. But now, she could do nothing. Whole of her family was downstairs, and Rahul's family was also about to arrive. She knew how conservative her Daarji was and he would never let her break this relation with Rahul. Tears were brimming in her eyes, and Maan was getting closer to her. She felt helpless and in a futile effort to hide her emotions, just when Maan was closing in, she tuned around and sat at the chair, grabbing her neckless and started struggling to wear it.

But his time Maan would not loose his trust on her. He will try to understand her, know her reasons and make her change her decision.

Gham ke ye baadal guzar jaane de

Ab zindagi ko nikhar jaane de

Chhod de ab yaadon ke dukh sehnaa

Sun bhi le jo dil ka hai kehnaa

Jee le zaraa, jee le zaraa

Kehta hai dil jee le zaraa

Aye humsafar, aye humnawa

Aa paas aa jee le zara

He touched her fingers, which were trying to close the clasp of the necklace.

Her eyes closed instantly at his touch and she brought her hands in front. He was seeing her expressions in the mirror ahead. After he finished, she opened her eyes, but avoided looking at the mirror where she knew his eyes will be searching hers. She hurriedly picked up her earrings, but again, due to her distressed situation, she was unable to wear them properly. Again Maan brought his hands to her ears and made her wear them. Geet was no longer able to hold in her tears. She was sitting there, with her eyes closed, but still tears were continuously flowing from her eyes. Maan was unable to take more of her tears, but he didn't want to hurt her also. He gently took her shoulders and moved her to make her face him and wiped her tears. Her eyes instantly opened. There was pain in her eyes. Maan knew something was wrong.

"Geet, aisi kya baat hai jo tumne itni jaldi yun mujhse door jaane aur kisi aur ki hone ka faisala kar liyia. Kya hum ekk dusre ko ekk mauka bhi nahi de sakte. Kya maine tumahari aakhein galat padhi hain. Kya jo main tumahare liyia mehasoos karta hun, woh bhi galat hai. Kya baas yahi tak tha hamara saath"

Fresh tears made way from her eyes. She wanted to tell him that his feelings, her eyes all were telling him correct. That she also felt something for him. That he had now become a part of her and that she didn't want to marry Rahul. But before she could say any of this, there was a knock at her door.

"Geet puttar, woh log aa gaye hain, tu taiyaar ho gayi hai na. Jaldi bahar aa ja"

Geet knew nothing could be done now. She brought down her graze and stood up. Maan too got up with her. "Inn sab baato ke liyia aab bhut deer ho chuki hai"

The pain of these words was so immense that, even Maan could not stop his eyes from filling up. He looked at her with an expression of betrayal.

"Geet, tumne mujhse waqt hi kab diya tha"

Geet closed her eyes in pain. His every word was true, but nothing could be done now.

"Sir, inn sab baato ka aab koi matlab nahi hai. Please chodiye mujhe, mujhe jaane dejiyia"

"Geet.. main tumhe pakad hi kab rakha hai"

Her eyes opened and she looked up at him. She started moving towards the door.

This all was unbearable for Maan. He was just not ready to let her leave him. In his last attempt, he grabbed her hand. Geet stopped and turned around to look at him. He was looking down, trying to hide his tears, but then slowly he looked up, in her eyes. She could see those hints of tears in his eyes. She could not bear that. She was about to go to him, but then there was another knock at her door. She knew she had to go now, otherwise someone will come inside. He knew she had to go now. She started moving away from him and he too loosened his hold. Their fingers parted and she moved out of the room, carefully closing the door behind her. She wiped her tears and tried to become normal and went downstairs.

Precap

Did Maan see Karan at the rooka ceremony 😲

NEXT PART: Part 37

Edited by thekolgal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭 so painful

************* me first😲... yipee
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Posted: 12 years ago
very touching update😭😭😭 geet feel helpless...maan crying😭😭 feel very sad for maaneet precap scary yaar...another thing is you are a great writer who simply surprise us with wonderful updates in your busy scheduel,,tk u...keep writing..👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
dekho tum ku6 bhi twist lao but no roka...maaneet ko aise rote hue nhi dekh sakte yar...
rahul ka kuch bhi ku6 intezam karo but use yaho se bhagao...
Amazing update...

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Posted: 12 years ago

y u r doing this with both of them

plzzz

ye roka mat hone do!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
th last portion where maan helped geet to wear jewelry...so beautiful...heart touching...y m thinking rahul is related wth brij chowdhury...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what a part dear

geet confess krny hi wali thi k police ka siren shuru hogya can't they come little ate

Oh maan's is in so much pain & so geet

i hope maan karan ko roka mn dekh ly

or uss ki band baja dy sahi wali

please cont soon

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