'Devil's Desire' Thrd5.New Note Pg150

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#491

part 10
wo jump karega...
and will say bet jo hai abhi bhi...
nice part...
cont soon...

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drrose31

@drrose31

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#492

only two words are enough for whole update that are : SUPER HOT... 👏

but i will elaborate as well😆 😆

i was thinking that snake was fake ????? coz it didn't move a bit 😆

both felt strange after the kiss...and what was that both didn't get

to know or at least tried to know...

geet was so sweet... It.. It was a kiss.😆 😆

for me that was a small peck...

and then maan said...Do you call it a kiss..?

I mean, come on we have done it before and I am sure I was not that bad to give you an impression that the thing you just did can be given the name "kiss".

aww... that was indeed a shameless comment...😳

and then...

wasn't geet supposed to seduce him???????? but here maan was seducing her ...

oh that too to make her respond him...

maan had answers of her every definition of love...

and once again maan was trying to prove himself right and geet wrong...

who succeeded ??????? i don't know

i loved these lines of your's annie... My conscience has several tongues,and every tongue brings in a several tale,and every tale condemns me for a villain.

o oo geet fell down in the water and she doesn't know how to swim...😲

hope her devil will save her...or that uday can do that honor???????

that is what i call cliff hanger😡

continue soon

love rose😉

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sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#493

I loved it... awesome didi... geet fell of the cliff... i am sure maan will save geet.. isn't it didi... anyway waiting for the next update di...

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#494

three equally dangerous things...water(she cant swim), snake(bitten to death) n DEVIL...n among d three most dangerous one is our DEVIL...hiii...hw much i love him...more poisonous dan a snake...muah...

no one can defeat my DEVIL...d answers he gave against geet's definition of love r amazing...hum toh fida ho gaye humarein DEVIL pad...

kuch ehsaas toh ho raha hai dono ko...magar dono hi anjaan hai iss ehsaas se...kyunki ek toh nadan hai...usse ye ehsaas naye hai...toh samaj nehi pa rahi hai...doosra...woh toh iss ehsaas ko manne k liye tayar hi nehi hai...woh toh adamant hai k pyar hotahi nehi...sab kuch sirf aur sirf desire n lust hai...pata nehi kab inn dono pya ko mehsoos karenge...intezaar...

magar abb kya hoga?geet to gid gayi?kya DEVIL usse bachayega?...zaroor bachayega...hai na?bolo bolo?...

awesome n beautiful n superb update dear...

u r amazing...u hav created d DEVIL in such a way k hum usse pyar kare bina rahe nehi sakte...u r just tooo good...love u...muahhh...

really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#495

oh man this is really very interesting di... now Maan is going to fear... moi loving it... now i so want him to understand nothing is more imp than love...and i want Geet to answer back if he dives in to save her...what love means in the way he proved ..

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#496

loads of questions in my mind.
What is love ?
What is desire ?
What does sexy mean ?
Is Geet sexy ?? Lolz or is it Maan's thinking...?

Nice update.
Honestly speaking, i want Geet to jump off the cliff...if she has to fight the devil, then she should do this, she has to prove that she wont give up to his desires. I know somewhere even Geet desires him...but for her love is much more above desire.
And even Maan feels much more for Geet...its just not desire or lust...he feels for her something beyond this materiallistic desire, so he will jump to save her.
OMG...what am saying...dont know what have i written...samajh aa jaye toh mujhe bhi samjha dena.

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#497

GOD di ...wat did u do ... U left us on cliff hanger ...there geet fell of/one n u hanged us on one ...
Amazing prt ...updt sooon super duper sooon ...plezzz...dont keep us waiting fo long ...

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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#498

that was so awesomely sensual...

I had goosebumps all over my hands... the intensity of Maan's dialogues and his ministrations were superb... I was completely drowned in his intense passionate teasing... I dnt knw how Geet held herself in front of this Devilish Hunk...

God!!! Am Dead...

And I think He is gonna jump after her...

PS: Haila... first time itna bada comment diya hai...

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay
That was a sensual update annie!!!!

Geet chose the devil among the 3 options...

and i loved the replies of devil for each explanation of love given by Geet... OMG... he is just amazing...

and i really loved the cool, composed and confident devil... and both geet and maan are so strong about their thinking and not giving up their own arguments...

awesome update aniee...

oops... again a cliff hanger... she fell off the cliff into water and u leave us there hanging too...

continue soon yaar

Yeah shru

small sa cliff janger this time

😆

not big one

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#500

Originally posted by: joliefemme
only thing i laughed at wen he called her sexy...lols
i have never imagined her to be addressed as that though she is sexy haan...😳
now will he rescue her is the big question...😕
😕it was maan who seduced geet...geet ne toh kuch bhi nahi kiya😡😡😡

not easy to seduce

devil😆

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