'Devil's Desire' Thrd5.New Note Pg150 - Page 52

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

ossum dear

suprb...i think she says this is love that they wont live for seconif there love is not there dear
and we knew now msk ll jump to save her dear
waiting for the next part dear
pls update soon cant wait dear
and want to know when maan fall for her
we knew he is in love but he feels that is lust
so waiting when he reconginses that is love dear
waiting for the next part eagerly dear

u never now
if he would jump or not😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
... This Man is impossible...Devil indeed...But i luv this devil...😉
I think in her heart Geet also feel that Maan is right at his place...
He is straightforward ...He very well knows how to play with words... Kya brain hei... Babaji!!!!!
He'll defo jump in water to save her...


Thanks for this lovely update dear... luv u too ...








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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

there is no solid definition of lv in the world...geet is right...how she can say what is lv bt one dy maan will say himself what is lv...u always end th part in such situation that our desire is never ending to read more...maan will save her or he will send someone to save her...or he will encourage uday to save her...

ok just wait for some parts
wait whenever this devil
would fall in love
he would give exact definiation
correctly as opposed to what geet give
now
😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome prt..ohno geet gayi paani me
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24

... This Man is impossible...Devil indeed...But i luv this devil...😉

I think in her heart Geet also feel that Maan is right at his place...
He is straightforward ...He very well knows how to play with words... Kya brain hei... Babaji!!!!!
He'll defo jump in water to save her...


Thanks for this lovely update dear... luv u too ...








thank u soo much
for ur lovelyyy
comments
luv ya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update Aniee.

Pls continue soon.

Thanx for pm dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PariNain

ok i changed my mind

after reading such a wonderful update I change my mind
here is ur comment

well seriously aniee this Devil of urs has a very true philosophy of life
hats off to u for such wonderful and bitter but true dialogues
u are a fabulous writer
each and every word of ur dialogues is a truth

now back to update
hmmm so he is feeling smthing different
thats nice
but as I said before
A devil remains a devil
so he is not going to show any emotions

loved the Geet's explanation abt love
and Devil's replies
and
she fell in water
yepieee
I knw I should feel sad for Geet she dont know swimming
but I am happy now we can get at-least a glimpse of his feelings abt her
I really wanted this
Thanks for such a lovely episode
LOVE U
A lot of
🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 for u

i was feeling
that i would get ur comments
as i will go to further
pages
and here r coments
thanks a lot dear
for liking it
and hey poor geet drowning
and u never know if devil
would actually save her ot not😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
lets see if the devil changes into hero from a movie for once
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 10

Superb update dear.

Am sure Maan will save her.

Waiting for next part.

Pls continue soon.

Thanx for pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: namita25

awww that's beautiful update annie...

haiii BTW..wasn't geet supposed to seduce Maan but yahan to story hi kucha ur thi..seems like Maan was really affecting Geet and making her weak...you know there is a tinge of truth in whatever he said to Geet...moi just love him...wohoo what will he do now...he surely will save her...hope he realises his love for Geet soon...

u never know
what happens next
winks

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