'Devil's Desire' Thrd5.New Note Pg150

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#461

ossum dear

suprb...i think she says this is love that they wont live for seconif there love is not there dear

and we knew now msk ll jump to save her dear

waiting for the next part dear

pls update soon cant wait dear

and want to know when maan fall for her

we knew he is in love but he feels that is lust

so waiting when he reconginses that is love dear

waiting for the next part eagerly dear

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aali

@18mypride

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Posted: 13 years ago

#462

nahien... She jumped in water...its awesome update.

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#463

there is no solid definition of lv in the world...geet is right...how she can say what is lv bt one dy maan will say himself what is lv...u always end th part in such situation that our desire is never ending to read more...maan will save her or he will send someone to save her...or he will encourage uday to save her...

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Faiza Ghafoor

@SecretSapphire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#464

ok i changed my mind

after reading such a wonderful update I change my mind

here is ur comment

well seriously aniee this Devil of urs has a very true philosophy of life

hats off to u for such wonderful and bitter but true dialogues

u are a fabulous writer

each and every word of ur dialogues is a truth

now back to update

hmmm so he is feeling smthing different

thats nice

but as I said before

A devil remains a devil

so he is not going to show any emotions

loved the Geet's explanation abt love

and Devil's replies

and

she fell in water

yepieee

I knw I should feel sad for Geet she dont know swimming

but I am happy now we can get at-least a glimpse of his feelings abt her

I really wanted this

Thanks for such a lovely episode

LOVE U

A lot of

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 for u

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Asmi13

@Asmi13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#465

lt was wonderful...instead of Geet, Maan was seducing her...he will not let her die, l know he will surely save her

Waiting for d next part

Plz continue soon

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#466

suprbbb updt👏
i m sure maan will save her...⭐️
cont sooonnn

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#467

devil is making it so difficult for her..

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namita25

@namita25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#468

awww that's beautiful update annie...

haiii BTW..wasn't geet supposed to seduce Maan but yahan to story hi kucha ur thi..seems like Maan was really affecting Geet and making her weak...you know there is a tinge of truth in whatever he said to Geet...moi just love him...wohoo what will he do now...he surely will save her...hope he realises his love for Geet soon...

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Bharathi_gurti

@Bharathi_gurti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#469

omg annie you should not let this happen...let me guess., maan would jump to save geet out of love but claims he cant let her go as she has to fulfill his desires for her whole life time...hey na..😉..this maan is hiding his love in desire., and geet is burning with this new desire for a devil., soon gonna see them burning in love and desire...😳...

i loved all the killing guestures of maan towards geet...the way he is tasting every sense of geet while making her realize that she is in desire is too too much hot re...

annie you cannot leave us with just this part...show us maan saving geet 😳