Naino ki Bhasha..Samajhe na !! Thread 2 pt 19pg131

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N
aino ki Bhasha
Samajhe na !!!

heyy frnds, MishTy here, starting to write a new FF on our beloved MaaNeeT

Dis Story Is Dedicated To My SweetHeart Frnd PAYAL
Love U payal


Synopsis

hav u heard...

angel falling in love wid a devil...
mr.perfectionist falling in love wid ms.disaster...
sweet falling in love wid spice...
human falling in love wid no less monster...

Maan & Geet

he was an angel..where she was a real disaster...
he talked less...n she had capability to break any record in talking...
he was sweet..she was spicy...

LOVE BROUGHT DEM TOGETHER
but...
... wat is it deir own love... ??





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Thread 1

I N D E X



part 11 - just scroll down

part 12

part 13

part 14

part 15

part 16

part 17

part 18

part 19



Thread 3










Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Characters :

[ vil only give main characters list here ]

Maan Singh Khurana


Geet Handa


Abhimanyu Singh Khurana


Payal Handa


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other characters

Kabeer Singh Khurana - maan's father

Kavita Singh Khurana - maan's mother

Savitri Singh Khurana - maan's dadi

Lovely singh - maan's bodyguard

Mohinder Handa - geet's father

Rano Handa - geet's mother

Raajveer handa - geet's darji

Arnav singhaniya - maan's only best frnd

khushi kapoor - arnav's fiance




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Love
MishTy


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Payal & Abhi



Maan & Geet





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😭 my LIKES N COMMENTS are decreasing 😭




Part 11



maan stamped her foot n went to dadi making poor baby face..dadi maan had long sat on d bed n was enjoying deir tom-n-jerry show...

"dekha dadi aapne..he is such a monkey.."

dadi maa supressed her giggled n pulled geet onto a deary hug, "my poor baby.."

get too made baby face followed by a smile and hugged dadi back...

*****************

breakfast table

"abhi..tum aur maan payal aur geet ko shopping ke liye le ja rahe ho.." informed kavita as she took her bite ..

abhi looked at his mother surprised like he was just waiting for dis only and quickly glanced at payal who was in 7th heaven...

but d most scared 1 was maan who looked up to god for his help and calmly spoke, "but mumma..me to aaj se office join karna..."

he was cut by his father, "its ok maan..u can join office later..abhi tumhari maa sahi keh rahi hai..dono bachhiyon ko ghuma lao..unhe achha lagega.."

maan was silenced wid dat, "ji dad.." n looked at geet who was smirking looking at him..

dadi suddenly burst into laughter remebering last night scene when maan had called geet dhanno ..

every1 looked at dadi maa litle shocked while abhi was hell scared thinking kahin dadi ko mere aur payal ke last night tarrace wali baat pata to nahi chal gayi..godd no ways..dadi vil kill me teasing for sure...

maan rolled his eyes at dadi maa while geet pouted her lips making baby face..

dadi maa sumhow controlled herself, "kavita u vil not belive..last night kya huva ?..."

abhi n payal looked at each other wid shocking eyes n den looked up, HEYY BABAJI !! dadi ko kaise pata chala..

maan n geet looked at each other..maan smirked while geet cribbed...

kavita surprised, "kya huva maa..."

dadi maa was about to tell when deir landline rang..abhi instanly stood up n took d call wid a relief, "hello.."

"abhi beta..me mohinder papaji bol raha hun..."

abhi smiled, "ji papaji..."

"bete wo rano bachhiyon se baat karna chahti thi.."

abhi, "ji me abhi payal ko bulata hun" wid dat payal went to take call...while abhi dragged dadi maa way taking care no1 notice..

confused, dadi maa, "kya hai abhi..kyu mujhe aise khich rahe ho..."

abhi made poor face, "dadi maa plz u cnt do dis..aap aise mum n dad ke samne kaise bata sakte ho.."

more confused, dadi looked at him, "me kya bata rahi th.."

abhi rolled his eyes, "yahi..aap mumma ko bata rahi thi na ke last night..me payal ko tarrace par lekar gaya tha...dadi maa plzz..sab mujhse fir se chidhayenge...plzz.."

"ohh.." smirked dadi maa to herself.. so abhi took payal to tarrace last night aur ye pagal samaj raha hai ke mujhe pata hai..chalo pata nahi tha to pata to chal gaya...(smirked dadi maa to herself)..ab maza aayega..humare bechare abhi ko satane me...

abhi confused, "ohh..dats it..dadi maa..plzz u vil not tell mom..ok.."

dadi made serious face, "ofcorse not beta..im so sorry.."

convinced, abhi kissed dadi maa's cheek n left to hav his breakfast while dadi maa giggled to herself..

******************

"so mrs.khurana..kahiye..kya shopping karni hai..." chukled abhi as he speed up d car...

smiling at his tease, payal slight waked his arm n answered, "take us to sum good mall.."

abhi smiled, "as u wish mam.."

abhi was driving while payal was sitting beside him while d two weirdest people in d world were bearing each other seating at d back..

maan glanced a look at geet n instantly looked away...

geet thought about sumthing, "umm khurana ji.."

maan knew it would be cuming soon n sighed, "bolo geet..."

"aaj lovely singh kahin dikhayi nahi de rahe aapke aaspaas...kya huva.."

maan smiled, "i had given him sum important work..he would be back by tomorrow.."

"ohhk.."

maan looked at her suspicious, "waise tum kyu puchh rahi ho..."

"bas awehi..." mumbled geet and dere came a next question, "khuranaji..aap 6 saal london me rahe ho na.."

maan nodded, "haan.."

geet chukled, "ji london ka time humare time se kafi late hai na..."

maan rolled his eyes, "haan geet..10:30 hrs late.."

geet mocked, "to kya isliye aap har baat late samajhte hai..."

maan , "haan geet..." n den, " WATT.."

geet burst into laugher followed by abhi n payal who were carefully listening to deir conversation..

maan fumed, "bhai aap apni sali ko samajha do..not to mess up wid me.."

payal giggled, "mish...dnt irritate him.."

geet still giggling, "di..ye khurana ji kabhi hasate hi nahi..to me to awehi inko hasane ke koshish kar rahi thi.."

maan rolled his eyes, "yaah right !!"

"waise kafi achha tha haan..good 1.." wid dat abhi again started giggling while maan looked away baby annoyed..

*************

gals walked through d nth shop while abhi n maan helpless followed dem wid deir bags , mumuring, "dis sisters r disaster man.."

payal, "kuchh kaha abhi aapne.."

abhi instanly cleared his throat, "no sweetheart..u carry on.." n rolled his eyes..

geet handed maan another bag, "khuranaji jara ye bag pakdiyena plzz.."

maan wanted to put all d bags on her head n walk out of deir but he controlled his wild thoughts n took dat nth bag...

both abhi n maan looked at each other and announced "SHE IS A SMALL TOWN GAL.."

(d song is from d movie bachna ae hasino..very awesum n funny song..i think suit here..plzz listen to d song while reading dis...)


"she is a small town gal..."

maan looked at geet annoyed while abhi made baby face who was planning to enter new shop..n both helplessly followed d ladie after getting angry glares...

"haww !!

sha is a small town gal

sha is a small town gal "

geet picked up 1 dress n tried on herself..made made happiest face like its suiting her a lot but d GEET had to made face and try for another...

payal picked 1 pair of earing n showed to abhi HOWZ IT ?? abhi smiled delightedly wanting to sumhow end dis shopping things..it was seriously sitting on deir nerves now..but poor souls couldn't do much...

"dil da sitara
she is a jogini pitara
robali nazara
she is dun di bahara..

akh naal akh daal gal kardi..."

payal was selecting ear-rings when her eyes fell on another beautifull anarkali dress...delighted she ran towrds dress while abhi followed making all kind of faces wid like 1- bads tangled along him...

"chhoti ungli pe nachayegi tumhe
she is a small town gal
chhoti ungli pe nachayegi tumhe
she is a small town gal
chhoti ungli pe nachayegi tumhe
...she is a small town gal..."

maan smiled in relief as geet finally selected 1 dress..he thought of checking few mails but geet snatched his cell and showed him a ice-cream parolow from far distance..maan rolled his eyes and went to hav a ice cream for her while she got engrossed checking sum new dresses...

" music..."

dey sat in pizza hut..gals enjoyed deir pizza wid d conversation wat shopping dey done n blah blah while poor men sat quite in front of dem wid bags laying on deir either sides...

gals talked n talked..but deir conversation doesn't seem to end..abhi tried to distract payal which held no much existance as payal didn't even notice him calling her...
maan giggled at his poor bhai which was wiped off instantly after getting an angry glare from him...

" kardi jo bhi kardi kamal
kardi baat ye bemisal
kardi sabka hai bura haal
kardi... "

dey were walking on d road when payal saw 1 guy being rude wid wife..angry payal went and straght away slapped him hard..shocking d hell out every1 n specially abhi who stared at his ms.SHERNI in amusement..
payal scolded dat shocked boy for being rude wid his woman and finally gave a sweet hug to d pair after deir make up...
every1 clapped for payal while abhi smiled in amusement n followed her like a good boy...

" ho nachdi mele me sabke naal
nachdi khulke o
ho nachdi dhol bajada janal
nachdi..."

dey were enjoying deir walk on d road when dey saw a baarat enjoying..excited, gals ran deir n joined d barat n having fun...
maan shook his head wid a smile at kept looking at dis weirdest gal doing bhangda so beautifull and specially enjoying so much of her dance wid funny steps...she is a real weirdo..pata nahi bhagwan ko bhi kya sujhi jo aise peice ko bana diya, thought maan in amusement n he didn't even realize dat he saw staring at her motionless for like too much of time...geet came n saw maan lost..she streched her fingers in front bringing maan back to his senses..startled at his own action..maan instantly looked away n unknown to himself a smile creeped his lips...

" baaji kikalaayi kare sabki dhulayi
baaji kikalaayi kare sabki dhulayi

khusmankhayi koyi na safayi
akh naal akh daal gal kardi..."

geet dragged maan to dance along wid her..he refused few times but geet didn't gave a damn n managed to make him dance forcefully and while on d other case payal's simple sweet smile on enough for abhi n he himself joined her in bhangda...
dey danced and danced being wamrly welcumed by baarat people...
and finally wishing d dulha dulhan a happy married life..d baarat moved forward...

" chhoti ungli pe nachayegi tumhe
she is a small town gal

chhoti ungli pe nachayegi tumhe
...she is a small town gal..."

payal made baby face at abhi wid complains dat her feet r paining now..she showed her high hills...abhi rolled his eyes n d next moemtn..payal foud herself tangled in d strong arms of abhi..payal smiled excitedly at abhi n snaked her arms around him..abhi smiled mischiviously at payal n held her tighter as dey went...

"chhoti ungli pe nachayegi tumhe
she is a small town gal

chhoti ungli pe nachayegi tumhe
...she is a small town gal..."

geet watched d enire scene n den finally looked at maan..maan twitched his eyes-brows like WATT...
huh !! dnt even expected me to pick u up alright...thought maan seriously...

geet made cute face at him n showed her high hills...
maan paid no attension to her n acted to ignorant..geet made annoyed face but she couldn't voice it...

she went closed to him almost confusing maan wid her intensions...
maan waited for her next move..shocking him ,sge stamped her foot on his n walked away wid a smirk..
n was left wid a wince n horrible expressions...

*****************

driving back to home


geet looked away...

maan rolled his eyes, "geet aise tedhe medhe muh banana band karo..."

payal turned to look back, "kya huva geet..."

geet made baby face at payal, "di mere pair bhi bahot dard kar rahe hai..jiju ke jaise koi jawan handsome and string munda to nahi tha na meri madat karne ke liye (she deliberately streched all d words giving a taunting look to maan while maan rolled his eyes..)...esiliye mere pair dard kar rahe hai.."

payal shook her head wid a smile n murmrued, "nautanki.."

abhi listened to dem patiently but maan's ear were sharp enough to what payal murmured..he almost smiled widely..trying to hide his amusement...

geet faked him an angry glare n lokked back to payal, "kya kaha di aapne..."

payal smiled, "kuchh nahi baby..ghar pe challo..i vil give u msg ok.."

geet smiled widely, "ok di..i love u .."

abhi instantly creebed, "hey dats my dialogue.."

payal rolled her eyes while geet giggled...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Congrats for new thread waiting for update
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awsome
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thnqqq dear 😛


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Originally posted by: --Fairy--

Congrats for new thread waiting for update


thnxxx dear 😛



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nice part special song selection is awesome😊
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