Naino ki Bhasha..Samajhe na !! Thread 2 pt 19pg131 - Page 36

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Part 16



scared both turned to see dadi who was all d way lost in d movie...

and d poor men sighed !!

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"kya movie thi na..full on awesum.." exclaimed geet cheerpily..

abhi looked at geet wid killing eyes adn faked a smile at payal murmuring, "ek toh puri mvoie ki waat laga di..aur

upar se bol rahi hai..kya movir thi.."

confused, geet asked, "jiju aap akele kya badbada rahe ho..."

abhi mocked, "kuchh nahi saliji..u continue.."

dadi maa, "enough of it now..chalo sab sone jao ab.."

maan who was already yawning, got up instantly, "good night every1.."

geet looked at him annoyed Mr.Boring Singh Khurana...

every1 went to bed while geet went to dadi maa's room...

"arre geet beta..kya huva...aap soye nahi abhi tak.."

geet thupped on bed, "wo mujhe na bahot bore ho raha tha..to socha aakar aapse bate karu.."

dadi maa rolled her eyes, "jab bhi aap aise aakar baithati..koi shaitan plan aap ke dimag me chal raha hota hai..so

wats going on.."

geet giggled cutely, "wo dadi maa..me soch rahi thi..ke aap ke khuranaji etne boring kyun hai.."

"khurana ji ??.."

geet corrected instantly, "mera matlab hai maan...maan ji.."

dadi maa smiled and sat beside geet, "wo humesha se aise hi hai..serious types..calm and quite nature..."

"okk.." geet smiled softly, "to kya aap ka man nahi karta ke wo aap se bate kare.."

dadi maa patted geet's head sweetly, "karta hai na..bahot man karta...ab umra hi kitni bachi hai..bas jo kuchh waqt

bacha hai..usse apno ke sath muskurate huye..aur hasi khushi bitana chahti hun..."

geet smiled and hugged dadi side wise, "aap aise kyu bol rahi hai...aap to abhi bhi etni jawan hai ke meri umra kam

pad jaye..."

dadi maa rolled her eyes, "subah se tumhe me hi mili kya ??.."

geet giggled, "arre sachhi dadi maa.."

instantly standing up, geet pulled dadi maa along wid her and started singing dramatically...

ae meri zoharajabi...
...tuze mallom nahi...
tu abhi tak hai hasi..
...aur me jawan...
tujhpe kurban..
...meri jaan..
...meri jaan...

geet and dadi maa danced sweetly on d song..finally thupping on d bed wid d laughter ...

*****************

abhi sat on d jhulla wid payal on his lap and her head resting on on his chest in soothing manner...

"tweety.."

payal smiled softly, "hmm.."

abhi pulled her even closer into his warm hug, "tumhe kya lagta hai..shadi ki date kab tak fix ho jayegi.."

payal pulled her face a bit out to face him, "ab jab dono parents milkar decide karenge..tabhi.."

abhi rolled her eyes, "oughh..aise nahi sweets..me puchh raha hun..ke tum kab chahti..1 month..2 month..ya fr..."

payal looked at curiously wid his trailing off words...

abhi smirked, "ya fir..dis week.." and winked at her...

payal was already turned pink but showed her cool self, "haah..u wish.."

abhi made annoyed face, "i wish..u dnt want our marriage dis week.."

snaking her arms around his neck, payal planted a cute kiss on his grumpy nose, "god..u look so cute wid dis

grumpy nose.."

abhi smirked, "achha ji.."

payal too smirked for a second..but could maintain it and burst into giggle..


abhi too giggled, "u know wat tweety..i can spend my entire life in dis moment.."


payal smiled sincerely and pecked his lips gently, "i love u.."

abhi smiled and pulled her closer into a protective embrace, "i love u more.."

*************

its been quite time since maan had landed on bed..but sleep wasn't giving in...sighed, he closed his eyes..but d

memories of d movie flahsed in front of him and unknown to himself, his lips curved into smile...

its weired but true..dat gal has sum magic to spread happiness n smiles wherever she go...pagal ladki..why did she

hav to choose comedy movie..poor bhai..unka toh pura plan flop ho gaya...

ye ladki bhi nahi..dadi maa ko toh perfect partner mil gaya hai..do shaitan ek team hai..god help...

maan rolled to another side...dat day wat happened to me..why dose tears in her eyes made me so

uncomfortable...wat i did was wrong..but why her i was so abondon on her staying...why i wanted to bring dat smile

back on her face...oughh..its just bcoz i made her cry..os wanted to make her smile..she looks sweet when she

smiles..dats it...

oughh..ye nind bhi nahi aa rahi...getting annoyed..maan dipped his face into pllow..when deir 1st meeting flasled

in front of him..d disaster she was..how could she expect me to beleive she is human...koi ped par chadh kar

mango khata hai kya..and too a gal..oughh...she had managed to drive me creazy wid absolute ease...and i didn't

call her motu dat day..i had just asked if she is camparing herself wid a ball on cricket...

god dis gal..pata nahi..bhabhi aur uski family kaise bardasht karti hai usse...ek taraf bhabhi hai...so sweet..so

cute..so sincere..aur ek taraf ye shaitan ladki...

and her pregnency...

d mere thought made maan snap open his eyes...

WATT D HELL

just wat on d earth is he thinking..why is he thinking about her..wat d hell is wrong wid him..grhh..maan u hav lost

it seriously..u need peace for god sake..how can u keep thinking about geet..dat dat..disastress...and whne u know

dat she is pregnent...dis issue in not simple...her family must not be knowing about it...agar ye baat faill gayi

toh...handa family k kitni badnami hogi...godd...i should talk to bhabhi about dis..wohi kuchh solutions nikal sakti

hai...

yes..i vil talk to bhabhi tom itself...

*****************

"geet..tell me clearly..wats cooking in ur mind..." dadi maa asked finally...

geet smirked naughtily, "ab ye toh kal hi pata chalega...bas aap ko maan ji ko rok ke rakhna hai..kahin jane mat

dijiyega unhe..."

dadi maa rolled her eyes, "waise bhi kal sunday hai..so he vil home only..."

"hmm.." geet thought a bit, "dats great.."

"kal ka plan kuchh toh batayiye.."

geet made naughty face and started to whisper into dadi maa's ear

dadi maa's eyes widened more n more as d plan registered her mind..

***************

MORNING

maan walked through d hall and made his way straight to payal who was sitting on sofa...

"umm bhabhi..mujhe aapse kuchh baat karni hai.."

geet and abhi along wid payal, dadi maa, and kavita looked at maan strangely...no good morning..no hii hello..and

straight away dis sentence...

abhi asked, confused, "kya baat hai maan..is all okay ??"

maan smiled weakly, "haan bhai..sab thik hai..bas bhabh se kuchh baat karni hai.."

payal smiled, "haan kahiye na veerji.."

"woh..yahan nahi..." den looked at geet, "yahan bahot bheed hai.."

geet looked at maan wid mouth wide open in anger...is he calling me bheed..hell..he is looking at me n calling

bheed..duffer..idiot...bas kuchh der aur bachhu...aaj to tumhe babaji bhi nahi bacha payenge..

dadi maa started her part, "kya baat hai maan..hum sab aap ko bheed lag rahe hai.."

maan sighed, "not u dadi maa.." and den purposely looked at geet, "sum particular u know.."

enough is enough..geet stood up annoyed, "khuranaji..did u by any chance talking about me.."

maan made mocking face, "and i had thought u r dumb.."

HELL

is dis a complement..or taunt...

grhh d idiot he is..alwz hell bent on confusing me...

geet looked at dadi maa making faces..

dadi maa smirked, "abhi nahi maan..tum baad me payal se baat kar lena..abhi kuchh imp kama hai.."

maan confused, "imp kaam ??"

"yes..we r playing a game.."

confused, kavita, "maa..aap kya keh rahi hai.."

"shh.." geet silenced every1 n continued, "basicaly we r playing kaun banega karodpati...i vil be asking

questions..so simply im AMITABH BACHHAN.."

maan knew it..game hai..to definitelt geet ka hi plan hoga..grhh..and he is trapped again..NO..

"im not playing any game.." maan stated..

abhi grinned, "im in.."

dadi maa looked at maan wid attitude, "r u denying me maan.."

maan made puppy face, "not dadi maa..me to is pagal ko mana kar raha hun.."

huh !! geet made gol-gappa face... "khuranaji..how dare u call me pagal.."

"kyun tumhe koi aur naam pasand hai...psycho.."

huh !! geet was about to pounce on maan but payal held her back, "geet..stop it now..we all r playing game ok...calm

down.."

kavita suppresed her giggled at maan's state, "maan bete..com on..its juts a game.."

poor maa..had no option...

geet sat on d chair while maan sat in front of her...

geet mocked, "r u ready to play Mr.Khurana ??.."

maan faked a idiotc smile, "do i hav option.."

geet smirked naughtily, "so lets play..kaun banega karodpati.."

every1 was so damn lost in d game like deir watching sum live cricket match..

geet asked 1st questions...

"ek hathi ke samne banana rakha hai...par hathi ne banana nahi khayan...kyu ??.."

maan looked at geet confused along wid every1...

geet continued...

" A - usse bhook nahi hai.. B - banana plastic ka hai.."

maan rolled his eyes, "its A - usse bhook nahi hai..."

abhi almost fell off couch lost in d game...but payal rolled her eyes and pulled him back..dadi ma slapped his head

for disturbing and while abhi made baby face and again concentrated on d game..

geet gave a thoughtfull dramatic look while maan wanted to grab her neck right dere for finding such innovative

ways for annoying him...

geet sighed, "its a wrong answer Mr.Khurana..d ans is C - hathi plastic ka hai.."

huh !! every1 started accusing for being so dumb..

maan stood up flabergasted, "wat d hell..option C to diya hi nahi tha.."

geet too stood up and grinned, "aye lo ..ek to me aapko paise jitane me help kar rahi hun..aapne puchh option C n D...apki responsibility hai puchhne k..aapne nahi puchha to mene bhi nahi bataya...aap paise jitane wale hai..me nahi..nwz..u r out..u earn 0.rs"

every1 burst into laughter while maan started at her in disbelieve..is she for real..ye bhabhi kisi alien ko to nahi

utha liya..how can she do dis..oughhh...disastress...

maan grumpy thupped on sofa while abhi sat on d chair in attitude...

geet smiled cutely, "ready jiju.."

abhi nodded wid cheeky smile and maan rolled his eyes...

geet asked den..

"jij...ek hathi aur cheeti jhagad rahe the..suddenly cheeti ne hathi ke kaan me jake aisa kya kaha..jisse hathi sharam ke bhaag gaya ??.."

every1 started to think again..while maan closed his eyes and thought of catching a sleep for sum time..

geet continued, " options A - me tumhara khoon pi jaungi... B - me tumse kabhi baat nahi karungi C - mujhe tumse shadi karni hai... D - me tumhare bachhe ki maa banan wali hun.."

maan's eyes snapped open hearing dat as he started at geet motionless..god..wat is se made up off..wat d hell is

she asking..agar aise questions kaun banega karodpati me puchhe gaye..to wo sho rod pe aajayega..

abhi started to think..so did others...

abhi sighed, "can i use life line..."

geet nooded her head, "aap ke paas ke hi life line hai..aap ye sab jo bethe hai..inme se kise ek se puchh sakte

hai..."

abhi smiled, "ok..i would like to ask dadi maa..as she is most experienced person here..."

dadi maa smirked and answer, "d ans is D - me tumhare bachhe ki maa banane wali hun..."

kavita rolled her eyes at her maa's antics and waited for geet to continue...

geet thought for a while and smiled widely, "u answer is right..congas jiju..u won...aap 10,000 rs jit gaye.."

abhi started to dance in happiness and so did others..while maan desperately needed to kill geet..if he wanted to

remain human..but poor he..

geet smiled cutely and looked at maan, "khuarana ji..dijiye 10,000 rs.."

maan looked at her baffled and so did others...

"10,000..wat 10,000 thousand.."

geet answered casucally, "arre aap haar gaye na..to punishment..ab chaliye..jaldi se 10,000 dijiye.."

maan stood up baby annoyed, "geet kaun banega karodpati me aisa koi rule nahi..."

geet rolled her eyes, "par ye rule to mene banaya hai..yahan par Amitabh Bachhan me hun.."

others giggled while maan held his head knowing he vil be mad soon..

"tumne mujhe aisa koi rule nahi bataya.."

geet made o-shaped mouth, "heyy babaji..aapne puchha ??"

maan made faces, "umm NO.."

geet smirked, "den..aap ko rules pehle puchhne chahiye the na as a player...ek to khud galati karte hai..aur fir

mujhe bolate hai.."

maan made baby cry face,

geet made cute face, "ab chaliye..dijiye 10,00 rs.."

poor maan had none option but to do d same..

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
so funny update
wow...i loved it
poor maan...hamesha fas jata hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww Bechare Maan , i loved the update
waiting for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update yaar
i was loughing in office while reading this update OMG !!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg..i'll get mad..im laughing like something..
where do u get theses ideas girl..
loved it..w8ing soon for next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omggg i just got a grip of NKB
ev
*dancing dancing dancing*

it just suprrr hillarious
i was rolling laughing like hell
alll the prts all the ups...just luving...

Luv Divzi
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Posted: 13 years ago
My god this was very funny i read your ff in one go very nice!!!
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Wow... A beautiful update
Fabulous

Geet ka dimag shaitan ka dimag hai.
Dont knw frm were she is like this.
I love geet character in this ff.

Maan phir se Phas gaya.
Geet Maan ki band bajake chodegi.
It was a hilarious update.
Rules of Kbc were amazing.

Continue soon. Will be waiting.
Luved it.

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