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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome dear
loved it
superb
loved geet 4 protecting maan
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey superb yaar...loved it...looking fwd.....
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..awesome..read 5 parts...
this is a mysterious story.and moving so fastly...
geet is ghost..omg..
it's really a diff story...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
looks like serious matters up
how could he be dead
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
When ll maan comes 2 know abt geet?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
Loved it
Geet is an awesome ghost :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet will not let any1 hurt her family...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome i just finished reading all the parts i just loved it
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago

A sweet ghost Part 6

Geet was restless in her room.
G:I have very less time.Before going i have to teach Hridayshalab a lesson.I want to save Maan's life.His life has to be safe.
Maan came inside.He looked upset.
M:Poor mamu.
G:What's the use of thinking about it?He won't come back.Right?We will go a movie..or to a park..
M:What are you saying?Mamu just expired.How can we enjoy?
G:But what's the use of crying inside the house?If we don't enjoy our present we may not be able to enjoy our future.
Maan found strange.
M:What is wrong with her?

Maan and Geet went out.From the road side Geet bought snacks.Geet tasted it.
G:Wow!Superb!

M:Really?
G:Maan...you should taste the food we get from road side.Really tasty.

We middle class people love it.
M:I don't think i will like it.
Geet's face became dim.
To make her happy he decided to taste it.
M:Ok...i will...
He took one.

He tasted it.
M:Really tasty.
Geet smiled:See...i told you.
He smiled.

G:Maan...shall we go to my house?We will sit under the banyan tree.
M:No Geet.After seeing a ghost directly i don't feel like sitting under the banyan tree.I am scared.Again ghost will come.
G:Ghosts are not going to eat you up.If i tell them not to attack you they won't harm you.Then...you should not forget that it's a ghost who rescued you from the goons.
M:So you believe that i was saved by a ghost?
Geet just smiled.
M:But i can't understand why they attacked me.
Geet in her mind:Maan...you don't know your mamu's true colour.He only sent them to kill you.
Maan's mobile rang.He attended the call.
M:Geet...i have an urgent meeting.I have to go now.So we will go to your house later.
Geet got disturbed.

At night...
Geet woke up from sleep.She saw Maan sleeping.
She in her mind:How long did i not rest under the banyan tree?I can't wait anymore.I have to go there.But if i am missing how will Maan react?
Geet lay on the bed and closed her eyes.Her soul came out from her body.
Her soul looked at the body:This body is given by our Queen to have a life here like human beings.Let it be here itself.
Geet's soul stepped out of the Khurana Mansion.Because of storm the leaves started flying.The leaves fell on her.
Geet's soul got scared:This is giving a hint that a black magician will come soon to catch me.

The next morning...
Maan saw Geet lying on the bed.
M:Geet...it's so late.Why are you still sleeping?

Maan tried to wake her up with his hands without knowing that her soul had left the body last night.
Geet did not move.Maan got scared.
He poured water on her face.
Still she did'nt wake up.He was shattered.He was in tears:Geet...what happened to you.Wake up.
Geet's soul returned.Seeing Maan's tears she felt upset and the soul entered her body.
Geet woke up.
Maan embraced her.
M:You scared me Geet.What happened to you.
G:I don't know Maan.I felt that i lost something from my body as if i lost my life.
M:Don't say like that Geet.I will die if you go.
It touched her heart.
She laughed:Maan...don't be stupid.I was in deep sleep.That's all.
M:Really?
G:Yes.
Maan was relieved.

Hridayshalab saw a lady draped in white saree outside through the window.He was impressed with her beauty.
He went out to follow her.Suddenly fire surrounded him.He was scared.Geet laughed loudly.Because of fire he could'nt understand that it was Geet.The fire vanished and Hridayshalab fainted.

The next day...
Gert entered Hridayshalab's room.Hearing anklet's sound from her leg he looked at her.He smiled at her.
H:Geet!
He extended his arm to touch her.She stared at him.Hridayshalab started moving upward.He got scared.Geet's face became scary.He fell on the bed.Again he moved upward.Geet laughed loudly.He fell on the bed again.
Suddenly Geet heard Maan's voice.
"Geet!"
Geet's face became normal.
Maan came there.
M:Geet...i heard a sound.
H:I was crying.You may have heard it.
M:Why did you cry?
H:Because...
Before he could complete the sentence Geet interrupted:I heard him cry and so i came here.He cried seeing a scary dream.
M:Nonsense!
H:No.
M:I heard an anklet's sound.
G:Anklet?
H:Maan...that is Geet's anklet.I heard it.I saw it on her feet.
Maan looked at Geet's feet.There was no anklet.
M:You are blind.
H:No.I had seen it.
M:Geet...come..we will go.Otherwise we will also become mad like him.
They both walk out.Hridayshalab noticed that Geet's feet were not touching the floor.
He went behind them.
H:Maan...i understood one thing.The ghost i saw at the pool side..the ghost who put fire around me was none other than Geet.Your wife is a ghost.She will destroy you.
M:What did you say?My wife is a ghost?
H:See..her feet are not touching the floor.
Maan looked at her feet.Her feet were on the floor only.
Maan lost his control and slapped him.
Geet smirked at Hridayshalab.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow superb me enjoying it lolzzz

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