A sweet ghost last Part Maaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pt2:pg 8 pt3 :pg 15 pt4:Pg21 pt5:pg30 pt6:pg38 pt7:pg45 Pt8:Pg 52


A sweet ghost Part 1

Khurana Mansion...
Maan Singh Khurana lives with his dadima,sister Anwesha who is called as Annie,uncle Nadesh and his son Hridayshalab.

Maan was praying in the temple.When he opened his eyes he saw a beautiful traditional beauty.The crowd covered her.So he could not see her any more.While walking out he saw her resting under the tree.She realized that his eyes were following her.So she walked away.

Another day...
Maan went to an ice cream parlour.There he was surprised to see that girl having ice cream.His eyes were fixed on her.
That girl:Waiter...give me the bill please.
Waiter:It's already paid madam.
She was shocked:What?Who?
The waiter pointed his finger towards Maan.
She went towards Maan.
She:Did you pay my bill?
M:Yes.
She:Why?
M:To interact with you.I knew that if i pay your bill you will come and question me.Anyways what's your name?
He turned back and said:Actually i have seen you before also.That time itself i wanted to talk to you.
He turned back to see her face expression.But she was not there.The others laughed seeing him talking alone.He was embarrassed.

Night...
Dadima was tense.
D:Annie has'nt come back yet.
M:Dadima...she went for excursion.Why are you scared?
D:She said she will reach tonight.But now it's mid night.But she has'nt reached yet.
M:Don't worry Dadima.You know our Annie.She is smart enough to handle any situation.

The next morning...
Annie came back.Dadima hugged her with tears.
Maan shouts at her:Where were you?Do you know how tense we were?Dadima was very upset.I hid my tension to console her.
A:Bhai...why were you all getting tense?I went for excursion.Right?
D:But you said you will come back at night.
A:I am sorry.The bus was late.What to do?
D:Anyways you came back.We are relieved.

Annie entered some photos inside her PC.
A:Oh!
Maan came inside.
M:What's the problem?
A:I took the photos of my new friend Geet.But the photos are not clear.She is not seen in the photos.I don't know what went wrong.I forced her to pose for the photographs.I told her that she is photogenic to convince her.But now how can i show these photos to her.
Maan laughed:You are the photographer.No wonder.
Annie was irritated:Enough bhai.
Slowly she smiled:Bhai...Dadima considers you as Krishna.She says that she wants a girl like Radha to wed you.Geet can be your Radha.She is so beautiful.Tomorrow you come to Caravan Ice cream Parlour.You can meet her.
Maan was not interested as the girl he saw had conquered his heart.
M:I am not interested.
Annie grabbed Maan's hand:Bhai..please...for my sake please come.

Maan could not go against her wish.
M:Ok.
He said in his mind:However beautiful Geet is i can never forget that beauty.

Annie and Geet were waiting in the ice cream parlour.
G:Annie...why did you call me here?You said you want to tell me something important.
Maan entered the ice cream parlour.
A:Bhai!
Maan came towards Annie.Suddenly his eyes struck Geet.
Maan and Geet were stunned to see each other.
A:This is my only brother Maan Singh Khurana.Bhai..this is Geet.
G:We have met before in this ice cream parlour.
Annie was surprised:Really?
Annie pulled Maan's leg:Bhai must have went crazy for your beauty and you must have scolded him for eyeing on you.
Maan was embarrassed:No...
A:I simply joked Geet.My brother is not that type.
G:I know.
A:Can you be his Radha?
G:What?
A:Actually i brought you here to show you to bhai.Did you like Bhai?Can you be the daughter in law of Khurana family?
Geet was shocked.Maan looked at Geet deeply for an answer.
She did'nt even look at his face.She was silent.

Without saying anything she walked off.
Annie and Maan became dull.
Maan was upset:I think she did'nt like me.
A:Bhai..it's ok.Dadima will find a Radha for you.
M:No.When i saw her for the first time itself i had decided that she will be my Radha.I want her at any cost.
Annie was shocked:Bhai!
M:I want to open my heart before her.Do you know where her house is?
Annie stammered:No.I don't know.I see her only in the college.
M:Then i will come to the college.
Annie was shocked:No bhai.Ours is a girls' college.Right?Men are not permitted to get inside.
M:Ok.Then i will wait before the college gate.
Annie was helpless before the self determined Maan.She could not stop him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u fr starting a maaneet ff...
but ghost?
is geet a ghost?coz she is not in d photo...if its den its bad...
starting is good...lets see wht is dere in store...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!gud start..
she s really a sweet ghost..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start
OMG geet is a ghost😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the new ff...

interesting start...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start
and Geet is so mysterious
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi
the up is good
so mann saw geet in the temple and for that very first look mann lost his heart
he again saw her next time in the ice cream parlour
he paid her bill in order to start a convo with her
and as he thought geet came to him
mann is falling for geet
where as here annie wanted to him to meet her firend
mann meet her firen who is non other than geet
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mummy kya starting hai yaar plz plz plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing start
is geet a ghost????
thanks for pm
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice concept dear...but Geet ghost hai toh kaise hoga Maaneet ki jodi!!!

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