Maaneet Os-**...Ehsaas...**...(Part 5...page 9)...LAST PART AND NOTE..

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so_hanikhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

awsum nashu.nxt jaldi update karna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

hei nice update... waiting for d next

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Rituja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Heya My puchku u wrote a OS OMG... Congrats yaar...!!!!

Uff Me loved its evry part... Awesum yaar...!!!!!!!

U did a gud job nash...!!!!

Luv ya sooo much..!!!!

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Nasioush

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Posted: 13 years ago

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HELLO GUYZZ...I HAVE POSTED THE PART 2...PHEWWW...ITZ REALLY SO CMPLICATED TO POST IT BY MOBILE...PHR V..IF U GUYZZ LYK ND CMNT,I LL B HAPPY...I LL GIVE NXT PART WHN I SAW HERE AT LEAST 30 OR 40 LYKS..ND CMNT TILL PAGE 5 OR 6...UMMM..JIADA TO NEHI MANGLIA NA...LOL..SO SEE YA GUYZZ..

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Divz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

luvddd it

aow geet lus him a lot n dat idiot goshhh

conti soon

❤️Divzi

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Vinsh23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

kya baat hai...possesive maan😉...superlyk it...👏⭐️
w8ing 4 next part puchku...love yaa..
continue soon..😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

awesome

loved it

too good

plzzz

do continue

i am waiting

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singh24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Like it dear. ... 😊

Plz cont...

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Nasioush

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Part 3 updating...at evening

Edited by Nasioush - 13 years ago

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Nasioush

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

PART 3...

...Maan luking at her widout blinking..geet cntinued hr talk..Ha maan..mujhe pata hai ap sab kch bhul chukeho..jitne pal hamne sath gujare sab..Par phr v in 2 mahinome apne 1 bar phr un Ehsaasko mahsoos krne k kaushish tak nehi ki..mujhe v samajne k kaushish nehi ki..phr v main kaushish krte gayi ki phrse apko woh pyar k Ehsaas mahsoos dilau par ap..geet cried mre..u knw maan once ur touch felt so peaceful to me..par ab woh kate k tarah chubta hai..coz thr was only ur hatered..ur anger..no luv....maan z still silent..he cant undrstanding why hr talking ripping hz heart..why..he pulld hr to hm..bgn to kiss hr nck..widout taking breath..geet clutch hz shirt..To geet u feel bad whn i touch u..to kyu ho tm mere pass..haa..chali jao dur...geet clsd hr eyes..to flow away the trs..kyuki meri dil me apke liye woh ehsaas ab v hai..i luv u maan...maan left hr..went out frm the rum..geet luking at hz walking out..clsed eyes..bt in 2 min she heard maans screem...GEEET...CONT BELOW