Maaneet Os-**...Ehsaas...**...(Part 5...page 9)...LAST PART AND NOTE..

Itz raining..Geet z standing near the window watching the rains..bt not enjoyning it lyk before..the sounds of rainfall echoing to her ear..bt it failed to reach to hr hearts..failed to give her happiness..filled her with exitement lyk before..because the storm which z running through hr lyf z bigger to handle than to enjoy the rain..the beauti of rainfalling z fade towards the black shadow of storm..the twinkling sound of rain z low towards the roaring of the storm..hr perfect lyf jst shatter dwn fr thz..it got broken into many pieces..the storm occured wid the car accident of Maan..he has lost all thoz moments they have passed togather..yes maan has frgotten hz geet..moreover he bcm mre furious,rough,..a man possessd by only anger..it bcm two months aftr hz accident..bt nthng remaind lyk before..Maan has accepted hr as hz wife bcz of dadi..bt no love reappear on hz eyes for her agn..they only reflect anger..no Ehsas refilld agn hz heart..it bcm rock hard..all she faced hz rough behaviour in thz days..she tried to make hm recall agn the love..bt it make hm more ferocious..geet closed hr eyez..a silent tr rolld dwn..a cold breeze tochd hr body..she rememberd hw hr maan made hr feel spacial wid hz 1 touch..bt nw when he touchd hr..thr z only rage anger..so cold lyk thz breeze..she z lost in hz mind so much th8 she didnt noticed..maan z already cme into the rum 5 or 6 min ago...

HELLO GUYZZ...THZ Z MY FRST WRK ON MAANEET HRE...DO HIT LYK AND CMNT IF U LOVE IT...COZ IT LL INSPIRE ME TO WRITE MORE...

PART 1--PAGE 1

PART 2--PAGE 2
PART 3--PAGE 5
PART 4-PAGE 7
PART 5--PAGE 9

nice ...

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

<font color="#cc0033">nice start but such a short one </font>

i knw dr...kya haina...thz z my frst wrk here...nd really so cnfused wid if...coz i m hre by phn...bt nxt i ll try to gve big part...:)

Guyzz...going to update part in 2 post..so do hit lyk nd cmnt at the end of 2nd post...

PART 2
...Geet z still lost in her own thought..blankly luking at the rain..other hand maan bcm angry to c geet z not noticing hm..itz bcm 10 min he has com hre..bt she didnt even give a luk..hw dare she to ignre hm..THE MAAN SING KHURANA...itz barely matter to hm tht she didnt noticed hm..bt aftr all she z hz so calld wife..so itz hr wifely duty..bt in hz heart thre z no feeling for thz girl...he hate thz gir..just HATES HER to the core..coz Whenevr he saw her..smthng..sm unknown Ehsaas pierce hz heart lyk niddle..he hate thz..moreovr she nvr say or do anythng for protest against hz troture..rough behave..hz words..the mre he shw hatred..aggresiveness the mre she shw love..typical grl he thought..he tuk step to hr..stud bhind hr..still geet z lost..maan fuming in angr..he snaked hz hand around hr waist angrily..pulld hr..hr bck hitted to hz chest..geet cm out frm thought..startled wid hz sudden appearence..action...CONT BELOW

CONTINUED..geet shigd in fear..bt hz anger nw not a big matter for her..she bcm habitual wid it..MAAN AP?.maan tightend hz grip.. KYU KISI OR K INTEZR KR RAHETHE..geet bcm silent hering hz roguh q..didnt ans..maan bit on hr nck..HA GEET BOLO KISIKA INTEZAR THA.. AGR HUA V TO..maan twirld hr around hlding roughly..KYA KAHA TMNE. HA MAAN KYA FADAQ PADTA HAI..maan hld her hair roughly..she winched..trs flowd..he kissd hr tr angrily.^^DONT SHW THM TO ME..THEY MEANT NTHNG..ND AS UR HUSBND,I POSSES U..U R MINE..SO NVER DARE^^.geet lukd at hm in teary red eyes.^^RYT MAAN,I M URS..PAR APKE HOKE V APKE NEHI..U R MY HUSBND,BT NT MY MAAN..WHO LUV ME WIDOUT CNDITION..HZ LUV WAS ELIXER BT NW THAT TRNED INTO VENOM.^^.maan left hr hearing thz talk aftr 2 mnths..luking at her..