Maaneet Os-**...Ehsaas...**...(Part 5...page 9)...LAST PART AND NOTE.. - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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[COLOR=RED]CONTINUED..

...Geet's heart skippd several beats..she bcm frightend why maan screamd..she ran outside..wht she saw..make hr shrickd..maan has fallen dwn frm stair..he bcm faint..hz head z bleeding profusely..geet too screamd..MAAAN..she ran dwn..sit bside maan..tuk hz head on hr lap..maan..ankhe kholiye..maaan..Dadimaaa..dadima cm out hearing hr scream..she imidiatly calld ambulance..they tuk maan to hospital..
in hospital..doc chckd hm..bandaged hz head..maan z still uncncious..he came out frm rum..to talk wid geet..mrs khurana..unke sarpe pehle v 1 bar chot lagneki vagese..ab kch keh nehi ja sakta..just pray..he went..Geet just bcm numb..she cried out..dadima cnsoling hr..bt hr heart z bleeding..Babaji..main ne 1 bar apne maan ko khyoa hai ab dubara nehi kho sakti..ap mere maan ko lauta do..main sab seh lungi..vas mere maan samne rahega..to main apse aur kch nehi mangungi..she cring...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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..helllo guyzz...so thr z part 3...me soo saddy wid amount of lyks...ummm...bt thnx guyzz who ve inspired me wid cmnt nd lyk..Nw do hit lyk buton nd cmnt guyzz..c ya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh thanx for update
now wt next regain memory or another twist
waiting for that
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely os dear
just read it
hope thsi time its ll well
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: valli22

nice yaar..but too short..
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I knw dr...thr z many technical prob...so perdon me dr...:))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part... w8ing 4 the next part,... OS ki ending hawwwttt krna puchku..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

superb update nashu.keep it up


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Posted: 13 years ago
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dhink chika dhink chika he he he
maan ki yaad dashat wapis aane waali hai
divzi predictions 😛

i luvddd dis part.,,,,,,,geet ka gussa...hayeelaaa suprrr mast
n maan left widout wrds...hehehe sumthin rare missy
n hospi scne was to much wowww
❤️Divzi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Will update at evening...
Edited by Nasioush - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4
me really so disheartend nd sad wid amount of lyk..bt who have lyk and cmn thnx guyzz..

...Geets trs flowing dwn lyk flood..the roaring of storm running inside hr,increasing nw..she nw feeling so guilty..she z thnking if she didnt say thz word,maan would neithr went out lyk tht not fell dwn..she closed hr eyes in pain..the fear of loosing maan agn made her numb agn..it seems lyk sm1 cutting hr heart into piaes..she recalld wht maan had said..TO GEET KYU HO MERI PASS CHALI JAWO DUR....She agn silently prayed to babaji..babaji..agr woh chate hai ki main unke pass na rahu to woh hi sahi..par ap mere maan ko aur dard na do..jitna dard dena hai mujhe dedo..bas unhe thk krdo babaji....she agn bgn to cry..dadima cnsoling her..Beta aise mat royie..sab thk hojayega....geet huggd her..sobbing..

In the mean tym maan regaining hz cncious agn..some blur image bgn to play in hz head..he tried to see thm clearly..hz head bgn to ache..bt nw the images getting colour..becoming clear..he recalld agn all those memory..which were hidden in thoz 2 mnths..he calld.. GEET..Geet felt so restless sitting outside..her heartbeat raised..she felt lyk smthng happend..
Doc chckd maan..shighd in relife seeing hm recovering..they come out to say thz to dadi nd geet..Mrs geet..he z fyn nw..go meet hm..geets heart filld wid sudden peace..he felt lyk sm1 pour water on her burned soul..dadi tld her to go frst..she went inside..saw maan lying..she ran towards hm..huggd hm tight..maan opend hz eyes..she kissd hm alover hz face..madly.. Apne aj mujhe darahi dia maan....she sobbd..maan smiled..To meri mishty darti v hai...geet lukd at hm in unbelief...CONT BELOW

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