~bandishein~ maaneet SS THREAD1 - Page 21

Created

Last reply

Replies

814

Views

211.8k

Users

231

Likes

4k

Frequent Posters

ExpectoPatronum thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update...
Get well soon take care...
sukklover thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago

...😛
why don't PMing me...😡😔😕
u done just ...👏👏👏
keep it updear...👍🏼
updates r ...⭐️⭐️
... 😃
just...😃
really ...😉
lots of ...4 u dear...
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only made it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲Confused.

Shimmerr thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
interesting one!!
continue soon!!
loved all the parts dear!!
get well soon!!
muskanp thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago
~bandishein~
PART 4
Both the families were very proud of their kids... especially the fact they didn't seem to get really pally or misbehave. Infact nothing had changed. Maan wouldn't even enter their house even if rano or brij invited him for a cup of tea.. he would sweetly thank them & get going.
It was yet another day. Maan was there at 4pm in front of her college main gate. He was kind of sure she won't be coming any sooner .. he relaxed & sat. as the time passed...beyond 4.15 he himself was getting little anxious. He stepped out
& looked at the main gate. He didn't know if it was a good idea to go in. he began to walk restlessly, it was 4.30 now. He didn't even have her number. He thought of asking someone in the college but dam he doesn't even know her stream or anything. Dam every passing min was getting little heavy on him. He closed his eyes & just prayed every thing was fine.
Around 4.40 he saw an auto stopping & Geet frantically jumping out of it almost in tears. She looked at him & tears just started flooding from her eyes. He didn't know how to react. He just got in the car & waited for her. She came running trembling & sat in.
crying continously.. I am really sorry '
I bunked the last 4 periods & went for the movie with friends
The movie got over at 3.30 lekinn hume koi auto nahi milli

she said the whole think in one go & started crying again wondering why would she say aomething like this to him. She is so dead now!!
I am so sorry '
he took the phone from his pocket
she looked at the phone & then at him in shock.. terrified. His expression was unreadable. She choked crying...
her eyes continued to pour when she saw him dialing Brij's number
plz.. nahi
plz Maan .. veerji bahut naraz hojayenge

she stuffed her duppata in her mouth the moment she heard her brothers voice
Maan ' brij, this Maan
brij ' sab teehk hain na
Maan looked at Geet
she shook her head petrified ..begging him not to say anything
Maan took a deep breath... Geet instantly closed her eyes. She just wanted to end her life right there.
Maan ' ji mujhe Geet ko pick karne main late hogaya.
Mujhe kuch kaam agaya tha
I didn't have her number
brij ' lekin abhi tho 4.45 ho raha hain
Maan ' ji
wo thoda dar gayen hain shayad
aap ussen se baat kar lijyen
aur wo hume puchne main der hojayegi

brij ' teehk hain
he gave the phone to her,
her hands were still shaking. Though she now clearly knew his intentions. It was only to inform brij that they will be late. Guess she overreacted, but then... she didn't know anything abt him & his reactions.
Brij ' Geet
Geet ' ji veerji
brij ' tum teehk hona
she wiped her tears ' ji
brij ' pagali, itni choti si baat ke liyen rone lag gayen
she looked at Maan
brij ' aacha abhi mo phoolen ke mat betna
she smiled
Maan sighed in relief.
After the call she returned the phone to him. Thanks she with a big smile
he chuckled & drove the car.
Geet ' aap bahut nautanki ho
he glared at her
Geet ' aap seedha seedha nahi bol sakten the, ke its ok.. main kitna dar gayen thi
he just smiled & continued to drive
Geet ' waisen I am really sorry for making u wait
mujhe nahi pata tha wanah se college ke liyen auto hi nahi miligi
.. her blabbering session continued until they reached the entrance of the community.
Maan didn't say a word until then. Suddenly he stopped the car short of the entrance. She looked at him bit confused. Did she say something wrong.. or did she talk too much. May be she did !! she began to curse herself.. they never spoke for 2 months & all of sudden she is talking so much... oh aab kya hoga
wat will he think of me. He think I was pretending all these days...
when he didn't say anything ' main kuch zyada bol gayen kya?
He pointed at her sneakers & looked at away. Her face turned all red in embarrassment.
She immediately changed her shoes. She was so dam ashamed. Wat will think of her now. How will she explain why she was wearing a sneaker.
Maan silently dropped her to her Mansion & went.
Precap
oops Maan in big problem
-PREV PART 3 NEXT PART 5-
hope u like it
please motivate me with ur comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
mishtib thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
hai yeh geet hai kya cheez
maan babu b careful


Edited by mishtib - 13 years ago
maaneetmaahi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!
muskan u r updating...😊😊
eagerly waiting dear...
i am so happy to see the updat
ing status
R U updating DA also????

tomorrow i hv my project's 1st presentation... and i am too exhausted from the preparations,but now ur updates will give energy to me dear...😉😉😉😉😉

waiting dear
maaneetmaahi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
ho u updated ..
going to read now...
Craziest_MG thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
aww...Maan is so sweet.

Nice update.
maaneetmaahi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update dear..
loved it...but its too short update...
finally someone made an attempt to talk...😆😆
thank u for the update muskan...😊
love u...😊


Shruthe thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

Maan is such a sweet heart... and finally Geet started speaking as her own self to maan...

cant wait for the next update..

and what is this about the scary precap??

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

1 years ago

Ineffable - Maaneet FF - Chapter 22 page 28 - 9/12/24 Ineffable - Maaneet FF - Chapter 22 page 28 - 9/12/24

Hi, so I'm bringing you all a new story because Bekhudi is nearing its end. Thank you my loyal readers for giving love to my previous ffs. I...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 47~07.08.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: WaveTeal

1 years ago

My First Crush * Maaneet TS * 🔺🔺UPDATED @ Page 6 || 28th Mar My First Crush * Maaneet TS * 🔺🔺UPDATED @ Page 6 || 28th Mar

M y First Crus h INDEX ~ A Maaneet Tale ~ CONTENTS : SHOT 1 - PART 1 Page 1 ~ Scroll Down PART 2 Page 1 ~ Scroll Down SHOT 2 : Scarlet Flames -...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS - Dillagi Thread 2 -Part 88 Page 49- 27/5/25

Dillagi Dil ki Lagi Jab Dil kho jata hai kisi aise mein Jo apna na hoke pe apna sa lagge. Jiski ek jhalak ke leye yeh nighein tarpati rahe Or...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet FF ~ ~Blessed to have U !!~ #6 Part 249 Page 56 on 27/5/25

!! Prologue !!! Akeli hi chal rahi thi is zindagi ki raho pe Na manjil or na raste ka tha kuch pata Rote bilkate le rahi thi saase kaise be Apni...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".