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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
maan saved geet from brij's scoldin session
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Posted: 13 years ago
I m liking this story very much...its really interesting
but y was geet wearing sneakers😕
precap😲... ab kya hua...
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was just awesome diii. plz update dhundlae aks too.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!...u have started another ff!:)
yippee!!!
just read all the parts now!
awesome!
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohhh!! Nice...finally...Geet kitna bolti hai na!! Aur sneakers pehen ke sneak kar movie dekhne chali gayi..wah..not very bholi bhali types haan...naughty naughty Geet!! And for a Change yaha Maan is cho cute!! Bechara falling in trouble!! Continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 4
nice part...
Geet jitna seedha dikhti hai utna hai nahi...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely concept...

and I loved all the 4 parts...

poor Geet...khamokham dara diya bachchi ko Maan ne...
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Posted: 13 years ago
muskan plz update the index here!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
~bandishein~
PART 5
He pointed at her sneakers & looked at away. Her face turned all red in embarrassment.


She immediately changed her shoes. She was so dam ashamed. Wat will think of her now. How will she explain why she was wearing a sneaker.
Maan silently dropped her to her Mansion & went.
She quietly went in to hers. Rano hugged her & kissed her consoled her. Brij got her new phone so that she could call them in case of any emergency. Geet went into her room & almost jumped up in joy getting a new phone. Raji & she explored the phone excitedly. Raji even expressed her jealousy bit
Geet giggled actually I should be thanking Maan
raji curiously asked ' how is Maan bhaya?
Geet sighed ' I really don't know.. but he seems nice from heart.
Raji didn't understand that ..
even Geet was bit confused... he never says anything ..but he notices every thing.

It was the week end. Raji & Geet were sitting with rano in the hall when jhanvi came almost crying & murmuring something.
Rano immediately eyed the girls to go in .. they went in.
raji curiously peeped out to over hear the conversation.
Jhanvi sunk in the couch breaking down into tears.. I don't know wat Maan is upto
rano got her some water
jhanvi had a sip ' mera beda bigada gaya rano
rano ' kyun kya huwa
jhanvi pulled out a pair of sneaker ' yeh dehko
rano ' Maan ken hain (muskan wondering wat rano even thinking when she said that😆😆😛)
jhanvi cried louder ' nahi uski car se millen hain
by then raji ran back in to Geet
raji ' Geet didi Geet didi.. wo Maan bhaya itna seedha nahi hain jitna dihk tha hain
Geet was taken a back
raji ' usken car se ladkiyon wallen sneaker millen jhanvi aunty ko
Geet was horrified.
She ran down wondering wat Maan told them abt the shoes
rano ' tumne Maan se pucha
jhanvi ' ussne ne tho cooly kah diya ki uske friend ka
Geet gulped her sliva
jhanvi ' usken friend ka shoes usken car main.. he babaji.. yeh kya hogaya!!!
yeh sab dehkne se phelen main mar kyun nahi gayen
she started with her melodrama
rano saw Geet standing there & looking at them ..
rano ' tum andhar javo Geet
jhanvi ' ek min Geet beta
Geet ' ji aunty
jhanvi thought for a min before asking ' aapko Maan ne kuch kaha hain kya
Geet ' nahi aunty
but then she had to do something abt it. She couldn't put him in trouble like this
Geet said very meekly ' aunty wo
Maan aisen nahi hain
jhanvi looked at her in hope
Geet ' ji wo tho kisi se baat bhi nahi karten
mujhe se bhi nahi
I am sure kisi ka galti se rahgaya hoga
that definitely made jhanvi feel better
rano ' haan jhanvi tum aisen hi Maan beta pe shak kar rahi ho
he is not like that
not that jhanvi didn't know abt her son but it off course feels much better when some one reassures u.

Geet did say a big sorry to him for have left her shoe accidentally in his car that. She was embarrassed at him catching her in the shoes that day & she didn't know how to react in that state of mind she totally forgot to slip it in her bag.

A year had passed & she was getting used to her college & the new place. The holidays went on well. Both of them didn't even see each other once in the break. The whole year she had learned ..he was silent ..
even during the community gathering & festive celebrations he would keep to himself. He attended all the events with his parents & stayed close to them all the while. He would politely speak to any one who would take an effort to speak to him but he won't take n effort to go & talk to any one. he rather sip his soft drink.
According to her they were close. Or atleast she was!!! he knew every thing wat she did & where she went. She even told him all abt the proposals she got in college. He would sweetly listen to every think with no judgment, just with an open mind. Probably thats why she never feared to tell him every thing.
Precap
Geet in love
-PREV PART 4 NEXT PART 6-
hope u like it
please motivate me with ur comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Opps me just came to see and see became your 1st comment Yeah Yeah Yeahhh

Maan kept quite but noticed every small thingeven her shoes yeh Maan bhi na patta nahi kiya kiya dekhta haThey were late because of her and she got new phonedefinitely Geet you should thanking Maan for thisJaanvi came to rano crying about Maanshe saw girl's sneakers tu es mein Maan kese bigad gayaGeet actually supported him

A year had passed and Maan was still silentonly listen to her and smile Itna Sharmela Maaan ya he liked to listen her Melodious Voiceand she shared everything even her proposals tooKab toote ga Maan ka Monvrath and we'll see him saying CHUP BILKUL CHUP
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Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago

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