'EK ANCHAHA SAFAR' Thread 2 Epilogue 29-5-12 - Page 2

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@all- thank you so much to you all lovely people for the love support and patience you all shower on me... here me posting a small part... me hell busy with the college plz bear with this short part and promise i'll go for a longer one...



Part 22:-


Maan:- what do you think?? Mai tumhe us aurat ke haatho me akela chhod deta'. No ways'.

Geet simply hugged him and wondered how many faces of her husband are left to come in front of her'

Maan said nothing just dragged her out of the place' Geet found Sanchit and chudail standing there'

Sanchit:- Maan what to do with her???

Maan shot a glare to Sameera and said

Maan:- police

Sameera:- what??? But what charge????

Adi:- for your kind information Ms Sameera Mehta your whole convo is recorded and after showing that to police will be enough without a word'

Sameera:- conversation???

Adi:- yes the conversation you made to Mrs Khurana. In the office conference hall and even on phone' we have each and everything against you.. but why am I elaborating it to you?? Maan sir may I call the police'

Sanchit:- adi call police right now.. I don't want her to create more disturbances in our lives'

Sameera:- no plz!!! I promise I'll not interfere in your lives again I promise'. Plz let me go' for one last time'.

Sanchit:- stop your crap!!! Adi call the police right now'

Adi took out the phone to call but suddenly Geet interrupted'

Geet:- wait Adi !!! I don't want to hand over her to police'

Maan:- Geet enough of yours' just shutup!!!

Geet:- no plz listen to me.. I don't want you to face the same police again which you did years back due to this girl' I just don't want her to interfere in our lives again and if she says she will not than I don't want intentionally to hurt her' because there is a difference between Sameera Mehta and Maan Singh Khurana and I want to maintain that difference'. Bhaiya leave her'. Its better we all remain happy in our lives'.

Maan:- but Geet!!! You don't know her' don't take any decision which you re going to regret later'

Geet:- plz meri baat maan lijiye'. I really don't want to even think about her or even hate her so let her leave our lives forever'

Maan:- as you wish !!!!

He shot a deadly glare to Sameera and went from there' Geet asked Sanchit to leave her and said'

Geet:- apne aap ko lucky samajhna ki mere Maan ko itna hurt karne ke bawazood mai tumhe chhod rahi hu qki tumhare andar na sahi par mere andar jo insaaniyat(humanity) hai na mai tumhare jaise logo ke liye use maarna nahi chaahti' so it is the best way for you to just leave from here and don't even dare to look back because you'll always find me standing beside my Maan'.

Sameera looked at her and left from there blankly'

Sanchit:- kiddo I don't think you did right'

Adi:- Haan Geet you only told me that woman is dangerous then how can you leave her like that'.

Geet:- bhaiya, Adi I don't know what I did is right or wrong but the only thing I want is Maan away from all this'. I need to check him out'..

Geet went behind Maan and saw him sitting in the car with his head downed to steering wheel' Geet was feeling guilty' she never wanted him to know anything because she knew he would be tensed' she didn't mean to dig his bruises but she hurt him unintentionally'. She went and sat beside him'

She kept her hand on his shoulder..

Geet:- I am so sorry!!!! I didn't meant to hurt you' sachhi' I just went far in the course of revenge and acted in childish manner' I am so sorry' I cant see you like this' I will pray to babaji that she will never return to us. But plz you don't take tension.. as long as I am with you nothing can happen to you'

Maan lifted his head in disbelief and shouted..

Maan:- I am not worried about myself damn it' I just don't want in any case she should move freely. She can harm you but why do you always do what you wish for'. I swear if she even touches you na then I would make her dead right then'

Geet was taken aback by his words' He was thinking about her at this moment too' she simply smiled herself and kept her head on his chest'.

Geet:- you know what ??? you are making the intentions of Sameera true'.

Maan:- Whatt???

Geet:- hmm If she wants to hurt me then you are the one who is making it real' because what hurts me most is the tension all over your face'. And you are doing the same thing'

Maan:- Geet kabhi to apna bachpana chhod do'

Geet:- aap apna budhaapa chhod dijiye' buddho ki tarah tension le rahe hai'. Mai ek gaana gaaun'

Maan:- Geet tum'

Geet:- Mai kya karu ram mujhe Buddha mil gaya' mai kya karu ram mujhe Buddha mil gaya'. Buddha mil gaya' Buddha mil gaya'.

Maan:- Geet stop it!!!

Geet:- Buddha mil gaya'

Maan smiled finally at her antics and she stopped and looked at him'.

She whispered in his ears

Geet:- hase to phase'..

Maan:- tum bhi na Geet'

They drove towards home'

Days passed Maan and Geet were busy with their office and were getting least time for home'. But they always try to maintain the decorum of their family time and try their best to be at home atleast to have their dinner with dadima'..

It was a Sunday.. Geet was cooking.. Maan was reading newspaper and dadima was sitting and was getting bore'.

she went to kitchen and asked Geet to accompany her to mandir'.

Geet agreed and asked Maan to accompany them' Maan was busy so he disagreed to accompany them' Geet and dadima went to Asmita's home and took her with them as Navya had gone for a school trip'

All three of them were heading towards mandir unaware of the pair of eyes following them'.. they went upstairs' As it was Sunday mandir was full of people'. Due to severe rush Geet asked Asmita to take dadima inside and she would get Prasad and puja ki thali' Asmita took dadima inside and Geet was moving near the steps when she felt a sudden push and she fell down the stairs' it got unnoticed by dadima and Asmi '. Everybody started screaming'. Asmita noticed the noice so she came outside leaving dadima and heard many people saying

P1:- ek ladki hai'.

P2:- shaadi shuda lagti hai'

P1:- bahut khoon beh raha hai'.

Asmita got tensed about Geet and ran to the stairs and saw her lying unconscious on the floor'. She ran to her shouting her name'

P3:- madam aap jaanti hain inhe'

Asmita:- she is my family damnit' somebody call ambulance' Geet Geet baccha plz open your eyes' geet'.

Someone called ambulance' Asmita informed dadima and dadima started panicking' it was getting hard to control things for asmi' she somehow pacified dadima and went with Geet to hospital'.

On the way to hospital asmi called Sanchit and Maan'. They both rushed to the hospital from their respective places'

Maan's monologue:-

I was busy watching my favorite business news because if my wife would be at home she never let me watch it' while having engrossed in the latest news I saw my phone ringing' it was di'.

I smiled and picked up the phone'

Maan:- hey di'.. hwz u???? aaj apne bhai ki yaad kaise aayi???

Asmita:- Maan''

Di was sounding low and tensed.. I got a lil afraid' I asked

Maan:- di what is the matter??? Are you okay??? Pari??? Jiju??? Is everything fine di plz speak'.

Asmita:- Maan tu abhi Apolo Hospital pahunch Geet ka accident ho gaya hai' plz jaldi '.

I was too numb to speak anything.. My world was stopped at that moment' I could clearly listen to my loud heartbeats of sinking heart'. Everything come in front of me and I felt as if my own world was shattering like a breaking glass in front of me and I felt helpless because it was the question of my love,my life my Geet how could I be so senseless and then only from somewhere inside i heard a voice'

Voice:- no Maan' not now' she needs you'. You have to be strong for her.. go Maan go !!!

I didn't think for even a fraction of second and rushed towards the hospital'

Monologue ends

Maan reached hospital and rushed to see her'he found asmita and dadima sitting on the waiting chairs he went towards them' Asmita saw him and hugged him'.

Asmita:- I am sorry Maan'. I am so sorry' mai teri geet ka khayaal nahi rakh paayi'

Maan:- nahi di' I know you love Geet as much as I love her'. Plz stop crying' geet once told me she cant bear you crying' so for her plz stop crying'

Asmita:- Maan humaari Geet????

Maan:- kucch nahi hoga geet ko.. mai use kucch nahi hone dunga' di sambhalo apne aap ko'

After few hours no one knew how many of them'. Doctor came out'.. Maan rushed to him and asked

Maan:- Dr. My Geet????

Doctor:- relax Mr. Khurana' mrs. Khurana is fine now.. just she has suffered a serious fracture in her left leg'. She is very weak due to heavy blood loss isliye she is still sleeping'. She needs proper care'

Maan:- I will'..

She was shifted to a ward' she was still unconscious.. Maan sent Asmi and Dadima home to take some rest and he sat beside her holding her hand'.

Precap:-

Dadima:- I saw Sameera in mandir

Maan overhears'.



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NEXT:- Part 23

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago

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